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商志高分作文模板

商志考研大作文

第一段:

○1.Whoever in front of this image(s)/cartoon/picture will be greatly shocked/striked. How amusing and interesting it is! What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that 这里写对漫画笼统地描述。从微观上再描述一下○2.Odd and funny as it looks . Such happenings are far from being rare and we cannot afford to ignore them.【也可以这样写Odd and funny as it seems to be, such stories (story)/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practice are so pervasive that we cannot afford to ignore them.】

第一段备用1:

○1.What an interesting an enlightening painting it is! It is indicative of a serious yet common social phenomenon :这里写对漫画笼统地描述。从微观上再描述一下.○2.However ridiculous and far fetched it looks (seems to be); the drawer intends far deeper meanings than what is shown superficially. 第一段备用2:

○1.How amusing and enlightening the above illustration is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help laughing :这里写对漫画笼统地描述。从微观上再描述一下. ○2.Simple as it looks, its intended (implied) meaning goes much deeper .What on earth does the drawer really aim to convey?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 注释:上面的三个○1.之间都是可以相互交换位置的,三个○2.之间也是可以相互交换位置的;即第一段是由○1.+对漫画笼统地描+○2.组成的,选一个自己喜欢的组合就行了。

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 第二段:

◇一Obviously we can easily define what the painter subtly intends to reflect (communicate) to us. The strong and clear message suggested is that 这里写漫画反映的主旨。接下来举例证明漫画反映的现象◇二According to recent survey conducted by CCTV(Chinese Academy of social Sciences/Xinhua News/China Daily/People’s Daily/Fudan Unive rsity/Peking University /Tsinghua University) 28.6%(这个比例自己随便写) people 主旨(或用一种笼统地切题方法如are following this tide).It is alarming that a growing number of similar events are occurring .Nowhere in history has the issue of __表示主旨的词__ been concerted so much as in our society today.(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情,此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来)“______ 见下面的例句________” 直接引语__职务

____,Says Dr. Sun Dong,

职务有:(用副职免得阅卷老师认识)

Vice-present of Xiamen University

Vice-director of the Sociological Research Center attached to Chinese

Academy of social Sciences

Vice-dean of Sociology Depart of Fudan University

例句:Nowhere says Dr. Sun Dong, __职务_, “It is alarming Such stories/upsetting/parallels are available in nearly all walks of life in our contemporary community.”(这里是利用名人名言举证观点)Failure to realize the severity of the grim situation many significantly decrease our chances of success. It is hard to imagine what our society would be like years later provided such practices go unchallenged. Indeed, the whole society should be made aware that any prompt actions of great benefit to all.

第二段备用:

◇一What the drawing conspicuously mirrors/illustrates goes far beyond/more than a simple drawing, instead, it carries thought-provoking/important /striking implications.The cartoon reminds me of a few interesting stories.接下举例子说明:◇二A case in point is an acquaintance of mine who _______________. Another telling example is one of my former colleagues, who __________________. An acquaintance of mine may well serve as a good example _____________________.表原因:What bring about/account for this strange phenomenon? I am strongly convinced that this is partly because ___________________, and this is partly because ___________________.What 上句话?Some many claim that this phenomenon results from_________________, while I am strongly convinced that the primary reason goes much deeper: _________________________.

第二段的结构是利用第一步(1~2句话)再次突显漫画所要表达的主题或现象。紧接着第二步(3~4句话)通过举例的方式来证明这种现象的普遍性或严重性。然后第三步写一下出现这种现象的原因(原因容易写的话就写,不容易总结的就不用写了)。

第三段:

○I Much can be done. What tops the agenda, I deem, is to help/encourage people to develop positive and wholesome outlook on life as well as the word. ○II Besides/what’s more, noble and worthy values and qualities such as courage, honesty, diligence and perseverance should be encouraged/fostered and

cherished. ○ШAdditionally, we should appeal to the government to make sustained and concerted efforts to reverse/curb/promote the worsening trend. Only in these ways can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.○IV Although it is easier said than done, there are god reasons to expect that such a phenomenon can be terminally ended or at least reduced.

第三段备用 1 :

○I To solve the problem, I am strongly convinced that all of us should make sustained and concert efforts. For one thing, school and the mass media should serve as a counterbalance to this grim trend, doing their utmost to develop noble worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people to the growing threat of the worsening situation.○II For another, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.Fortunately, due to attention has been paid and effective measures have been taken. ○IV Although we still have a long way to go, this, I believe, is a promising start . A campaign to主旨切题_has begun , a happy, healthy and harmonious society may not be far behind .(历年真题阅读句子改写)

第三段的结构是:对于上述现象我们应该怎么做,即发表观点。○I句表示对于这种现象我们有很多改善的的地方,顺势说出第一种措施,然后再写上面○II○Ш措施;最后,表示尽管如此,还应该~~~~~。这几个句子可以自个根据习惯进行组合,结构一致就行了!

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其实结构是很简单清晰的,主要是他已经帮我们找好了比较华丽高级的语句,我们背一下就可以了!得高分的原因就是因为句子写的比较高级吧!

好了,最后祝你考个好成绩!⊙▂⊙

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