英语短文改错

英语短文改错

(一)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.

（二）I have a good friend who?s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she words very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor?s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help

（三）I often dream of a teacher, I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls . I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher.

You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well .What is more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only in this way can you be good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true. （四）It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew that everything would be all right. There are many more happy memories of the week that I will keep them with me forever. I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the fishing trip. It was such much fun.

（五）I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool, or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of you had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. It

has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

（六）During the summer of 2001, I started read books in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new words from these books, but I had terribly problemsmemorizing them. I had to look up to the same word many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was a great achievement for myself. I started writing down words from books that I read. I would come back from school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down new words and added it to my collection. By the end of last year, my collection has grown to 3,000 words.

（七）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn?t wait for the Spring Fe stival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, …It isn't a good time to do that, dear.? At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”（八）There are advantage for students to work while study at school. One of them was that they can earn money. For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allow

them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.

（九）Dear Mr. Brown ,

I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later. I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “If you try to ,you can be No. 1!” I hope you?ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.

Yours sincerely,

Li Min

（十）Dear friends,

It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been member for a short period of time, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful, Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I

am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! Thank you.

(一)

Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can?t live without friendship just like we can?t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kinds of difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to come by, true friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourself. (二)

Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. That is why sports are good activities for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.

(三) I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we?re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.

(四) It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007．I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn?t stop and drive off at full speed heading west．I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was

AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．

(五)I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use

of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I?ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can?t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day?s

hard works.Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn?t be forbidden to watch TV. (六)Dear Mr. Johnson,

I?ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I?ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that

your company is very famous and I?ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone numberis 027-********．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

(七)Dear Robert,

Thank for your letter of May 12th. How glad I was when I get it. I?d be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to you. I?m a boy student agedseventeen, study in Seni or Three of Hongqi High School. I?m a monitor of my class. I am about to take the National Matriculation Entrance Test after twenty days, that is, between June

7 and 8．You know, I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day.

Best wishes！

Yours truly,

Li Hua

(八)One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she could n?t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn?t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor?s letter. So the woman went to chemist?s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not. (九)Have you ever heard the saying: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy? What this means is if you study all the times you will become a boring person．You must go out and havea fun with your friends, otherwise you?ll lose them．No one wants to be friends with anyone who only talks work and study．Perhaps you have a confidence problem．Please try remember what the work you do is for yourself but no

one else．You don?t have to compete for your classmates．No one could be happier in studying seven days and seven nights.

(十)

Our class held a discussion about that whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided. Most of students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. However, after hard study music can bring us relaxation, which reduce the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listen to music also makes us feel happy. On the other hand, some students didn?t think so. In their opinion, they can?t get the expecting effect from playing music, for the class break time is too short. What is needed most during the class break is peace instead noise produced by music. In my opinion, it is good to play some soft and peace music during the class break. In

this way students can enjoy music as good as have a good rest.

(十一)

One day some people on the shore heard the cry for help. They ran up to the sea. A soldier jumped into the water and swim to the man who was calling for helps. The young soldier was a good swimmer and soon pulled the man back the shore. He took the man in the arms and carried him out water. All the people there admired to the young man. Now everyone saw

what the man was a very wealth man in the city. Then he went up the soldier and gave the soldier one pound for save his life.

(十二)

Jim arrived at home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find a open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not know how to do. Kate, his wife, had obvious gone out. He didn?t know where she had been or when she?d return. Finally, he picked up a stone and threw them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back.

(十三)

I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I?m sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn his radio down. When she gave a party she isn?t have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down almost paralyze(瘫)with their legs trembled . Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.

(十四)

A few days ago I saw a interesting program on TV. There was about the problem of traffic. It seems that a great deal damage is done by traffic. All our cities are suffered from this. Some buildings are falling to piece. It?s often faster to walk than to go by car and by bus. The problem has been getting bad for a long time. This was only one among thousands of other problems in our cities. All of sorts of bad things are happening to our cities. Our roads are never designed for so heavy traffic. It takes longer and longer to move from one place to another.

(十五)

In the past my hometown was the most beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could be seen anywhere. In order to build more house and grow more crops, people cut down much more trees. As time went on, the whole forest was almost destroyed. Gradually, the green hills turn wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from which we were suffered lot. But I do wish all the people could realize the terribly disaster caused from man. What?s more, we should take good care of our nature and punish those who against the law.

短文改错参考答案:

(一) 1. important 或importance前加of 2. like--as 3. getting----get

4. kind---kinds

5. easy前加not

6. sincere

7. understanding

8. persuaded 9. more前加the 10. ourselves

(二) 1. and --- but 2. woman --- women 3. called前加have 4. play --- playing

5. of 后加the

6.health --- healthy

7. If --- When

8. of划掉

9. make---makes 10.watch--- watching

(三) 1．sure --- sure about 2．exact --- exactly 3．has --- have;

4．a 去掉5．去掉it 6．had --- have 7．review --- reviewing．

8. practice --- practicing 9．problem--- problems 10. will 后加be

(四) 1. in---on 2. while---when 3. sides---side 4. made---make

5. she---he

6. drive---drove

7. young前加a

8. wore---wearing

9. later 去掉10. passed---passing

(五) 1.about---with 2.view前加the 3.fully---full 4.me---her

5.I?ll后加be

6.eye---eyes

7.watch---watching

8. works---work

9.had---has 10.and后at划掉

(六) 1. wanting---wan ted 2. being---be 3. Hebei前the划掉4. the前in---from

5. good---well

6. special---specially

7. doing---do

8. Beside---Besides

9. As---at 10. I?ll后加be

(七) 1. Thank---Thanks; 或for 前加you 2. get---got 3.friends---friend 4. me后加to

5. study---studying

6. a划掉

7. about划掉

8. after---in

9. very---so 10. fully---full

(八) 1. invite---inviting 2. families---family 3. careless---carelessly 4. the help---help

5. too---either

6. able---abl e to

7. chemist?s---a chemist?s

8. but---and 9. eat---take 10. will---would

(九) 1．heard--- heard of 2．is --- that 3．Times --- time

4．a 去掉5. anyone --- someone 6. Talk --- Talk about 7. try --- try to

8．What--- that 9．For---with/against 10．Happier--- happy

(十) 1. that划掉2. students --- the students 3. However --- Besides

4. reduce --- reduces

5. Listen --- Listening

6. didn?t --- don?t

7. expecting --- expected 8. instead--- instead of

9. peace---peaceful 10. good---well

(十一) 1. the cry---a cry 2. swim---swam 3. helps---help 4. back--- to

5. out---out of

6. admired to --- admired

7. what --- that

8. wealth --- wealthy 9.up --- up to 10. save --- saving

(十二) 1. at home---home 2. has --- had 3. waiting --- waited

4. not --- no 或not --- not any

5. find a --- find an

6. he ---and he

7. how --- what 8. obvious ---obviously 9. been --- gone 10. them --- it

(十三) 1. recent --- recently 2. been 划掉3. his --- her 4. gave---gives

5. isn?t --- doesn?t

6. in her --- to her

7. a certain --- certain

8. trembled--- trembling 9. tail --- tails 10. that --- if

(十四) 1. a --- an 2. There --- It 3. deal --- deal of

4. suffered --- suffering

5. piece --- pieces

6. and --- or

7. bad --- worse 8. was --- is 9.All of --- All 10. so --- such

(十五) 1. the --- a 2. anywhere--- everywhere 3. house --- houses

4. much ---many

5. turn --- turned

6. we were --- we

7. And --- So

8. terribly --- terrible 9. from man --- by man 10. who --- who are

1）第一行：in 改为out 第二行：had 后加not 第三行：easy 前加an；去掉for 第四行：from 改为of 第五行：opening 改为opened；answer 改为answers 第六行：but 改为so 第七行：don’t 改为didn’t 第八行：punish 后加me （2）第一行：who’s 改为whose . 第二行：去but 第三行：on 改为in ；talk 后加about 第四行：was 改为were；homeworks 改为homework 第五行：stopped 后加to 第六行：find 改为found第七行：immediate 改为immediately 第八行：去掉the（3）第一行：dream 后加being/becoming 第二行：give 改为giving；but 改为and 第三行：was 改为am ；there 改为it 第四行：knowledges 改为knowledge/learning第五行：learn 改为teach 第六行：him 改为them；be 后加a 第七行：去掉as（4）第一行：me 改为you 第二行：in 改为with；a改为an 第三行：But/Yet第四行：smile 改为smiles 第五行：去more 第六行：去掉them第七行：saw 改为seeing 第八行：like 改为liked；such 改为so . （5）第一行：去yet. 第二行：去were；early 前加an 第三行：us 改为ourselves 第四行；helpless 第五行：swimming 改为swim第六行：treat 改为treated；you 改为us 第七行：other 改为others；when 改为since（6）第一行：read 改为reading，或前加to 第二行：terribly 改为terrible .第三行：去掉to；去掉for 第四行：do 改为did 第五行：myself 改为me；books 前加the 第六行：and 改为or 第七行：it 改为them 第八行：has 改为had （7）第一行：boy 前加 a . 第二行：去掉when；cooker 改为cook 第三行：but 改为and；第四行：wait 后加for；take 前加to 第五行：Shake 改为Shaking第六行：apologize 改为apologized；me 改为myself 第八行：month 改为months（8）第一行：advantage 改为advantages；study 改为studying 第二行：was 改为is 第三行：working 改为work 第四行：allow 改为allows；去掉if第五行：would 后加not 第六行：by 改为with；去掉to 第七行：our 改为their (9)第一行：with 改为for 第二行：not 改为no；terribly 改为terrible第三行：year 改为years；English 后加is 第四行：去掉of第五行：去掉to；pleasant 前加a 第六行：sometimes 改为sometime第七行：take 改为took(10)第一行：real 改为really 第二行：weekend 改为weekends第三行：member 改为members；去掉第二个a 第四行：去掉much第五行：and 改为but；his 改为their 第六行：interested 改为interesting 第七行：greatly 前加have；see 改为seeing