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写作亮点举例

1.Take Jeremy Lin//Linsanity/Lincredible,a legendary NBA basketball player.His stunning success stems largely from his decades-long emphasis on.（素质）

2.Newly-re-elected US President,Barack Obama,the excellent embodiment of American dream,who went through an unusual growth history,

achieved his own glorious personal accomplishment and gained far-ranging support with his,uses his own experiences to show us the

encouraging creed---“Yes,we can!”.（品德）

3.Mo won the2012Nobel Prize in Literature,making him the first Chinese national to win the award.Everyone wonders what kind of soil

nurtured him.Drastic and dramatic changes have transformed the country over the past few decades and the complex and sophisticated changes

in people's lives both materialistically and spiritually are definitely a mother lode of inspiration that novelists can mine.Uniqueness determines

successes.（文化）（成功）

4.Wu Bin,a48-year-old bus driver from east China's city of Hangzhou,，who saved24of his passengers after being fatally injured by a piece

of metal that flew through his bus's windshield，has garnered praise for his selfless deed with his heroic efforts and professional ethics.Heroes are not just those people who have superpowers,but regular people who do good deeds day after day.（美德）

5.Luo Yang,the man who enabled the country's first carrier-based fighter jet to fly high.,died of a heart attack soon after the aircraft successfully completed landing and take-off tests,like a soldier who died on the battle field.The base of a strong country is its elites who are willing to sacrifice themselves.(爱国精神patriotism)

考研英语精选必背真题范文

1、精读：仔细阅读范文，欣赏并标出精彩的用词和句型，体会上下文中表达的精妙，提高对精彩语言的敏感度，要多写，多记。

2、背诵：背精彩词汇，背精彩句型，背精彩句子，背精彩框架，背精彩段落，通过背诵完成从欣赏到掌握的过程，别人的变成自己的。

3、默写：将背过的句子，段落默写下来，检查核对，看看是否精确掌握了每一个词汇。

4、互译：中英、英中互译，再与原文核查核对，发现自己不足，纠正提高。使自己逐步写出规范的语言，达到和原文作者相似的水平。

5、效仿：在范文中学到的单词，词组，句型，框架放在新的语境下模仿创作，造句写作。在新的作文中保留一定闪光点。

6、创作：学习优秀范文的框架，建立自己的模版，多背记相关素材。然后自己学习写作创新。

写作补充材料

考研英语作文模板

模板一（反面典型）

(1)As is graphically depicted in the picture,图画主题词，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,详述漫画细节（2——3句），(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of主题词which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.(4)This should be severely condemned or made illegal.(5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1)To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon,several grim effects have been put forward.

(2)To get started,主题not only does harm to our physical and mental well-being but also triggers//ignites//a frustrating and humiliating life.(3)In addition,nothing is more harmful than主题to contradict with a harmonious society.(4)Last but not the least,no issue is as harmful as主题to increase family burdens,which is a threatening situation we are reluctant to experience//undergo.

(5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought of than the example mentioned below.//Now,a typical case may illustrate this point more clearly...........(6)According to a survey made by China Daily,approximately60%of young guys who have ever experienced主题will lead a tedious life or even feel loss of hope about the future.(7)If we cannot take useful means,we may not control this trend,and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly,we will see the gloomy future of something.

(1)From what have been discussed above,it is，consequently,imperative that some effective measures be implemented to curb主题.(2)We should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.(3)Meanwhile,it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction.(4)However,it is easier said than done.(5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6)Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

模板二（正面典型）

(1)As is graphically depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2)The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings,the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous(重要的)and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.(2)Undoubtedly,it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty,that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.(3)If we don not cooperate sincerely,we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future.(4)From my perspective,there are several advantages that can be given as below.To begin with,nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.(5)Secondly,no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought of than the example mentioned

below.(7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things.(8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties,it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.(2)It is therefore,imperative that some effective measures be implemented to make your team work more efficient.(3)We should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits.

(4)It is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5)It is easier said, nevertheless,than done.Practice is the most significant factor.(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

考研英语一写作十大必背黄金句型

1、It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be unveiled and enforced to

harness and curb this urgent trend.

2、Simple as the drawing is,the moral behind itis as profound as ocean.

3、The past decade has witnessed a huge prosperityin economy owing to the thirty-plus reform and

opening-up policy being carriedout,bringing about a bulk of problems at the same time, with the followingone being the foremost.

4、The cartoonist’s real purpose does not lie in the fact itself,but to lead us to find what hides

behind the ice-burg.

5、Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of…,with the following one being

the foremost.//

Numerous examples can be given,but this will suffice.

6、The disadvantages cannot weighed against the benefits.(利大于弊)The benefitsare in large

measure canceled out by the problems.(弊大于利。)

7、Were the situation to continue as it is,ourfuture generation would not bother to think of excuse

for us.We would pay the high price.(——不好的主题)

8、Everything emerges wrapped with both rewards and risks.(事物都有利弊)It is imperative that

the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks(should)be neglected,during this process,especially in the times of knowledge explosion,when the news,facts,opinions

even rumors have been bombarding us from every inch of the globe.(万能时间状语)

9、With a proper law and alert public,it willonly be a matter of time before the problem becomes

things of the past.

10、Only in a reasonable,prosperous and harmonious atmosphere can we dream of the ideal

paradise in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.

考研正反论证例文（网络的远与近）（19分）

Asillustrated in the cartoon,each guy sits in their own work room.In front ofthem is a computer.Everyone looks at the screen carefully,and communicatewith their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face.Theirwork places are placed like a net.And below the cartoon,there is a caption:the near and far among the Internet.

Fromthe cartoon,we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such amessage: with the popularity of computers,people from all over the globebecome nearer by using the internet to communicate with each other.Meanwhile,people also become far away from their friends.All of us accept the fact thatthe development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life,Numerous examples can be given,but this will suffice.We can buy a book on the net instead of going to abookstore.Besides,we can communicate with our friends on the net withoutgoing out of home.Everything,nevertheless,emerges wrapped with both rewards and risks. We can’t ignore the other side of these:the time we spend withfriends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week.It willmake us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool

on the net to talk withfriends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.

Tomy best understanding,we should use the net to communicate with each other ina proper way.It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us.If we wantto keep our friendship more effectively,we should spend more time with them inour real life.Only in this way can we not only make full use of thecommunication tool on the net but also make our friendship stronger.

考研英语经典语料

必备经典语料

一、十大功能段落

1）话题引出段

Nowadays,there is a growing concern over the issue of……

People in growing numbers are directing their attention to……

When it comes to……,people’s notions may vary from one to another.

Recently,a heated discussion has sprung up as to……

2）图画图表描述段

As is vividly shown in the picture,……

It is clearly depicted in the picture that……

This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of……

The chart above provides a series of essential figures,illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of…years.

3)观点对比段

Opposite voices are now rising in the debate.Some people firmly believe that…….On the contrary,quite a few people argue that……

The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions.One focuses on……..;the other opinion revolves around……

4）利弊列举段

No garden without weeds,and this issue is no exception.Above all,…In addition…More importantly…However,the negative influence it renders should not be neglected...not only…but also Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse.?The following list of advantages and disadvantages can explain everything.

5）举例说明段

The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon.

6）原因列举段

Why should this phenomenon take place?There are generally three factors accounting for it. Having taken everything into consideration,we may attribute the sharp change to three aspects. 7）意义阐释段

The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to….

Having scrutinized the details of the picture,we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it.

8）归纳结论段

Taking into account all the analyses above,we may confidently come to the conclusion that……9）预测趋势段

There is no denying that……will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse direction. Undoubtedly,the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near future.

10）建议措施段

Therefore,it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures.

As far as I am concerned,two effective measures must be immediately taken to pull through the crisis.

二、精选句式

1、The picture is thought-provoking.What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today's society

3、Examples to prove the view are abundant.The most persuasive are the cases

5、The set of drawings above vividly depicts……As is shown in the first cartoon

6、To begin with,the purpose of the drawings is to show us that……yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.

7、Accordingly,it is vital for us to derive positive implication from these thought-provoking drawings.On the one hand,we can frequently use them to enlighten

8、What the picture conveys goes far beyond only a……Instead,it carries cultural meanings.The fact that

9、The picture below illustrates the real meaning of……by stressing the fact that

10、I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example：

11、I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in…（总结）

12、The purpose of this picture is to show us that due(great enough)attention has to be paid to……

13、Why does this phenomenon appear?There are several possible reasons for this.Above all……In addition

三、常用于开头的句式

例句：Recently,the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

例句：In the eyes of the public,official corruption means taking bribes.But such corruption comes in many different forms.

例句：Nowadays,a heated debate about whether one should step forward bravely in the event of crime is under way in China.Some people believe that one should step forward bravely no matter how dangerous it is,whereas others argue that one should put his or her own safety above anything else.

例句：When it comes to fake commodities,most people contend that people should battle against the falsehood of the fakes,but other people consider that buying fake commodities means nothing but“unlucky”which is hard to avoid.

四、常用于结尾的句式

例句：It is hoped that we should pay more attention to the problems of unemployment.

例句：As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses,all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.

例句：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.例句：All the above evidence goes to show that the birth of computer has benefited our life greatly.

例句：My suggestion is that effective measures should be taken to check population growth; otherwise,the potential consequences are unimaginable.

例句：Therefore,we should not only realize that competition and cooperation,like two sides of the coin,have to go hand in hand,but fix more attention on how to make full use of…as well.

五、常用的过渡句式

例句：Although lots of people follow the fashion,I still set my heart on its negative effect on our society.

例句：It is no easy job to find every reason for the increase in the number of teenagers who run away from their homes,but,on the whole,two factors shout louder than others.First of all,….

Second,…

例句：It is obvious that radio cannot compete with television in visuality,but it still possesses substantial advantages over television.

(One of these is…Another…Still another…)

例：At first glance,the western-type democracy seems superior to any other types.But on close examination,it does not entitle every citizen of the same nation to the equal freedom to act.

六、常用于描述漫画的句式。

例句：The two pictures here illustrate how a flower in a greenhouse is destroyed when exposed to

a storm.

例句：In the first picture,a lonely small boat,in spite of the good catch,does not disturb the fishes that are swimming leisurely.While in the second one,the sea is over-crowded with fishing boats, and a lonely fish,desperately trying to escape,finds no place to hide.

例句：As can be seen from the picture,the car breaks stops on the way and cannot move any further.

例句：It is most likely that by drawing the pictures,the artist intends not only to tell us the story of fish but also to set us thinking more about nature.

七、常用图表作文的句式：

例句：According to the figures shown in the table,we can see that great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from1988to1998.

例句：After considering the information in the graph,we might conclude that the energy structure

in rural areas has been greatly improved over the past15years.

例句：By comparison with1990,it dropped by15percent.

写作亮点举例

1.Take Jeremy Lin//Linsanity/Lincredible,a legendary NBA basketball player.His stunning success stems largely from his decades-long emphasis on.（素质）

2.Newly-re-elected US President,Barack Obama,the excellent embodiment of American dream,who went through an unusual growth history,

achieved his own glorious personal accomplishment and gained far-ranging support with his,uses his own experiences to show us the

encouraging creed---“Yes,we can!”.（品德）

3.Mo won the2012Nobel Prize in Literature,making him the first Chinese national to win the award.Everyone wonders what kind of soil

nurtured him.Drastic and dramatic changes have transformed the country over the past few decades and the complex and sophisticated changes

in people's lives both materialistically and spiritually are definitely a mother lode of inspiration that novelists can mine.Uniqueness determines

successes.（文化）（成功）

4.Wu Bin,a48-year-old bus driver from east China's city of Hangzhou,，who saved24of his passengers after being fatally injured by a piece

of metal that flew through his bus's windshield，has garnered praise for his selfless deed with his heroic efforts and professional ethics.Heroes are not just those people who have superpowers,but regular people who do good deeds day after day.（美德）

5.Luo Yang,the man who enabled the country's first carrier-based fighter jet to fly high.,died of a heart attack soon after the aircraft successfully completed landing and take-off tests,like a soldier who died on the battle field.The base of a strong country is its elites who are willing to

sacrifice themselves.(爱国精神patriotism)