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为配合我县开展“创建卫生文明城市(build a civilized and clean city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：1. 衣着整洁；

2. 保持环境卫生，不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾；

3. 待人有礼，乐于助人；

4. 遵守交通规则；

5. ……

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；

3. 词数：80-100词左右。

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized and clean city, we students should____________________________ 【参考范文】

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive

书面表达训练

假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友Tom的来信。他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一封回信，介绍你校的做法并发表你的看法或建

议。

(2) 词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：安全意识awareness of safety 登记register(vi.) 保安security guard Dear Tom,

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

____________________________________________________________________________ We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

So far many measures have been taken to ensure the students’ security in and out of our school. The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized several school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety about food, traffic and so on. By communicating with parents often and in time, our school can supervise and ensure our safety. Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty. Stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. The students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. For example, once we smell something unusual, we should report it to the school guard immediately. In my view, our school has been doing pretty well and we are looking forward to more effective measures.

We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.

【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】

读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Have you been asked for money by some beggars who have disabilities while you’re enjoying shopping? Do you have any pity for that kind of people or just feel afraid? For whatever reasons，the number of disabled beggars bumming(乞讨) along the street has increased rapidly.

Why are there so many disabled people begging in the street? The reasons are so various that we don’t need to understand.But at least，we know that they do not lead an easy life.So we should help them in some ways.

The treatment for disabled people should go like this: First，accept them.Don’t be afraid of looking at the terrible shape of disabled.Try to treat them equally.Because they are a part of the society，and we can’t abandon them.The second is to help them as much as we could.If you can be a volunteer and do some work for the disabled people，that would be very nice.That does good not only to disabled people but also to yourself，because you will feel good after your kind action.

So give an air of warmth to disabled people，and the world would be much better.

写作内容

1．以约30词概括短文内容要点。

2．以约120词就“How to Care for the Disabled” 这一话题发表你的看法，并包含如下要点：

(1)对待残疾人的正确态度；

(2)举例说明我们应该如何帮助残疾人；

(3)残疾人也应该享受平等的权利。

写作要求

1．可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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读写任务【参考范文】

Though the passage doesn’t uncover the reason for disabled beggars increasing，it points out how to treat the disabled—not only should we accept them，but help and show warmth to them，making the world much better.

As is well known to us，many disabled people struggle to keep alive in our country.So not only should we hold a right attitude towards them，but also do them a favor practically.But how to help? First，we able-bodied people must understand，accept and respect them.Don’t avoid meeting them because of being afraid of their ugly，terrible outer appearance.

Second，we can make their daily life much easier and more convenient by doing many small things such as opening the doors，showing them the way，leading them across the street，picking up something for them and giving our seats to them in public places and in a word we should help them as much as we can.

In short，if all of us offer our love and show warmth to them heart and soul，they can also live as rich and full a life as we do.Our world is bound to become more beautiful and harmonious.

2016书面表达训练

假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：

1．礼物选择；2.你的理由；3.其它和解建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom，

I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.

_________________________________________________________________________________

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