A Country Life

Score: 83

A Country Life

At present,more and more people dream of the country life.For the reason that the environment is good for our health.On the one hand, the countryside is very quiet with the air clean and fresh. What's more,the river is clean, I going fishing and eating seafood every day.On the other hand,it is very relaxful for my parents that they don't have to get up very early to go to work.Then,they have much time to play with me.I never feel lonely more.Thus,I like living in the countryside very much!

On the contrary, with the development of city,the environment become dirtier and dirtier.There is hard for finding jobs because of a large population in big cities. Thought the transportation is convenient and we can get good education in cities,I can't stand for living in a place with littles here and there.

In conclusion,the leisure and comfortable life in the countryside appeals to us,doesn't it?

Professor's comments and suggestions:

1. Good job.

2. Your work seldom digressed from the keywords for this subject（主题）.

3. An examination（核计）of the total words in this article you produced

supports my prediction（预见）that the length would be really nice work.

This essay offers a worthy（值得的）enlargement（扩展）on this assignment.

4. You exhibit spelling problems. Always pay attention to spelling tips you are

given.

5. You display some shortcomings（错误）in grammar. Remember to work to

minimize（努力减少）grammatical errors.

6. I have just noted some spelling and grammatical errors in your assignment.

Please explore the issues you are having.

7. You have made my day by turning this in before I got anyone else's.

Usage:

●assignment：作业。英语里，assignment、composition、creation、manuscript、

submission都可表示“作文；作业”的意思。

●digress from：偏离。digress的意思是“偏离”，一般和介词from搭配使

用。除了digress之外，也可以用drift, deviate, diverge表示同样的意思。

●display：显示。display还可表示“展示；夸耀”的意思。

●exhibit：展现。exhibit还可表示“展览；展示”的意思。

●explore：仔细阅读。explore还可表示“探索；考察”的意思。

●make my day：使我十分高兴。make是不规则动词：make, made, made。

●note：注意到；留心。

●offer：呈现出；表现出。offer 还可表示“提供；提出”的意思。

●pay attention to：注意；当心。

●produce：完成。也可用finish, complete表示同样的意思。

subject：题目；主题。subject还可以表示“学科；课程”。

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基本信息

所得分数82.53

关键词数 5

关键词排名等级 B

文章长度170

长度排名等级 C

拼写错误 1

语法评价 B

作业提交时间2014-09-22 下午05:35:26

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结构信息

单词总数95

词重复率 1.79

单词类别*72, 8, 5, 9

平均词长 4.32

平均句长34.00

*“单词类别”指的是“常用词汇”、“次常用词”、“学术词汇”、“其他词汇”四类单词。