高考英语书面表达常见错误分析

高考英语书面表达常见错误分析

一、常见错误分析

考生需要考虑表达时必须用到的词汇和句子结构。有时材料看似简单，笔者在阅卷中发现，考生在运用词汇和句子表达上存在许多问题，从而影响了文章的整体质量。

(括号中为正确的表达方式)

1.单词拼写错误

单词拼写错误率极高，许多考生甚至出现很低级的错误。比如: litter (little), perfer (prefer), intresting (interesting), famlies (families), chioce (choice), ourself (ourselves), stroy (story), agaist (against)等。

2.词语搭配不当或用词不准确

考生对常用短语、表达法掌握不够，出现不当搭配。比如: look book (read the book), look the film (see the film), Many people cost much money (spend much money), prefer to seeing the film (prefer to see the film), spend us a short time (takes us a short time), after read the book (after reading the book), write skill (writing skill) 等。

3.画蛇添足

有些考生在全文结束时画蛇添足,加上一句错误的问句，让人大倒胃口。比如: Are you agree?/ So what do you choice?

4.汉语式英语

在书面表达中所体现的中文式思维是极为普遍的现象。如：Seeing the film will save much time./ Seeing films are convenient./ Reading books in the original can bring people wonderful experiences.

5.交白卷或抄与题材无关的段落

经抽样发现，0分试卷约占3.9% 左右，这些得0分的考生中，有的是只字未写，有的是虽有所写却未能传达给读者任何信息，而有的则是挑选阅读材料中的其中一段抄下来。

6.书写潦草

在阅卷中发现，有相当一部分考生的作文卷面不清，书写潦草，影响信息的传递。评分原则中有一条表明：若书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

7.语言平乏，词汇档次欠高

不少考生大脑记忆库词汇量储存不够，难以灵活运用语言，导致语言平乏，同一种表达重复较多。

8.文章缺乏连贯性

有些考生在词汇的运用和内容的表达上都基本达到要求，但由于句与句，段与段之间没有添加恰当的连接成分，使句子之间和段落之间缺乏必要的过渡和衔接，影响了表达的效果。

8.死背范文

部分考生死背范文，表达不灵活。例如，有些考生不管所给首句，文不对题地顾自另起一句：“I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether…”

1. 句子缺谓语

1) The building like a match box.

2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.

2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。

1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field.

2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.

3.时态错误

1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.

2) What are you doing this time yesterday?

4.词性混用

1) She enjoys study English.

2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.

5.介词误用

1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize.

2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.

3) Don’t read under the sun.

6.冠词误用

1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.

2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion.

3) The history is actually a very interesting subject.

7.名词的数混淆

1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.

2) There is always traffic jam.

8.动词用法错误

1) Where are you come from?

2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.

3) He didn’t no tice the teacher to come into the classroom.

4) The accident was happened in 1999.

9.习惯用法错误

1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful.

2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.

3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next.

10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清

误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. The old man couldn’t move , I decided to help him.

正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to

flee away. Fortunately, I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. Noticing the old man couldn’t mov e, I decided to help him.

11.画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）

修改前：A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting.

修改后：A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech.

修改前: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. What’s more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot.

修改后: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. What’s more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is becoming more and more serious.

修改前： As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on .

修改后： As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.

12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性、可读性。

修改前： Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.

修改后： Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car—Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.

修改前： Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn’t stop and hit the old man. The driver didn’t stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman.

修改后： Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit th e old man, but it didn’t stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman.

总的来说扣分原因在：

1.与内容无关。

2.句子构架搭不起来，意思出不来。如：He went family.

3.行文不连贯。如：人称使用前后矛盾，词频度过高，不会用连接词语等。

4.缺少谓语动词。如：He very happy very much.

5.拼写错误，行文潦草，无法看清、看懂。

6.语言不得体：不看对象，不看场景，用语不当。

7.标点混乱；人称代词及时态、语态乱用。

8.内容要点不全，缺项，整体结构不完整。

9.文段多于或少于规定的字数。

10.格式不规范，如书信体中漏缺开首词和结尾语等。

得分条件

1.行文连贯流畅—人称、时间、地点、情节交待有层次。

2.恰当使用连接词语。如：and/or/but/so/not only…but

also…/however/besides/otherwise/ like/in the same way/unless/in

case/as long as/on one hand, on the other hand等词或短语。

3.语句简明扼要，无或少词语重复。

4.行文整洁，字体规范，会增加好印象。

5.尽量写出与题目有关的词语。

二、写作文四步

Step1：确定文体

常用文体有记叙文、说明文，还有应用文如书信等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主，提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现，书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以，考生还应该掌握信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面，另外，口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之，考生应根据写作提示分析材料，确定文体，闯过第一关。

Step2：确定时态和人称

要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态。一般来说，记人叙事多用一般过去时；发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式；发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时；人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点，但要记住，写作时时态并不惟一，要依据表达内容而选定。

Step3：确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构

在以上“两确定”的基础上，应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个地确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出。理清要点，然后选词造句，对列出的要点逐一翻译。这时要注意力求语言准确得当。平时写作要多进行发散思维，如是用very sorry还是terribly sorry；是surprised还是aston-ished。同时考生应学会尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等。最大限度地完美文章。

Step4：整理成篇行文连贯

接下来要根据内容分清文章的层次，确定详略，将写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，根据内容编排，该分段时要分段，使表达清楚，一目了然。行云流水，整齐划一，闯过写作第四关。

三、英文作文必背之35个句型

1．~~the + ~ est +名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc)

the most +形容词+名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc)

Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

2．Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V

Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

3．~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

4．There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)

There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

5．It is universally acknowledged that +句子~~ (全世界都知道...)

It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

6．There is no doubt that +句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

7．An advantage of ~~~ is that +句子(...的优点是...)

An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

8．The reason why +句子~~~ is that +句子(...的原因是...)

The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us

with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.

我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

9．So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此...以致于...)

So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

10．Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)

Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

{by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不}

11．The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more+ Adj + S + V~~~(愈...愈...)

The harder you work, the more progress you make.

The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。12．By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...，..能够..)

By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。13．~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)

Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。14．On no account can we+ V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)

On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

15．It is time + S +过去式(该是...的时候了)

It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

16．Those who ~~~ (...的人...)

Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

17．There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)

There is no one but longs to go to college.

没有人不渴望上大学。

18．be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)

Since the examination is around the corner, I am

compelled to give up doing sports.

既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

19．It is conceivable that +句子(可想而知的)

It is obvious that +句子(明显的)

It is apparent that +句子(显然的)

It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。20．That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)

Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.

夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

21．For the past+时间，S +现在完成式.(过去...年来，...一直...) For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。

22．Since + S +过去式，S +现在完成式。

Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

23．It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)

It pays to help others.

帮助别人是值得的。

24．be based on (以...为基础)

The progress of thee society is based on harmony.

社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

25．Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

26．bring home to +人+事(让...明白...事)

We should bring home to people the valueof working hard.

我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

27．be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)

Taking exercise is closely related to health.

做运动与健康息息相关。

28．Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯) We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.

我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

29．Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因为...)

Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.

因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。

30．What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...！) What an important thing it is to keep our promise!

How important a thing it is to keep our promise!

遵守诺言是多么重要的事！

31．Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)

The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.

我们的交通状况令人不满意。

32．Have a great influence on ~~~ (对...有很大的影响)

Smoking has a great influence on our health.

抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

33．do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对...有害)

Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

34．Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)

Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.

污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

35．do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (尽全力去...)

We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.

我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

四、连接词的分类和运用

连接词是指在文章中用来说明上下句或前后两个意思之间关系的词或词组。连接词通常用于开篇，引出扩展句；也可用于句中，尤其是用于较长的复合句中，以作为上下文的连接纽带；还可以置于文末或段末，用于总结上文或结束本段落的内容。

1、表示平行、对等或选择关系：and, both…and, as well as, as well, neither…nor, or either…or…,not only…but also…等

?He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. (NMET 1991范文）

?I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. (NMET 2001范文）

2.表示转折关系的连接词语有：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand, in spite of, nevertheless, although, otherwise 等

?On the other hand, 40% think that fee should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers. (NMET 2002范文)

?While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby. (NMET范文)

3.表示因果关系的连接词：for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of等

?He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. (NMET 1997范文)

?He didn’t work hard, as a result, he failed in the exam.

4.表示时间顺序的连接词：at first, first, second…, then, next, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, eventually, as soon as, the next moment，shortly after, for one thing, for another thing 等

?After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. .(NMET1996范文)

?The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.(NMET2000范文)

5.表示空间顺序的连接词：on the right, to the left, on one side of,…, on the other side of…. At the foot\top\end\ of…, in the middle\center of…,等

?On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now, stands another new building—our library.(NMET1999范文)

?In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. (NMET99范文)

6.表示解释说明的连接词：that is (to say), in other words, such as, for example\instance, namely, actually, to tell you the truth according to this ,and so on 等

?I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums and taking computer lessons.(NMET2001范文）

?In other words , I love my hometown and the people there.

7.表递进关系的连接词：what’s more\worse\better, besides, in addition, worse still, to make things worse, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only…but also

?become necessary to build What’s more , it will gates and walls (NMET2002范文)

?In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more ,I can go to bed earlier.(NMET2001范文)

?In addition to meeting the need of markets at home, its products are shipped to many countries.

8.表示总结的连接词：in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know ,on the whole, to sum up等

?In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.(NMET2001范文)

?In a word, great changes have taken place in our village.

连接词在文章中起着重要作用，千万不可忽视！！！

五、写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇

1. 改变时态

The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级)

2. 改变语态

People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)

It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)

3. 使用不定式

He is so kind that he can help me. (一般)

He is so kind as to help me. (高级)

4. 使用过去分词

She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般)

Followed by many students, she…. (高级)

Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般)

Once seen, it can …. (高级)

5. 使用v-ing形式

When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般)

On his arriving/ arrival, please give…. (高级)

If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一般)

Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)

Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般) Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级) 6. 使用名词性从句

It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up. (一般)

The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. (高级) I happened to have met him. (一般)

It happened that I had met him. (高级)

To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般) What surprised him is that the girl…. (高级)

7. 使用状语从句

I won’t believe what he says. (一般)

No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级)

If you come back before six o’clock, you can go out. (一般) You can go out on condition that you come back before…. (高级)

The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般)

The meal was so nice that we all…. (高级)

8. 使用定语从句

The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)

The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)

I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般) The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级)

9. 使用虚拟语气

The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般)

But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级)

I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. (一般)

If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级)

10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句

Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般)

It was not until 1920 that regular radio…. (高级

Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般)

Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级)

We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般)

How glad we were to see the crops and...! (高级)

11. 使用并列句

If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般)

Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)

When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)

The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)

I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)

I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级)

怎样运用高级词汇：

1．As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般)

The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级)

2．She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般)

She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级)

3．Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (一般)

Thanks to the good weather, our journey…. (高级)

4．She doesn’t like sports. (一般)

She cares nothing for sports (高级)

5．We had to go home. (一般)

What we had to do was go home (高级)

六、各类文体相关写作知识

书信通知

书信常识。英文格式：1.信头（heading）2.称呼（salution) 3.正文（body）

4.结束语（complimentary close ）

5.签名（signature

具体写法：

1.写信人的地址和日期，写在右上角。写地址由小到大：门牌号码、街名、城（县）名、省名、国名其顺序是：第一行：门牌和路名，或邮政信箱，楼房名称；第二行：市（县），省，

国名；第三行：日期（月,年,日或日,月,年）

2.收信人的姓名和地址。这一部分低于写信人地址一至两行，写在左上角.

3.称呼用语。写给机构的信一般用Gentleman, 如果知道对方是男士则常用Sir(s), 女士则用Madam(s), 社会主义国家多用Dear Comrades, 相互认识的人之间一般用Dear H4

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记叙文是高考书面表达中比较常用的一种形式。记叙文通常以记叙和描写为主，是以记人叙事为主要内容的一种文体，叙述人们的经历或事物发展变化过程的一种表达方式。

说明文

说明文出题形式：1.文字+表格;2.图表;3.图画

说明文的篇章结构:

主题句——引出全文的话题

支持句——围绕话题展开讨论，用事实，理由，观点等来进行解释，说明或论证。

结束句——对话题进行概括，总结归纳。

说明文的写作方法：

列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如：first, second, third,

first, secondly, finally, \\the first thing (point) is…, the second thing (point) is…, the third thing(point) is…, \\first of all, also, finally, \\ one, another, the last…

以事物的重要性来排列顺序，可使文章层次清楚，重点突出。如：for one thing, also, the worst thing is…\\first of all, apart from that, the most important is…, \\for one thing, what is more, the most…, \\one important, more importantly, the most important…\\one problem.., another prob lem…,the most serious problem…,

比较对比法----比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析;对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点，利与弊。写作方法通常有：

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2）A,B, A,B, A,B, 结构（如内容较多，可逐点分析。）

Topic sentence

whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks

Supporting sentence 1

60% of the students are against the idea of the entrance fees.

(A) to have a rest and enjoy themselves in the park

(A) to become necessary to build gates and walls,

(A) to do harm to the appearance of the city.

Supporting sentence 2

40% think that fees should be charged

(B) need money to pay gardeners and other workers

(B) to buy plants and young trees.

(B) fees should be charged low.

开放性写作

1 根据结果，解释原因What happened?

2根据事件，接续故事What happened next? What did you do with...? What should you do...? How will you introduce your school to them? 3提出问题，给出建议

写作注意原则：

1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态

2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应

3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识

4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑

5、要有主次之分，详略得当

6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑

7、要做到思想健康，积极向上

七、作文模版

作文模版一―――对比观点

?There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

?A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一.

People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二_.

?As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ____, but also because ____. The more ____, the more___.

作文模版二―――说明利弊

?Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (Ａ的优点之一). Besides,（Ａ的优点之二）.

?But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse, (Ａ的第二个缺点)．

?Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法)．

?(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (对前景的预测)．)

作文模版三:阐述主题题型

?要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．

２．分析并举例使其更充实．

?The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

作文模版四解决方法题型

?要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

作文模板五：现象说明文

?Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.

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