六级写作指导
写作框架
第一段
现象句模版
1. A public debate has arisen concerning …
2.Recently, the problem of …has aroused people’s concern.
3.It should come as no surprise to learn that…
4.Nowadays, people in growing number are being to complain that …
5.One of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on…
6.One of the pressing problem facing our nation toda y is …
7.Never before in history has the issue of …been more evident than now.
8.…is a new and bitter truth we must learn to face.
9.There is a general discussion these days over…One of the questions under debate is whether …
10.There is a growing worldwide awaren ess of …
11.Whether …is a good thing or not is very popular topic, which is often talked about not only by
city residents but by farmers as well.
12.For years, extensive research efforts have been focused on …
13.…is a delicate problem with which our country is co nfronted.
14.Recent years have been a tendency that increasing number of …
15.Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is …
16.The prevalence of …has been a big problem in our society. Almost every day newspaper carry
articles pertaining to problem. Despite measures have been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.
17.Not a single day passed without the report of …
18.There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards…
19.Recently, an increasing number of reports about …have appeared in the media.
20.There is no denying the fact that …is an extremely serious problem.
原因过渡模版
1.Why? There are a number of factors accounting for this phenomenon.
2.Many reasons should be responsible for this unpleasant situation.
3.The main reasons probably lie in the following points.
4.There’s no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency whi ch involves several complicated
factors.
5.What is to account for this? Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.
6.Couple of factors gave rise to this tendency nowadays.
7.Explanation for this problem involves many factors.
8.The main reason rests with the following aspects.
9.Several factors spawned this phenomenon.
10.The deep root of this phenomenon lies in the following aspects.
11. A multitude of factors could contribute to the phenomenon.
数据模版
1.from a close study, we learned that…
2.as an observation indicated that…
3.according to a survey conducted among a group of people, …
4. a recent investigation shows that …
5. a brief inquiry demonstrates that …
6.all reliable information points to the fact that…
7.according to the figures given in a recent poll, …
8.according to a statistics, …
9. a questionnaire suggests that…
利弊衔接句
1.…is more disadvantage.
2.The disadvantage far outweigh the advantage
3.Its disadvantages carry more weight than its advantages
4.As far as I am concerned, I trust the disadvantages exceed the advantages.
5.It does more harm than good to…
（对比法）
Recent years have been a tendency that an amassing number of workers were laid off for a series of reforms are implemented in the state-owned enterprises. In the past, few workers had been laid off for this kind of reason. What brings this result?
亮点1：more and more
An accumulating number of
A gathering number of
A increasing number of
A mushrooming number of
…in mounting numbers
A surging number of
An amassing number of
the number of…is on the rise/ is accumulating/ is surging
Nowadays, one of the most serious problems many people talk about centers on accumulating number of college students are encumbered(confronted)with the increasing amount of pressure
亮点2：not 的不明显原则
Hardly/ rarely/ scarcely/ barely/seldom
But just decade ago, hardly had any university students experienced this kind of tension.
There has been undesirable trend in recent years that a decreasing number of citizens, esp. teenagers step into libraries to read and to
reading room for
亮点3：people 的替换
citizen, inhabitant, dweller, resident, teenager, youngster, staff, employer, employee, teacher, instructor, trainer, student, pupil, individual, adolescence, clerk, officer, entrepreneur …
亮点4： A lot of 的替换
A considerable number of, a great deal of, enormous, a mass of, a tremendous amount of, vast quantity of,
numerous, millions of, a huge crowd, a bunch of
亮点5：Go to的替换
swarm into, pour into, crowd into, flock into, pump into, flood into, step into Contemporarily, a new and bitter truth we must learn to face is that the relationship between
Get worse:Indifferent, deteriorate, decline.
Close:Harmonious, sweet, peaceful
亮点6：however/but的替换
1. on the contrary, reversely, by contrast
2. fortunately, unfortunately. It’s only the part of the picture.
3. ugly as it was.
4. the other side of the picture is quite opposite.
(数据法)
It should come as no surprise to learn that “super-gi rl show”, for my own part, exerted a peculiar fascination on an accumulating number of audience, esp. on young generation. According to a statistics, the audience rating is up to 47% high. What is to account for this? Now let me enumerate the reasons in the following.
亮点7：like的替换
Like-love-Be interested in
Be fond of-Be crazy about-Interest
In Favor Of-Fancy-Be Keen On
Attract-Take great delight in
Appeal to-Fascinate
Exert a peculiar fascination on
Create a surge enthusiasm for
Find a keen relish in
亮点8：名词至上。名词可以使你的语言有别于别人，形成梯度感。
Can I help you?
Can I be of any help, sir?
Do I have to wait for a long time for a seat?
Is there too much wait to be seated?
亮点9：长难句。
长难句的组成不是语法堆砌的，而是取决于你词的选择。
US and UK, for in
亮点10 ：Want的替换：
Would rather
Tend to
Be tempted to
Be inclined to
Be eager to
Attempt to
Be willing to
亮点11：4大黄金副词
Minimally
Approximately
Overwhelmingly
Contemporarily
74.07% of the primary school pupils have their private instructors. Every coin has 2 sides. Yet in my opinion, it does more harm than good to school pupils.
亮点12：危害性的过渡句，名言警句。
1- There is no doubt that it had exerted a great detriment on us.
2- It’s known to all that ___ are dangerous harmful to both the society and the individual.
3- All rose have thorns/ No garden is without weeds
4- Every sword has 2 edges/ Every coin has 2 sides.
5- Every advantage has its disadvantages
亮点13：表明观点：替换think
Assume- argue- hold- claim- suggest- declare- assert-
state- believe- insist- maintain- reckon- in my opinion
Nowadays, people in growing number are being to complain that college English education is quite a failure in China. a recent investigation shows that hardly can any, approximately 65.97% of graduates, communicate with foreigners, let alone write in
this phenomenon.
Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. " is quite provoking. The saying aims at informing us of a truth that
hardly can anyone get things perfectly done without adequate preparation. There are sufficient reasons and evidence to testify the righteousness of my understanding.
（名言）It is quite provoking to hear an old saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” The saying aims at informing us of a truth that hardly can anyone gain their happiness without striving. There are sufficient reasons and evidence to testify the righteousness of my understanding.
is a father talking to his daughter.
，
all about it on her blog than inform him face to face.
第二段
分析原因（自身的原因对方的原因社会的大原因或者外界因素）
1.The first reason for their choice is, they maintain, that... Besides, … They go on to point out ...
What’s more important, they also claim that…
2.One of the most common factors is…/…is also responsible for the problem. Another
contributing factor is…Perhaps the primary factor is …
3.On the one side, ... On the other side, .... Furthermore, ...
4.Initially, ... What’s worse, ... What’s worst, ....
5.For one thing, ... For another, ... Still, ...
6.For the simple reason that...
For one thing, city residents are busy coping with the quick pace and heavy pressure of their lives and work. Hardly can they spend a great deal of time reading in the libraries. For another thing, you will cease to come if you failed to find the books you need. What’s more?With the rapid development of economy and technology, PC is entering into a greater number of ordinary families. We can Google all the information online effortlessly.
亮点14：合理的理由
are the only child in their families, so they grew up with tender love and were never taught to deal with pressure. Another contributing factor is the high hope from parents in their children. They lay all their prospects on their only child and expect their future to be promising. Perhaps the primary
competition. Contemporarily, with the development of economy and technology, the competition becomes overwhelmingly severe and intensifies students stress as well.
亮点15 ：Most of
The majority of
A large segment of
Most
An overwhelming majority of
To begin with, owing to busy work schedule, city inhabitants have less time to rest, not to mention visiting their neighbors. Furthermore, even though they have a little free time, they prefer to stay alone for a break rather than be disturbed. Still, decades ago, the ordinary used to live in the same yard, also called “siheyuan”. It’s quite convenient to call at next doors. Unfortunately, they move into apartments and are used to living individually. Contemporarily, it’s quite uncomfortable for visiting.
亮点16：used to
1- used to do
2- be used to doing
3- get used to doing
Initially, overuse of internet exerted a great effect on one’s classes and lives
that they spent so much time online that they neglected their studies and families.
maltreating of internet can youngsters’ eyesight. That’s why a large segment of netizens wear glasses. e, indulging in internet for some evil purposes may be more likely to lead young generation to astray and give rise to internet crime which is the most serious problem we are facing in today’s society.
亮点17：危害/影响的表达
influence/ reverberation/ impact/ effect / detriment/ harmful/ impair / inflict suffering on/ abuse/ maltreat
亮点18：Be easy to do –be likely to do
第三段
1.观点
2.措施建议
校园或普通问题：As the salt of this world, college students should be fully aware of the important role ___plays in modern society. Therefore, they should __. We should also advocate to ___the importance of____ so that an increasing number of teenagers can enjoy a happy life.
社会问题：It’s imperative for us to ta ke severe measures to put it on hold. For one thing, we must appeal to authorities to launch strict laws to control __. For another thing, we should enhance people’s awareness that __ is vital for us. Only in this way can we have a bright future.
观点表述：We cannot assert whether this trend is good or not, for my own part, I bear no prejudices against it like some critics did. But it’s advisable to give a correct guidance to the wholesome development of ___.
(网络沉迷)
have a bright future.
in modern society. Therefore, they should
We should also advocate to public the importance of the salt of this world, college important role
Therefore, We should also
citizens can enjoy a happy life.
(超女现象)We cannot assert whether this trend is good or not, for my own part, I bear no prejudices against it like advisable to give a correct guidance to the
应用文写作
Dear Mr. Wang,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter …
Reasons …
Hope to hear from you very soon …
Faithfully yours,
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming 1：近年来，互联网上博客发展迅猛，很多人都有博客。为什么？你的观点如何？
2：超级女生取得巨大成功。分析原因？你的看法
3：随着经济的发展，国企改革，目前下岗工人越来越多。分析原因？如何解决这个问题？
4：近来网恋成为一种流行，很多人从网上选择配偶。有什么危害性如何正确对待？
5：现在选秀节目越来越多，很多学生甚至逃课参加这种比赛危害性如何解决？
6：考试作弊目前在校园内越来越严重分析原因如何解决？
7：当今社会越来越多的大学生面临就业问题，甚至毕业就失业。为什么？如何解决？
8：目前，父母和子女之间因缺乏相互理解导致代沟。导致这种现象的原因如何对待
9：当今社会很多大学生在工作不久以后就跳槽。分析原因，如何对待
10：越来越多的中国学生选择在毕业后出国留学为什么？如何正确对待
11：现在不良商业广告越来越多危害性如何解决？
12：学生的负担越来越重危害性如何解决？
13：目前网络教育形成浪潮，很多人选择这种方式充电分析原因，如何看待
14：原来越多的老年人选择独居分析原因如何解决
15：当今社会，很多年轻人花过多的时间和金钱追求时尚，分析原因，如何对待
16：年轻人应该积极向上，有不少年轻人不思上进，如何解决
17：最近调查显示学生的综合素质不尽如人意，主要原因，如何解决
18：学习英语开口说很重要，很多中国学生不愿意开口说英语，为什么？如何解决？
19：越来越多的学生参加考研考试。分析原因，如何对待
20：人们普遍认为实际能力最重要，越来越多的学生参加各种的证书考试，而忽略了能力的培养。为什么如何对待？
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