雅思大作文 真题及写作提纲
Some people think secondary students should study international news as a school subject, but others argue that it is a waste of their valuable school time. What's your opinion?
1. 中学生最主要的任务之一就是学习基础文化知识。把有限的学习时间投入到学习
international news是ill conceived.
2. 大部分的中学生都是under mature in terms of both psychological and physical quality.
他们对国际事物无法有比较全面的comprehensive 理解。这简直就是在浪费时间。3. 当今社会，不管那个国家的媒体都充斥着大量的暴力、色情，对于老师，中学生来说，
如何选择有用的信息都是问题，query whether there are useful information for students at all.
4. 虽然中学生学习一些国际新闻可以开拓他们的眼界，丰富他们的知识。但是他们从中得
到的，远远要比努力的学习基础知识要少的多。
2006 / 11/ 04
Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantage?
Against:
1. The first and the most important question is, who will pay the salary for employees of
the so called no profit making institution? The government? After all, the wool still comes from the sheep’s back.
2.
2006 / 10 / 29
Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts have positive influences on development; others think that it has negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
同2006 / 11/ 25
The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels—individual, national and global. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1. 对于个人来说，快节奏生活节省了大量的时间。Fast foods, emails, cell phone
massages, long distance fligh.
2. 对于社会来说，增加了生产效率，使整个社会加速发展。Assemble lines, electronic office
equipment节省纸张。
3. 对于全球来说，推进了各个国家之间的mutual trust and cultural exchanges，to
eliminate misunderstandings
4. 但是，会产生一些问题，比如资源的浪费long distance flight, national identity 的侵蚀。
不过，这些问题会在国家之间相互合作的过程中得到解决。
2006 / 10 / 14
Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals.
T o what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? （freedom, democracy）1. In my view the two are not mutually exclusive. It is by helping children develop their
own mores and principles, as well as instilling in them knowledge needed for good employees, that teachers best prepare children for the future life.
2. One of the aims of education is to make young people good civilians. Ours is a world
of freedom and democracy, the rights and needs of the individual should be put on the top of governments’ list. But we should always bear in mind that the feeling of euphoria of a person is firmly depended on the stability and harmony of the society. 3. Another equally important purpose of education is to benefit people as individuals.
Nothing else than individual ownership can be more effective for a man to exert his or her inner power.
4. In order for the far ranging benefits of education to be achieved by individuals and
countries, educators must emphasize the significance of education for the society as a whole, as well as for a person as the individual.
2006 / 08/ 26
Multi-cultural societies, which are a mixture of different ethnic groups, bring more benefits than drawbacks for a country.
T o what extend do you agree or disagree with this.
For：
1. 种族的融合racial integration有利于文化的多样性和一致性。Those two are not mutual
exclusive. 对于a complex modern nation-state composed of many disparate groups, 比如美国，它的公民from every corner of the world. (The whole country really has an international population. Customs and foods from many different countries can easily be found in most American cities. ) However, when new arrived immigrants enter the country, the process called assimilation enables them to get ahead in the new environment quickly, a process which rests on the common value system. Therefore, in the immigrant county, the personality exists in social harmony.
2. 种族融合带来的另外一个好处就是加速经济的发展。许多移民国家，比如Canada,
Australia, naive citizens 很少，为了增加生产力，这些国家采取较为先进的移民政策，吸引外国的优秀个人进入这些国家，成为这些移民国家的一分子。这些国家就成为了精英“elite国家”。
Against：
1. 当然有不好的方面。种族之间有很多heterogeneous parts不能被调和，can not be
reconciled, 比如宗教religions。这种派别间的不合disagreement致使India政府忙于缓和alleviate这些社会压力，从而影响了国家的发展。
2006 / 08/ 12
In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it.
T o what extent do you agree or disagree?
我基本同意这个观点。但是，如何安排学习语言及文化需要认真的计划。
1. 当一个人刚开始接触一门外语时，不应该把精力放在学习外国的文化和生活方式上去，
因为在学习基础知识的阶段，不需要其它知识的辅助。只要去记忆和理解这些语言规则就好了。过多的学习其它的文化知识会影响学习的效率。比如，在刚开始学习汉语的时候，花过多的时间去了解中国的美食，中国的传统节日，是对Pinyin，和汉字Chinese character拼写是没有什么大的帮助的。
2. 但是当人们学习了比较长时间的外语，而且可以比较自由的表达自己的思想的时候，如
果想真正掌握这门外语，就必须学习外国的一些文化。Language is the cream of one country’s history. 比如，学习古希腊神话classical Greek myths和bible就可以帮助一个学习英文的人了解美国人的思考方式which affects the language people use.
2006 / 08/ 05
Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people. Other think the purpose of museums is educate, not entertain.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
For educate:
1. Museums的重要作用之一是对人们进行教育从心灵上和知识上。A trip to the Memorial
Hall of the Victims in Nanjing Massacre by Japanese Invaders will not only tell true stories for people, but also teach citizens the importance of peace. (National Gallery, British Museum)
2. Art galleries, for example, National Gallery in British, Metropolitan Museum of Art in
New York, etc. present fine arts for people all around the world. The function and ultimate objective of art is to lift the human spirit and to put us more in touch with our feelings and humanity. In other words, art serves to entertain people. More importantly, in order to attract more adolescents, some museums and art galleries offer certain kinds of party, performance, and so on for young people.
3. As I see it, both education and entertainment are the main aim of Museums, because
these two are not exclusive.
2006 / 07/ 29
Earlier technological development brought more benefits changes to the life of
ordinary people than the recent technological development will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Against:
1. Earlier technological development让世界suffer disaster, any informed person who
believes otherwise flies in the face of millions of people who have been killed and maimed by machine guns, missiles, and even atom bombs. 因为人性的弱点，早先的社会充满着杀戮，血腥。所以，这些科技几乎全被用来当作武器。当然，早先的科技，比如火柴的发明，让人类可以方便的使用火，促进了人类文明的发展。
2. 然而现代的科技，却大大有益于个人。Long distance flight, cell phone, internet。虽然
现在争端依然存在，但是有了联合国的制约，以前的人间惨剧tragic events再也不会上演了。
2006 / 07 / 08
In a modern society, it has been observed in some countries that the elderly are not duly respected. Discuss the reasons why this has occurred and the effects it might have on our society.
Reasons:
1. 由于科技的发展，老人们越来越健康，很多人认为他们已经不是弱势群体vulnerable
group了，而且他们自己也这么认为。应该和其它成年人相同的社会地位，所以，不需要对老人有特殊的对待方式
2. 有些国家，人们变得money oriented,比如90年代的中国，道德沦丧moral decay，所
有的社会公德social mores，比如尊敬老人，都是被认为是虚伪的hypocritical。
3. 人口老龄化，使老人在社会中的比率增大，become one of the major groups of society.
2006/ 06 / 24
Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools, but other people think that it can have a negative effect.
Discuss the two points and give your own opinion.
私立学校的好处：
1. 私立学校管理严stringent regulation.家长放心。
2. 私立学校师生比率较高relatively high teacher-student ratio. 学生能够得到比较好的监
管。
3. 私立学校的设备比较齐全。
坏处：
1. 过于严厉的管理使学生没有了自由，限制了他们心里上的发展。
2. 高昂的学费。使家庭背上经济负担。Family burden.
2006/ 06 / 17
The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use your own experience and give an example to support your idea.
I strongly disagree with the assertion that “”, primarily because this contention accords with common sense and our everyday experience as human beings. Besides, usage of fossil fuel is not the only reason that causes the environmental problems.
I strongly disagree with the assertion that “”. Admittedly, …… . Yet, in my view, ….
1. 价格增长，燃料的使用不一定会减少。从工业上来说，电厂、钢厂steel plant,等重工业
heavy industry, 这些工厂对环境的影响是巨大的，然而是一个国家发展必不可缺的indispensible.
2. 即使是燃油价格使这些工业减少了。但是，环境问题并不只是这些用油的工业早成的。
比如对原始森林的砍伐deforestation of rain forest 是造成温室效应的主要原因之一，并不单单是因为燃油使用产生的二氧化碳carbon dioxide 引起的。
3. 而且燃油价格增加会加重一些社会人群的负担。比如taxi driver. In November 4th, 2008,
中国重庆的出租车司机因为高昂的石油价格prohibitive price of petrol, gasoline 而进行罢工go on a strike。造成社会的不稳定和不和谐。
4. 解决方法是研制出清洁能源，减少对原始森林的砍伐，和对工厂的排出物discharge进
行处理。
2006/ 06 / 10
Nowadays some people like to give help to the local community or provide people with direct help. Other people prefer to give money to national and international
organizations.
Discuss both of the two ways and present your own opinion.
Directly:对于一些小问题，个人对社区的帮助是很大的。
1. 对个人来说，是一个很好的社会经验。人们可以通过做社区活动来得到一些快乐，促进
人与人之间的关系，有利于社区的和谐。
2. 帮助更直接。因为在社区的人相互了解，人们知道社区需要什么样的帮助。比如8单元
的一个老人需要有人帮他换一下gas holder. 这是政府所很难做到的。
Indirectly:对于一些有关于整个社区利益的问题，政府和组织的帮助是必须的。
1. 当然，一些政府或是组织有更大的影响力、权利来帮助社区。比如为社区添加娱乐设施，
美化社区的环境。这个靠个人很难做到的。
2. 而且，政府和组织有能力根据情况做出判断，应该先帮助哪个社区？为了减少贫富差距
close the gap between rich and poor. 政府需要把人们缴纳的资金重新分配。使社会稳定和谐。
2006/ 05 / 27
Some people think that the use of animal for experimentation is cruel. Other think it is good for the development of science. Discuss the two sides and give your opinion.
For：
1. 为了科学的发展，这是是必须的。总不能把人当作实验动物吧？
2. 难道把牛杀了，供人们吃牛肉，就不是cruel了麽？
3. 难道为了保护动物，致使很多药物研制不出来，造成成千上万的人残疾、死亡，饱受疾
病的困扰，这就不残忍麽？
Against：
1. 动物也是creature。人们对动物做实验的确是不人道的Inhumane.我们应该对生命尊重，
我们不希望自己回到stone age。
但是大自然的法则就是弱肉强食。According to Darwin’s “natural selection”, in which stronger species survive while weaker ones do not. In addition, we human beings are not exempt from this process. In order for the far ranging benefits of medical development to be achieved by individuals, societies, and the whole world, 动物实验是inevitable.
2006/ 05 / 13
Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem.
T o what extent do you agree or disagree?
For:
1. 政府有责任和义务来解决这些事情。
2. 政府有足够的权利来干涉。
Against：
1. 这是社会发展趋势的结果，人为的干涉不能解决什么问题。人为的原因：Anthropogenic
factors.
(Not so very long ago it would have been really unusual to pay ￡1 million for a house. Unfortunately this is no longer so. Decline in the real value of money over the past few years has made property values rocket. The cheap house is a thing of the past. Now, the sale of a ￡1 million house no longer causes surprise, nor is it likely to be the subject of a newspaper article.)
2006/ 04 / 29
Some people believe that national sports teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should be funded by non-government organizations （business, scholarship）. Government:
1. 代表了国家，当然国家要资助。当本国的运动员athletes在奥运会Olympic Games上
取得一枚金牌gold medal的时候，他的荣誉也是国家的荣誉。
2. 做为一个职业，国家有必要向运动员发薪水。
3. 但是国家应该把这些钱拿去解决更紧迫的社会问题。
Organizations：
1. 应该由商业出。可以资助队员的同时，提高自己的知名度，一举两得。双赢a win-win
solution.
2. 但是体育过度商业化会导致体育精神的侵蚀。Erosion of sport spirit.
2006/ 04 / 22
History is little or nothing to tell people. Others believe people must study history to understand the present. Please discuss.
For history:
1. 历史教给我们很多教训。A trip to the Memorial Hall of Victims in Nanjing Massacre by
Japanese Invaders，让我们明白和平的重要性。
2. 历史教会我我们很多知识。学习Confucius让我们理解中国现存社会道德的根源。Darwin
的’natural selection’向我们解释了动物进化的过程。如果不学习这些历史知识…..
3. 但是历史不能让我们直接去解决现在的问题。我们需要借鉴draw lessons from历史
4. If we are ever to create enduring peace, we must seek its origins in human experience
and the record of human idealism.
5. The supreme purpose of history is a better world. History gives a warning to those
who would promote war. History brings inspiration to those who seek peace. In short, history helps us learn. Yesterday’s records can keep us form repeating yesterday’s mistakes.
2006/1/21
At present, science has been developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of the life that science cannot?
More and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks?
For：
1. 有效的抑制curb了犯罪。
2. 让公民有安全感。A feeling of security. 人们变得越来越踏实，工作效率也提高了。Against：
1. 但是花费了大量的金钱。这些钱本来可用用来解决一些紧迫的社会问题，失业，饥饿。
2. 有的时候侵犯了公民的隐私。比如surveillance camera.
3. 造成了公民生活的不方便。到处都要检查皮包，到处都要检查ID card。
2006/3/18
Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
1. In my view the two are not mutually exclusive. It is by helping children develop their
own mores and principles, as well as instilling in them knowledge needed for good employees, that teachers best prepare children for the future life.
2. 学生应该把有限的时间放到学习上去，这样才能应付今后的竞争。而且，教育他们的品
德可以让父母来做，不一定非要老师，要不然，老师的压力就会很大。
3. 学生最常见到的就是老师。老师对学生的影响很大。有的时候学生父母缺少必要的教育
常识common sense, 不能好好的教育孩子。所以老师有一部分的责任要教给学生去distinguish good from evil.
2008.11.29 （新题初现）
Some people think modern games can help children to develop wide range of skills, but other people argue that traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
1. War craft, Counter Striker, 需要孩子的协调能力，和团队配合能力，而且能够极大的培
养他们的竞争能力。
2. Chess, bridge, 也是可以培养孩子的思考能力。但是有的传统游戏，比如twister，就是
在单纯的消磨时间罢了。
3. 不管是什么样的游戏，孩子们都能从中受益，因为玩耍是孩子的天性，而且有利于他们
的大脑的发育。我们不应该过多的在意他们从娱乐中玩到了什么，其实，快乐本身才是他们应该追寻的。
2008.11.8(新题初现）
More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes. Why is it? What are the positive and negative effects does this trend impose on the society?
Against：
1. 容易造成浪费。A new fashion fades quickly. 当几件衣服不流行的时候，人们就不喜欢
穿了，或是干脆直接扔掉。他们不知道，在Kenya，还有很多儿童连鞋都没有一双。2. The erosion of diversity of personality. 所有的人都追求时尚，就等于所有的人都在追求
同样的东西。最后导致所有的人都穿的一样。
3. 让人们变得更物质。越来越重视外表，人的品质反而不如一件精美的衣服an delicate
coat 值钱。
4. Fashion 是商家commercial company故意虚构出来的东西a fictitious thing。目的单纯
是为了让大家购买他们的物品。
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雅思写作小作文范文118篇之范文14 以下是三立在线雅思网给大家分享的雅思写作小作文范文118篇：范文14。希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助，更多雅思备考资料欢迎大家随时关注三立在线雅思网。 范文14 The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In this period of communication,computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons. The main reason is that people’s brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer’s programs. Secondly, computer doesn’t have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer’s programs to judge a question’s right or wrong. In other words, computer can’t defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question’s right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
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一、教育 1. In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26) 不同意： 中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段，如果在这个时候中断，带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题，还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说：你每关闭一所学校，你就必须开设一座监狱。Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail ） 教育能够帮助培养个人素质；提高劳动力的素质，从而提高生产效率，推动社会发展，从根本上解决失业的问题。do a favor to/be beneficial（advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment 从长远来看，如果受过更高的教育，则有更多的机会找到好的工作。In a long run／term, if pupils could receive better education, they may have far more opportunities to find better jobs. 教育的作用不仅仅应当局限在找工作，而是为了将来更好的发展。The function of education should be not only focused on \limited in job hunting, but also for a better development. ＊＊失业的原因是综合的comprehensive/complicated，例如经济原因：经济衰退或者不景气economy recession/depression，就业岗位剧减，导致市场对于劳动力的需求整体下降 a fall in the overall demand for labor;社会原因，个人原因等 2. Most countries spend much money on education, as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion which subject is the most important for young people and which one is the least important? Subjects: Literature Sports Mathematics Economy Physics History Music Geography (08.03.01) 整个题目可以分为理论科目和实践科目两种： 理论科目的好处：智的角度 实践科目（音乐、体育）的好处：美、体、劳的角度 E.g.: What does sports benefits your academic? Any sport will have a positive effect on academic performance simply because exercise is good for the brain, and teamwork and strategy that are focal to most sports are applicable as well to many academic areas. 理论科目的坏处：枯燥、单调、需要长时间的学习、结合实践时较为困难 体育、音乐的坏处：需要天赋；需要大量时间和金钱的投入；就业范围小，职业生涯短 3. Schoolteachers used to be the source of information, however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before as the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion? (08.0 4.24) 和以前一样重要：（也就是说老师的重要性） 学校教育更加有利于学生的道德培养，尤其对于年龄较小的学生。老师可以帮助学生建立自信心，培养能力，塑造良好的性格最终成为一个有利于社会的人。Teachers could help the students to build up confidence, shape upright character and ultimately grow a full man beneficial to the society. 通过老师的讲解，能够更加容易接受知识。By lectures, students are more easily to receive knowledge.可以根据学生的需要而改变teach students in accordance with their own characteristics and differences 学生在学校里能够参加体育锻炼，有利于身体的健康和成长 学校教育给了学生一个交流、沟通、合作的机会，有利于团队精神team spirit、合作精神cooperation、创新能力innovation的培养foster/cultivation。 其他信息途径的好处（远程教育的好处） 提供了一种更为新颖有效的教育形式an original and effective educational model；增加人们接受教育的机会increase the opportunities of being educated;提高参与者的科技能力develop technology competencies、拓展技术面broaden skill set,从而提高就业机会job opportunity。 为地处偏远和行动不便的人、工作时间不稳定的人提供了受教育的机会those with restricted mobility, such as elderly, disabled, injured, irregular work schedule. 可以同时和全国各地甚至全世界各地的人进行交流和学communicate and interact with students all over the country or even the world 文档和资料容易储存、易提取、打印和阅读documents and materials are easily recorded, retrieved, printed and read 远程教育的缺点： 缺乏和老师面对面的交流lack of in-person contact with faculty members很难及时接受到老师的反馈wait for a long time before receiving feedback about assignments 不能像传统教育那样和同学之间更多地接触，没有机会提高口头交流能力和合作能力等have no chance to enhance oral communication skills and cooperation skills 精力和注意力会被很多东西分散many distractions at home 并不是所有的行业都承认网络教育的学历，缺乏就业认可。not all work industries acknowledge online degrees 4.Schools should teach children some academic subjects, which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (08.0 5.22) 同第2题 5.University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.0 6.05)