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SCI英文论文审稿意见汇总
SCI英文论文审稿意见汇总

英文论文审稿意见汇总

以下12点无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿人意见构成。

1、目标和结果不清晰。

It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.

2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。

◆In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me thods used in the study.

◆Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments

should be provided.

3、对于研究设计的rationale:

Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.

4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:

The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show

if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.

5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:

A hypothesis needs to be presented。

6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念:

What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?

7、对研究问题的定义:

Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear,

write one section to define the problem

8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literature review:

The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel.

9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification:

There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous work.

10、严谨度问题:

MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that.

11、格式(重视程度):

◆In addition, the list of references is not in our style. It is close but not completely correct. I have attached a pdf file with "Instructions for Authors" which shows examples.

◆Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and formatted. If you are unsure, please consult the formatting nstructions to authors that are given under the "Instructions and Forms" button in he upper right-hand corner of the screen.

12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):

有关语言的审稿人意见:

◆It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.

◆The authors must have their work reviewed by a proper translation/reviewing service before submission; only then can a proper review be performed. Most sentences contain grammatical and/or spelling mistakes or are not complete sentences.

◆As presented, the writing is not acceptable for the journal.There are pro blems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction.

◆The English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. We str

ongly suggest that you obtain assistance from a colleague who is well-versed i n English or whose native language is English.

◆Please have someone competent in the English language and the subject matte

r of your paper go over the paper and correct it. ?

◆the quality of English needs improving.

来自编辑的鼓励:

Encouragement from reviewers:

◆I would be very glad to re-review the paper in greater depth once it has be en edited because the subject is interesting.

◆There is continued interest in your manuscript titled "……" which you subm itted to the Journal of Biomedical Materials Research: Part B - Applied Biomat erials.

◆The Submission has been greatly improved and is worthy of publication.

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老外写的英文综述文章的审稿意见

Ms. Ref. No.: ******

Title: ******

Materials Science and Engineering

Dear Dr. ******,

Reviewers have now commented on your p

aper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.

For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.

Reviewer #1: This work proposes an extensive review on micromulsion-based methods for the synthesis of Ag nanoparticles. As such, the matter is of interest, however the paper suffers for two serious limits:

1) the overall quality of the English language is rather poor;

2) some Figures must be selected from previous literature to discuss also the synthesis of anisotropically shaped Ag nanoparticles (there are several examples published), which has been largely overlooked throughout the paper. ;

Once the above concerns are fully addressed, the manuscript could be accepted for publication in this journal

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这是一篇全过程我均比较了解的投稿,稿件的内容我认为是相当不错的,中文版投稿于业内有较高影响的某核心期刊,并很快得到发表。其时我作为审稿人之一,除了提出一些修改建议外,还特建议了5篇应增加的参考文献,该文正式发表时共计有参考文献25篇。

作者或许看到审稿意见还不错,因此决意尝试向美国某学会主办的一份英文刊投稿。几经修改和补充后,请一位英文“功底"较好的中国人翻译,投稿后约3周,便返回了三份审稿意见。

从英文刊的反馈意见看,这篇稿件中最严重的问题是文献综述和引

用不够,其次是语言表达方面的欠缺,此外是论证过程和结果展示

形式方面的不足。

感想:一篇好的论文,从内容到形式都需要精雕细琢。

附1:中译审稿意见

审稿意见—1

(1) 英文表达太差,尽管意思大致能表达清楚,但文法错误太多。

(2) 文献综述较差,观点或论断应有文献支持。

(3) 论文读起来像是XXX的广告,不知道作者与XXX是否没有关联。

(4) 该模式的创新性并非如作者所述,目前有许多XX采取此模式(如美国地球物理学会),作者应详加调查并分析XXX运作模式的创新点。

(5) 该模式也不是作者所说的那样成功……(审稿人结合论文中的数据具体分析)

审稿意见—2

(1) 缺少直接相关的文献引用(如…)。

(2) 写作质量达不到美国学术期刊的标准。

审稿意见—3

(1) 作者应着重指出指出本人的贡献。

(2) 缺少支持作者发现的方法学分析。

(3) 需要采用表格和图件形式展示(数据)材料。

附2:英文审稿意见(略有删节)

Reviewer: 1

There are many things wrong with this paper.

The English is very bad. Although the meaning is by and large clear, not too many sentences are correct.

The literature review is poor. The paper is riddled with assertions and claims that should be supported by references. The paper reads as an advertisement for XXX. It is not clear that the author is independent of XXX.

The AA model of XXX is not as innovative as the author claims. There are now many XX that follow this model (American Geophysical Union, for example), and the author should survey these model to see which one first introduced the elements of the XXX model.

The model is also not as successful as the author claims. ……Overall, the presentation and the contents of the paper can only mean that I reject that the paper be rejected.

Reviewer: 2

The are two major problems with this paper:

(1) It is missing the context of (and citations to) what is now know as the "two-sided" market literature including that directly related to … (e.g. Braunstein, JASIS 1977; Economides & Katsanakas, Mgt. Sci., 2006; McCabe & Snyder, B.E. J Econ Analysis, 2007).

(2) The writing quality is not up to the standard of a US scholarly journal.

Reviewer: 3

1. The author should accentuate his contributions in this manuscript.

2. It lacks analytical methodologies to support author’s discoveries.

3. Description style material like this manuscript requires structured tables & figures for better presentations.

英文期刊审稿意见模板

1、目标和结果不清晰。 It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader. 2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。 In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical methods used in the study. Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments should be provided. 3、对于研究设计的rationale: Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design. 4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨: The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation. 5、对hypothesis的清晰界定: A hypothesis needs to be presented。 6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念: What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio? 7、对研究问题的定义: Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear, write one section to define the problem 8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literature review: The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel. 9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification: There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous work. 10、严谨度问题: MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that. 11、格式(重视程度): In addition, the list of references is not in our style. It is close but not completely correct. I have attached a pdf file with "Instructions for Authors" which shows examples. Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and formatted. If you are unsure, please consult the formatting nstructions to authors that are given under the "Instructions and Forms" button in he upper right-hand corner of the screen. 12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):

SCI 回复整理

暑假中了2篇SCI文章,影响因子都在IF=1.5-2.0之间。其实,在此之前,本人已经发表了若干SCI,而且已经是两个期刊的Reviewer。但尽管如此,随着文章积累越多,对SCI写作的认识也有所熟悉和深入。下面谈谈一些体会,与大家分享。 第一篇:去年12月份投稿,7月份返回意见。结论是:“I am pleased to inform you that your paper has been accepted for publication provided that you amend it according to the concerns raised in the review report given below.”实际上,这个结论已经非常好了。我看了以下审稿意见,然后就逐条的进行了Response。其中Response letter的格式我是参考了我审稿过的一篇德国学者的回复模式(我认为非常好)。但是,在审稿意见中,有一条意见要我对实验过程做一描述。我认为完全没有必要,所以没有改此项。很快,R1版文件被主编审回。我认为应该“Complete Accept”了,但意见还是“I am pleased to inform you that your paper has been accepted for publication provided that you amend it according to the concerns raised in the review report given below.”不出所料,主编的意见就是R1中没有改的那条,而且比较客气,认为“Probably the authors did not notice this requirement. Howev er, this issue is critical: to judge the value of the reported methodological development;”没有办法,我又认真对意见进行了修改。R2版文件我认为没有问题了,就等Accept了。 可是R2返回后,主编的意见还是意见还是“I am pleased to inform you that your paper has been accepted for publication provided that you amend it according to the concerns raised in the review report given below.”这次一看,原来意见是“The paper requires careful editing for use of English.”我想应该不会啊。我又仔细审查了Text,结果还是发现了几个不应该的拼写错误。我的Word的拼写可能出问题了,前几次竟然没有发现。这次,我不敢大意了,俗话云:事不过三。如果再有问题,主编的大斧可能就来了。于是,我认真的检查了全文,写了Resonse letter: Dear the Editors and reviewers: We appreciate again your valuable comments very much, which are helpful to improve the quality of our present study. According to the comments, we have revised our paper as follows: 1)Comment s: "…….. ." According to the reviewer’s suggestions, we have checked again our spelling and rewriten or modified a number of expressions in the abstract, text, figures, and tables. Thanks ***, a reviewer of International Journal of ****, for his kind help on the text modifications(这是我表示诚意,特意加上去的). Especially, in the Acknowledgement, we added our thanks for anonymous reviewers for their helpful suggestions on the quality improvement of our present paper. 果然,R3版文件当天就被主编接受了。意见:“It gives me great pleasure to inform you that the reviewers have accepted your paper for publication.The proofs will be sent to you within three months of receipt of this email.” 通过上面的来回反复,我发现SCI回复意见一定要态度认真,逐条回复。对于中国作者,及时主编不说,也要对English进行认真核对,认真决定一切! 这次,我真的学了很多经验教训。就在我改动之间,我又准备了另外一篇,而且把这篇Accept 的文章也引用上了。 第二篇:这次准备的非常充分,尤其是语法方面画了大量功夫,内容也比较新。就是把实验数据反过来了。不是直接报数据,而是先给了模型,而后用实验去验证。我感到满意的是Introduction。这里,我充分参考了木虫上Fudanmazhen的经验,尽量在“讲故事,而不是讲历史”。结果,7月29日投出,8月5日主编返回意见:直接接受,而且说无需任何进一步改动。目前,此篇文章已经上网了。与此同时,主编还发给我一篇西班牙作者的文章,让我当Reviewer。我肯定欣然接受了。因此,我本来就是这个期刊的审稿人。当然,这是我SCI运气最好的一次,估计也是最后一次了,因为直接接受的情形确实很少,我也不奢望每篇文章都这样,除非自己当主编。但是,通过这个假期的SCI较量,

英文论文审稿意见英文版

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英文论文审稿意见范文

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