高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一) (1)

续写积累

姓名：______________ 班级：_______________

一、环境描写的素材

环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。

客观环境描写：

Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道

the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）

the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）…

Part 2 环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求

一)．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）

1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。

2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。

3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。

4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷风吹拂过我的头发）

The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.

（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）

二)．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)

声音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.

在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。

颜色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。

3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.

离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。

4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)

三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)

1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.

天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云

2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立

主观环境描写：

1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）...

2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）

3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此....以至于

4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/

sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了

5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像…

二、场景描写的素材（来自原著：追风筝的人）

1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier.

（放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述）

空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。

2.The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。

3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. （场景、比喻）

我抬起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在当成家园的城市。

4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.（场景、比喻）

天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。

5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.

在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。

6. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.（天气）

到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。

7. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）

太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。

三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感

一)、情感好词：

1.喜乐

① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。

② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。

④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。

⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。

⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。

⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。

⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。

⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。

? Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

? She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。

? Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。

? She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。

? Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。

? Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。

? I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。

? Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。

2.愤怒：

① I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。

② He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。

③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。

⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。

⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。

⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。

⑨ He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。

⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。

3.悲伤烦恼

①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。

② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。

③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。

④ H earing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这

个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。

⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。

⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。

⑦ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.

我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。

⑧ A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。

⑨ They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。

⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。

? He brimmed over with sorrow when...他满是悲伤……

? They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。

? These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。

4.害怕：

①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。

②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。

③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧……

④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。

⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。

⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.

他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。

⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.

她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。

⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.

她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。

5. 感动：

① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们……

② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。

③ With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……

2021高考英语读后续写素材积累(好用)

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高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一) (1)

续写积累 _______________ 班级：姓名：______________ 一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描 写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：adj环境描写的要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道Part 1 the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）（鸟鸣）蓝天）the songs of birds the blue sky(（青the green grass;娇嫩的花）（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the fragile flowers (…/冉冉升起的太阳）落日草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(）要求verb Part 2 环境描写的（vi&vt blow/click/howl/wail/roar)一．Wind （）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.冷风吹拂过我的头发）(The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)．二)1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.声音：在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear 颜色surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。 3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。,离此不远 4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 1.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 1 主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done... 某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 被）//听到感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/某人看到3.It was so adj that we find/feel ....以至于它是如此4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed// /惊讶景物使我如此陶醉sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像… （来自原著：追风筝的人）二、场景描写的素材. like paper sharks roaming for prey1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, , and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun the number doubled Within an hour, was perfect for kite flying, The wind A cold breeze wafted through my hair. in the sky.

高中英语读后续写好句素材整理-英语续写素材整理

What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?） More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。 常见故事高潮示例： 1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ." 文学名著中的一些故事高潮 1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚） 2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼） 3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪） How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？) 方法1.增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。 1）角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异, 竞争需要等) 如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why

高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一)(1)

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