09年6月英语六级考试必背十大范文(9)

09年6月英语六级考试必背十大范文(9)
yuebanming10 2009年05月26日12:15 来源：可可英语网 点击 2323次
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、 我最喜爱的小说是....
2、 该小说的内容
3、 我为什么喜爱
My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.

This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.
From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.
09年6月英语六级考试必背十大范文(10)
yuebanming10 2009年05月27日13:13 来源：可可英语网 点击 4064次
要求：
Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not? Your composition should be based on the outline given below. Your composition should be at least 150 words.
Outline:
1. 有人赞成个人买车。
2. 也有人持相反观点。
3. 你的看法。
6. Should People Own Cars or Not?
范文一：
There is no denying the fact that it has been a hotly debated topic in China whether people should have their own cars. People’s opinions differ sharply on this issue. Some hold the positive view. They say that the car provides the most convenient form of transportation. Besides, a car is a comfortable way to travel, especially in winter. Finally, a driver is usually safe in his car when he is out at night.
Others, however, hold the opposite view. They say that there are many disadvantages to owning a car. For one thing, it can be very expensive to purchase and run a car. For another, owning a car can also cause worry and stress. It is exhausting to drive a car in heavy traffic. What is worse, cars are responsible for most of the smog in cities, which pollutes the environment seriously.
In spite of all the above mentioned, I still favor owning a car. The reason is that the car gives a person the freedom to schedule his own time. Though we are confronted with a problem of energy crisis, I am sure that the real solution will have to be a new kind of car, one that uses cheap, efficient fuel and does not contaminate the air.
范文二：
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have become car owners. Yet ther

e is no consensus on the development of private cars. Some people hold the positive view. They say that the car is the result of modern science and technology and everyone is entitled to enjoy it. They also argue that the development of private cars will vigorously stimulate the development of other industries and the whole national economy.
Others, however, hold the negative view. They point out that the increasing number of cars have led to a series of problems. First, they result in air pollution, which seriously damage people’s health. Secondly, too many cars on the road easily lead to traffic jams, which actually slow down the pace of life and work.
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. The government should put a ban on the development of private cars and exert more efforts to develop public transportation, such as buses and subways. In this way, we can both enjoy efficiency and a clean environment.
2009年6月英语六级考前热点高分范文[1]
yuebanming10 2009年05月25日12:06 来源：无忧考网 点击 1179次
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议
Credit Cards on Campus
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
高分范文
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some prefere

ntial policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
【亮点点评】
　[1]“越来越流行”。
[2]“随着”，介词。
[3]“越来越多的”。
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句。
[7]表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。
[8]“由此，因此”。
[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card.
临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。
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2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.
临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。
3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。
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【KEY】
1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society.
2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment.
3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.
09年6月六级考前热点范文(2)
yuebanming10 2009年05月26日12:19 来源：可可英语网 点击 781次
题目要求：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两

种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。
范文：
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
佳句亮点：
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
2009年6月英语六级考前热点高分范文(五)
yuebanming10 2009年05月15日14:11 来源：无忧考网 点击869次
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力
2)大学生缓解压力的方式有…
3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个

问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。
高分范文
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. [1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. [2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.
[3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. [2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. [2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. [2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. [2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.
[2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. [4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job object tion. [2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.
【亮点点评】
[1]although引导让步状语从句。
[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[3]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[4]表示目的。
[5]“扬长避短”。
[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。
[7]动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。
[8]“超出…范围或能力”。
[9]强调动词believe。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.
临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。
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2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve
临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。
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3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages
临摹： 为了在激烈

的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。
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【KEY】
1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it.
2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society.
3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities in an all-around way.