高三英语：基于给定词汇的发散思维写作范例

Samples from Ss’ Guided Creative Writing

基于给定词汇的发散思维写作范例摘录

1.GCW 20170922

Write a short message containing at least 6 of the following words or expressions.

1.arise;

2.result;

3.include;

4.appreciate;

5.somewhat;

6.survive;

7.as well as; 8.in return; 9.before long; 10.deal with

WangZhaoxing

Jack was short of math. Whenever difficult questions arose, he would pass them without thnking. As a result, he could hardly pass the math exams when the paper included some difficult questions. His friend, Joe, was concerned about him. Joe decided to help Jack to learn math. He told Jack how to deal with the problems he met with. Jack appreciated Joe’s help very much. So he helped Joe learn English in return. Before long, both of their marks rose. （80 words）

Xuziyi

There are always countless homeless animals wandering in the street including dogs, cats, pups and so on. I feel deeply sad when I see them looking at me with fear or misery like many poor people do.

I often think about how they cansurvive the cold winter. Recently, I made a new friend called “Mi”. It arose to me accidentally. “Mi” is a little cat whose hair is white. I gave her a sausage, and she ate it so quickly. It can be seen that

she must have been hungry long before I met her. Seeing these cute animals with nobody taking care of them, I hope the Animal Protecting Association can do more to deal with this sort of problem. （122 words）

LiuLongxin

A big earthquake happened in some area of southeastern part of France. The earthquake resulted in hundreds of people’s deaths. The government sent the resue team to the area before long. All survivorsappreciated the food and water which were served in time. A girl, who was 6 years old, was saved by her dog. After the earthquake, the girl shared her food with the dog in return for its bravery. She was somewhat touched by her dog’s spirits. (79 words) Huangcaixing

L: Bob, my boss has made me finish a program including lots of calculation before this Friday. You know, I’m not go od at it. How can I deal with the problem?

B: Don’t worry, Lily. You have just entered this company as a new-born bird. You must do the job by yourself. If you always rely on others for a result, you will not survive in the company.

L: I appreciate your su ggestion. I’ll invite you to have a big lunch in return. B:No, thanks.

2. GCW20171011

Write a short message containing all the following words or expressions.

1.award;

2.benefit;

3.bring up;

4.harmful;

5.tradition;

6.manage to do;

7.balance;

HuangCaixing

Jim managed to get a job which has high awards every month. And he just got his first salary. He planned to buy a small machine which is beneficial to his mother. Jim’s mother has brought him up by herself. She did a lot of part-time jobs for her son and the jobs were harmful to her health. Jim is a traditional Chinese man. He decides to take care of his mom (forever). The machine can balance body fitness. So Jim will buy one as a surprise for his mom when her birthday comes this Sunday. (97 words)

WuMingyu

In some fatories, they use the traditional way to exhaust dirty water. It is harmful to our environment, and it destroys the balance of nature. The government should award the factories which don’t exhaust dirty water. What these factories do benefits our environment. They also bring up trees ouside the factries. They have managed to get awards from the government. (60 words)

Li Chuchu

Our family has a special tradition that every child who reaches the age of 18 must bring up a flower. I am 18 years old now. In order to win a mysterious award, I managed to keep the flower growing in a balanced way. I offered every benefit to the flower and avoided anything harmful to it. So I brought up the most beautiful flower. My mother then told me that I had gained the award

of learning to take care of and protecting one thing. It is the best gift for me.

(94 words)

ChenYuheng

Awarding your child when he has done the right things is a traditional way to bring him up. It can benefit the child in a short time. But it can also be harmful to his life (in the long run), because it makes your child lose the ability of managing to learn by himself. It breaks the balance of learning independently. (57 words)

WuJiawei

Awarding is an important thing for parents to bring up their children when they have done some good thing instead of doing something harmful. In China beating children as a parent is a tradtion, but it isn’t true (nowadays). Parents need to manage to keep a good balance between temper and consequence. SuLiwen

Eddie is a boy who (was) brought up by a single mother in a traditional family. Eddie worked hard and (was) awarded a lot of prizes at school. Last month his school held a sports meeting. In order to benefit his body, he took part in the high jump (competition). Although it may be harmful to him because he has a heart attack. Fainally, he successfully kept his balance and managed to win in the competition. (74 words)

Caijingge

The Smiths are praised for the way they bring up their children and

(often) get an award for their children’s schooling. Not being anger with their children is the Smiths’ tradition. They think it a benefit. Fightin g against children is harmful to communication with them. Maybe you and your children will have conflicts.

On balance, it is necessary to get along (well ) with your children. (64 words)

LiKe

Sue is not a traditional girl. She was brought up by a couple of wolves. When she was fifteen, a team of scientists found her and took her back to the human world. She managed to learn to act like a human and graduated from a university. After getting a bachelor’s degree, she realized air and water pollution was harmful to the earth, so she decided to keep balance between city ground and wild ground. She was devoted to planting trees. She has planted over 500 trees so far (and) lots of people (have) benefit(ed) from it. The government (has)give(n) her an award. (103 words)

ZhangYixin

He was brought up by a traditional family. His parents always award him when he gets a great grade. They think it is a benefit for his study. Actually, it is harmful to his growth. Because of his parents’ behaviour, he often manages to get (a good grade) in a cheating way. Having learnt this thing, his teacher called his parents. She told them a great grade doesn’t mean angthing. They need to find a fit balance between grade and praise.

MaYichen

My family is very traditional. My mom thinks sitting somewhere (for a) long time is harmful to health. So she manages to (make me) do more exercise, (for which) she bought me a (pair of) New Balance and said if I ran 1 km a day she would award them to me. Time goes by. I think that is very beneficial to me. My mom is (often) priased for the way she brings me up.(68 words) XingHuisi

Mary brought up her daughter Lily alone. But she wanted to give Lily the best education. When Lily was very little, Mary used the traditional way to educate her. Mar y was very strict with her. But it didn’t work. On the contrary, it was harmful to Lily. She became a very shy girl. So Mary changed her way. She managed to build up the balance of award and punishment. From then on, Lily has (always) been awarded by her mom, and she has become more and more confident. Mary thinks this way really benefits her and her daughter. (97 words)

LiuLongxin

Peter was born in a traditional family. His parents managed to bring him up, but he was so (lack of) self-awareness t hat he didn’t study hard at all. His teacher wanted to make him better. After a deep talking, teacher promised him that she would give him an award if he did a good job in his grades. It was no harm to him (after all). He began to balance his time between play and study. This benefited him a lot. Finally, he became a good student at school. (85

words)

HeYue

When I was a child, my grandma brought me up. She managed to make me a optimistic girl. She often took me to do some beneficial things. In the spare time, we would clean the street around our house. As (an) award, I would get some candles.

To let me grow with (a) healthy body, my grandma cooked in balance. Sometimes, she would cool traditional dishes for me. They tasted so good.

I love my grandma forever. With her protection, I was away from harmful things.

WeiZhao

An award is always (a) benefit to people. Actually, this is a traditional thinking. Sometimes (an) award is also harmful. If you (only) manage to think highly of the award and don’t keep th e balance of your mind, the award (may) become really dangerous. We know it is difficult for us to bring up the right way of treating an award, but we have to try (our best). (64 words)

XuZiyi

Everybody has their own grandparents, right? My grandparens brought me up when I was still a child. Unlike the traditional ways of education, she taught me things with awards and always let me discover things by myself instead of just telling me how it goes. That really benefits me a lot. But as time goes by, things (begin to) change.

As I grow up, the time I can spend on my grandmother is getting less and less. I must balance my life and hers. I managed to visit her every week but I know that she still feels lonely frequently. I think this might be harmful to her.

(Therefore) I still need to try harder to get my time managed well.

Wang Zhaoxing

The relationship between parents and children is hard to be balanced now, although both of them have managed to get along well with each other. Some parents bring up their children in a traditional way. They often blame their children for what they haven’t done successfully. They think this way will help make their children do better. But actually, it’s harmful to the children.

The negative effects will last for a lifelong time. (So) It is necessary (for parents) to award (their) admiration to children.

(81 words)

3.GCW20171024

Write a short message with all the following words and expressions applied in it.

1.reduce;

2.support;

3.a variety of;

4.unique;

5.truly;

6.rid…of…;

7.advance;

YangShaojun

There are a variety of salad dressings in the supermarket. The latest Thousand Island Dressing has come out (as) a new one that (is said to) reduce half the fat. After (being) rid of the fat, (this type of) Thousand Islans dressing is healthier for its unique recipe. So it (has) got a lot of support from girls.

Notify girls in advance (that) it truly can’t make you slim. (69words) ZhaoQingyang

In order to get rid of John’s bad habit(s), his mother tried a variety of ways. With her support, John reduced all of them and got the degree in advance. Now he is a truly u nique student.(37words)

ChenJiyuan

As the unique child in the family, I have a variety of interest class(es) after school,(in) which (I) can learn (some) knowledge in advance. In order to support my class(es), my parents reduce other spend(ings). But in true fact, I want to get rid of the pressure (from) study.(49 words)

ZhangYixin

H.G. Company is (a) unique firm in Y. City which produces a variety of machine(s). However, the manager doesn’t sell them truly(in the right way).So the company (lost) (the) government’s support and (was) forced to reduce its output. With the intention of rid ding (himself) of punishment, the manager, who was wanted by the police, ( )went to America in advance. (61words)

WuJiawei

As everyone know(s), human’s (truly common) mission is reduc ing the pollution (from) their home---the Earth. In order to support (the) strategy of sustainable development. More and more people have begun to live in low-carbon lifestyle in a variety of ways.

Lots of unique methods (have been) present(ed) to (us) to protect the environment. Most of them are getting rid of air pollution in (cities).

I think (the advance d technology) must be promising in the future. (75 words) (Dropped truly)

KongYueheng

Tom’s (true) friend, Jack(,) has a unique hobby-

--learning Advance d Maths. In order to do a variety of exercises about Math, he reduced some time () which should be used to learn history and (went) so

far as to rid (himself) of his leisure time, so that he could find more time to support his desire to learn Math. (60 words)

HeYue

In advance, I stood on ()top of the Canyon. I held (up) my breath, and jumped towards (the bottom of) the valley. Among a variety of sports, I like bungee best. It can make me rid (myslef) of stress. I can (truly) fly (like) a bird.. The feeling is unique. But my fa mily (don’t) support me (in doing) this, so I have to reduce times on this sport().(68 words)

LiuSilong

When I was a child, I () used to waste food. I took a variety of dishes into my bowl and then (had) much of them (left). My mom advanced a suggestion that if I (left) (any) dishes, she would reduce my pocket money. Conversely, if I ate them all, she would give me a unique award. My dad supported her idea,too.

Since then, I (have) got rid of food wastage. I am truly thankful to my mom.

(78 words)

4.GCW20171114

Write a short passage using all the following words and expressions in it.

1.attract;

2.guide;

3.accuse…of…;

4.in place;

5.delighted;

6.ahead of;

7.assistant;

WangZhaoxing

We went to the forest with deight but got lost. The guide and his assistant were accused of lacking for preparation ahead of time. But we soon forgot it because we found the scenery attractive and started having a barbeque in place so that there would not be forest fire. (50words)

ZhangYixin

H.G. was delighted because he graduated ahead of time under his teacher’s

guidance. His first job was an assistant in an attractive park. However, the

manager accused him of not being in place on the third day. (37words) LiChuchu

I was invited to take part in a splendid party. In order not to be accused of improper clothes, my assistant helped me to pick up a beautiful dress which was ahead of fashion. When I arrived at the party, the waiter guided me to the hall and let me wait in place. Instantly, many visitors were attracted by the beautiful clothes and talked with me. I was delighted and enjoyed the party.

(73 words)

XuZiyi

The judge guided the criminal in with his assistant’s help. This judgement had attracted lots of people, who were in place now. The judgement was about to begin and the criminal sat ahead of those policemen. He was accused of murder. Because of the judgement, everyone was delighted. (48words) LiuChufan

Last Friday we were guided to visit the Great Wall, which is one of the most famous attractions in Beijing. We were all excited and delighted on that day. Some students walked ahead of the team with teachers to be assistants to make sure everyone was in place. When we saw the signature carved in the wall, we accused the person who carved it of what he/ she did. (67 words) LiRuoxin

A big company’s assistant was accused of revealing company secrets. Before that, everybody thought he was a very excellent employee in place. At bar, he said he was attracted by money, but a delight not guided by by morals is not real. Conscience should be ahead of interest. (48 words)

WuMingyu

With the guide of my classmate, I finally arrived at the dormitory. On the way, I was attracted by the view of the new school and met the assistant of our teacher. She accused me of my being late for the first day of school. When I arrived at the dormitory, I put my things in place. Seeing the tidy room, I feel deighted. Students of the next room were ahead of time. They acted more

quicly than us. ( 79 words)

GaoBowen

The Internet has attracted many teenagers and guided them to a way which leads to failure. Some parents accused the application developers of not making their children put study in place. But children are delighted to use their phone to contact others and may even fall in love with others ahead of normal time. Parents should be assistants of their children to lead them back to the right way. (65words)

LiuSilong

A new supermarket was opened and it attracted many people’s attention. Every section has an assistantahead of the shelf guiding people to find what they need. Most people were deighted. But something terrible happened last weekend. A customer didn’t put something he didn’t want any more in place. He didn’t follow the advice of the assistant and hit her with a shopping basket. Now he has been accused of hurting a person deliberately.

(74 words)

5.GCW20171128

Please write a short passage using all the following words and phrases.

(10 minutes)

1.figure

2.accustomed

3.quantities of

4.make one’s way

5.suit

6.absolutely

7.put up with

LiChuchu

Lily is a pretty girl and has a good figure. She used to be accustomed to making her way to school in her school suit. She even didn’t have quantities of different clothes. But now she absolutely can’t put up with it