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2009年6月20日英语四级作文权威点评

2009年6月20日英语四级作文权威点评
2009年6月20日英语四级作文权威点评

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【试题】

(1)现在越来越多的博物馆向公众开放

(2)有人认为会带来很多问题。

(3)我认为…

【解析】

这是一道明显的观点对比题,符合观点对比提的特征:(1)提出一种现象;(2)双方有不同的观点;(3)我的看法。唯一的不同在于,本题中的第二个提纲只提到了一种观点,而没有提到与之相反的观点,因此在写作中可以做一下变通,把与之相反的人的观点加上,构成第二段的内容。

第一段为描述现象(可以使用强化班课堂上强调的there be句型的升级句型)

There are an increasing number of museums which are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays. However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved. (本段的第二句话的作用在于引出第二段要说的内容,起到承上起下的作用,在观点对比题中,这也是一个要求大家背过的句式,写出这样的句子不成问题吧。)

第二段阐述双方不同的观点(可以使用强化班中讲过的单词和句式,构成一个写作模板)

Some people hold the opinion that freen admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spolinig of the environment to the damage to the facilites of the museums.

It is known that some visitors will throw awys the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museusm. Worsely, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the musem without company of their parents. However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not. Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.

(第二段语言不会有问题,因为强化班中讲过了写这一段用到的重点词汇和

句式;内容上的扩展可以根据讲过的几条万能理由,同时参考课堂上的写作练习,考前让大家都背过,因此也应当非常简单。)

第三段进行观点的自述(把课堂上讲的内容先背上,再加上一个结尾句)

As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon. Therefore we are expected to take measures to educate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums. Thus, more and more individuals will enjoy a favorable environment

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