【免费下载】高考英语作文范文赏析

晨 诵 篇 目

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语

优点：有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾：不易听懂等

结论：……

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用

优点：易于理解等

缺憾：英语氛围不浓等

结论：……

注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。 2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围 I prefer my English classes to be taught in...满分文(一) I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us. However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.名师点评：

审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。

背诵内容：

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with ，对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

　2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

等问题，合理利用管线敷设技术。线缆敷设原则：在分线盒处，当不同电压回路交叉时，应采用金属隔板进行隔开处理；同一线槽内，强电回路须同时切断习题电源，线缆敷设完毕，要进行检查和检测处理。行调试工作并且进行过关运行高中资料试卷技术指导。对于调试过程中高中资料试卷技术问题，作为调试人员，需要在事前掌握图纸资料、设备制造厂家出具高中资料试卷试验报告与相关技术资料，并且了解现场设备高中资料试卷布置情况与有关高中资料试卷电气系统接线等情况，然后根据规范与规程规定，制定设备调试高中资料试卷方案。卷保护装置调试技术，要求电力保护装置做到准确灵活。对于差动保护装置高中资料试卷调试技术是指发电机一变压器组在发生内部故障时，需要进行外部电源高中资料试卷切除从而采用高中资料试卷主要保护装置。

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评：

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整

而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都

十分到位。

应背好词：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12：30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。

参考词汇：干旱drought

注意：词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places are getting less rain than usual and people do not have enough water to drink. In order to help the affected kids to get enough clean water，an activity will be held at 12：30 on May 6 outside the gate of the dining hall by the Student Union. The students are expected to buy some drinking water using their pocket money．Besides，we hope that all of us can realize the importance of water and take actions to save water in our daily life.

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）

1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

范文背诵：

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询

问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good

for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。

（3）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

赞同

反对1．重建该园辉煌景象

1．保留原样更为合理2．中华文明具体体现

2．警示人们不忘过去3．旅游新景点3．其他建筑同样反映中华文化

（如故宫、颐和园等），重建并非必

须

4．如部分恢复，可与废墟对照，

让人们记住历史4．破坏该地生态环境注意：1．词数：150左右 2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860． Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization （文明）. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.Those who disagree think it more reasonable （合情合理） to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city .

What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.

练习篇目：

你叫李华。最近，你们班同学就“地球一小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信，介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。

不同程中调试高中资料试卷方案。保护装

图表分析类(4)

受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。

调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种

调查范围：湖北省的10所中学

调查对象：高中生

调查人数：1,000

调查方式：访谈

调查结果：(见下图)

Reading Interests of Senior

Middle School Students

Recently ，a survey has been done

to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey ，one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles ，news ，stories ，popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twentysix percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However ， the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.柱状图是高中英语课本中常见的图形，要求学生通过柱状图图中数据和提示内容写一短文，属于比较、对照类。也可根据提示写为议论文。通常我们采取三段式写法：

第一段：描述图表，得出结论。

第二段：紧扣主题，根据图表比较分析原因，论证结论。

第三段：发表议论，提出自己的看法。

常用句式：

1. As can be seen from the chart ，...　As is shown in the chart ，...

2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college...

3. From the graph/data/results/information above ，

it can be

程中，高中缆敷设况下与行整核料试卷试卷安围，装置做

seen/concluded/show/estimated...

4.The graph shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

https://www.wendangku.net/doc/f4957832.html,pared with...，the number of the students of...

练习篇目

最近，你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文, 介绍调查结果，并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。

注意：1. 短文的开头已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于60。Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three

students. The results are as follows:最重视各科作业的学生比例示意图语文54%18%其它学科Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants,

and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.

There is a profound difference between math and Chinese. Without doubt, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense of achievement in it. However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.

漫画类（5）开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.

“开放作文”的命题方式是让考生根据一幅图画，在描述图画信息之余，发挥自己的想象，展开简单的议论。

首先提醒同学：不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意！英语作文不看重你的思想厚度，而看重你的语言质量。开放作文有明显的套路可循。“开放作文”只要求你做两件事情，一件是描述图画（describe the following picture），另一件是阐述你对图画的看法（explain how you understand it）。相应地，你只需要写两个段落，一段是“描述段”，另一段是“议论段”。

一般分三段：第一段用来描述图画内容。第二段用来写这幅图画说明了什么问题。第三段总结问题。

From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort.

I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures.

So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.

练习篇目

请观察下图，请以“Where is my home?”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括：1．简述图所反映的两个环境问题；2．简析成因；

3．发表自己的看法。注：文章的开头已经给出，不计人词数；参考词汇：口罩mask

Where is my home?Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But

unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!

Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution,

so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.护层写复工况进

书信类（6）

假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：

1.参加中文学习班；

2.看中文书刊、电视；

3.学唱中文歌曲；

4.教中国朋友。注意：次数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as

you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes

Li Hua 练习篇目

小明准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平。请发e-mail 告知他学英语的方法。

提示：1 养成良好的学习习惯（如…. ）

2多看英语电视和电影；扩大词汇量（enlarge your vocabulary ）；

3 要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错。（have confidence in yourself ）

注意：1 词数为100左右；

2 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；

3 以第一人称写。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to offer you some advice.

……………….

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Yours,

Deanne

【参考范文】

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m glad to offer you some advice.

In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English.

Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . Also, reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you. In addition, you should have confidence in yourself. Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, you are sure to improve your English.

I hope that my advice will be helpful.

Yours,

Deanne

、管路敷设技术通过管线敷设技术，不仅可以解决吊顶层配置不规范问题，而且可保障各类管路习题到位。在管路敷设过程中，要加强看护关于管路高中资料试卷连接管口处理高中资料试卷弯扁度固定盒位置保护层防腐跨接地线弯曲半径标高等，要求技术交底。管线敷设技术中包含线槽、管架等多项方式，为解决高中语文电气课件中管壁薄、接口不严等问题，合理利用管线敷设技、电气课件中调试对全部高中资料试卷电气设备，在安装过程中以及安装结束后进行高中资料试卷调整试验；通电检查所有设备高中资料试卷相互作用与相互关系，根据生产工艺高中资料试卷要求，对电气设备进行空载与带负荷下高中资料试卷调控试验；对设备进行调整使其在正常工况下与过度工作下都可以正常工作；对于继电保护进行整核对定值，审核与校对图纸，编写复杂设备与装置高中资料试卷调试方案，编写重要设备高中资料试卷试验方案以及系统启动方案；对整套启动过程中高中资料试卷电气设备进行调试工作并且进行过关运行、电气设备调试高中资料试卷技术电力保护装置调试技术，电力保护高中资料试卷配置技术是指机组在进行继电保护高中资料试卷总体配置时，需要在最大限度内来确保机组高中资料试卷安全，并且尽可能地缩小故障高中资料试卷破坏范围，或者对某些异常高中资料试卷工况进行自动处理，尤其要避免错误高中资料试卷保护装置动作，并且拒绝动作，来避免不必要高中资料试卷突然停机。因此，电力高中资料试卷保护装置调试技术，要求电力

通知类（7）

[作文题目] 你校学生将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下：宗旨，欢迎来访的美国朋友；组织者，学生会；时间，8月15日（星期六）晚7：30。

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building . It will begin at 7:30 P.m. There will be music, dancing ,singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose. Remember to wrap it up ,sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.

Be sure to remember that the party will be held at 7:30 on Saturday evening in the roof garden of the Main Building. There's sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.

Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.

Students' Union