如何写好主题句

如何写好主题句

2007年高考以来读写任务的“写作内容”都是三个要点, 三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点，不会离题，又显得层次清楚，能让阅卷老师一目了然。

段落的主题句其实就是一句过渡的话, 用来表达观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的经历，使上下文衔接得更加紧密。

◆主题句的定义：段落主题句就是全段的核心，统帅全段，并决定全段的发展方向。全段其他句子都是围绕主题句，对其进行说明、支持或扩展的，这些句子称作“扩展句(supporting sentence)”。

◆主题句的模式：

1.说出感受

（1）你读信后的感受（2012广州一模）

I appreciate what you say and sorry to have caused you so much worry.I’m also touched

that .....

(2) 你读完这个故事后的感受

After reading the passage,I was deep in thought .....

(3)你读完这篇演讲稿后的感受（2011广州一模）

After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student who .......

可以套用的模版：

1.After reading the passage,I was shocked and at the same time I felt sorry for ......

2. After reading the passage，I'm really moved and learn a lot from .....

3.From the story, we learn that .......

4.I was deeply moved by........ It made me realize .........

实战演练：

（1）Tom来信说他现在学习压力大，请谈谈你读信后的感受。

（2）吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被评为“最美妈妈”，请谈谈你对此的感受。.

2.引出经历

（1）讲述一次想家的经历（11广东）

Like Sam, each of us may have the experience of missing our family, me included. （2）. 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。

This reminds me of an unforgettable experience of my part-time job. I once had an experience of doing a part-time job in a summer vocation .

(3)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师（2012年广东高考）

After reading this story，it suddenly reminds me of my respectable teacher Miss

Wang，an English teacher who always carries a big smile on her face.

可以套用的模版：

1.The story reminds me of ......

2.The story reminds me of my personal experience.

3.Taking_the_example_of_me,_I think it's not bad for Chinese parents to learn to be a little “westernized”！

以我为例，我认为中国父母适当西化也是不错的事情。

4.There_are_some_examples_in our daily life, among_which_is the wasting of water.

在我们的日常生活中有很多这样的例子，浪费水资源就是其中一个。

5.There_are_many_examples_to_show_that success comes from hard work. One_example_is_that 有很多例子能够证明.........。其中一个例子就是........

实战演练：

(1) 你或你同学的留堂经历。(2011佛山一模)

(2) 假如你读了一篇关于“持之以恒”的文章，用你自己或他人的经历说明持之以恒的重要性。

3.直接回答

题干是问句或含“是否”的句子，可直接回答，作为主题句

（1）你是如何处理压岁钱的？（2012佛山二模）

Unlike the the boy, I can take charge of my own lucky money.

（2）你是否赞成文中对出国游的看法？（2012广州二模）

I can't agree more with the author.(赞成）Though expensive,I still think study tours are worthwhile.

（3）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？（2009广东）

If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.

可以套用的模版：

1.As for me,I can’t agree more that... 就我而言，我非常赞同.......

2.As for me,I disagree that...

3.If I were the boy, I would keep contact with the tree and be considerate.

实战演练：

(1) 假设你当时就在事故现场，你是伸出援助之手还是袖手旁观？（2010茂名二模）

（2）你是否赞同作者的观点？

（3）你从故事中学到了什么道理？（2009广东二模）

4.复述内容

这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问，而是翻译要点作为段落的主题句，例如，要点是“谈谈……的重要性”，主题句则为“……有重要作用”，要点是“谈谈……有何重要意义”，主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。

（1）中学生活和大学生活的差别（2008广东）

From my point of view, college life will be different from the life in high school.

(2)建设绿色校园的重要性。（2011东山中学）

It is of great importance to build a green campus.

(3)你的父母是如何鼓励你学习的？（2010广东）

My parents used to encourage me like this.

可以套用的模版：

(1) Sth.is necessary to sb.

(2) It is important/significant for sb.to do sth.

(3) Sth.plays a very important role/part in...

(4) Sth.is playing an increasingly important role in our life.

(5) People are coming to realize the importance of...

(6) The significance of...cannot be overvalued.

实战演练：

(1)网络的普及给青少年带来的利弊。

(2)掌握急救知识的重要性。

5.引出建议、原因、方法、措施、步骤等

(1) 你有什么建议给文中的小男孩？（2012佛山二模）

As for the boy, I suggest that ......

(2) 你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施？（2011东山中学）

In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken.

(3) 越来越多人开始骑自行车的原因。

Nowadays,more and more people ride bicycles. The main reason is that ........

实战演练：

(1)你认为应该如何应付考试紧张？

（2）我们为什么要遵守规则制定？

6.明示观点

明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同。

1.你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。（10广东）

As far as I am concerned,I am not in favor of the measure of paying students to study. 或者I am strongly against (我不支持) encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks.

2.你对中学生博客的态度。(11广州调研）

As for myself, I support student-blogging.

3.你是否赞成推迟高中早上的上课时间。（10佛山一模）

In my view, I can’t agree more with the idea to delay the opening of the school day of Senior School.

可以套用的模版：

1.In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

2. As far as my knowledge is concerned, ...... 就我所知，

实战演练：

(1) 你对考试作弊的看法。(2011揭阳二模)

(2) 你对高中生带手机到学校有什么看法？

(3) 你对失败的看法或态度。(2009汕头一模)

【Practice 1】请根据各个写作要点，写出主题句。

(1)Tom 来信说他现在学习压力大，请谈谈你读信后的感受。

_______________________________________________________________________________ (2) 你或你同学的留堂经历。(2011佛山一模)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (3)你是如何处理压岁钱的？(2012佛山二模)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (4)你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法？(2012广州二模)

______________________________________________________________________________ (5) 你从故事中学到了什么道理？(2009广州二模)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (6) 中学生活和大学生活的差别。(2008广东)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (7) 建设绿色校园的重要性。(2011东山中学)

______________________________________________________________________________ (8) 你的父母是如何鼓励你学习的？(2010年广东)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (9) 你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施？(2011东山中学)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (10) 越来越多人又开始骑自行车的原因。

_______________________________________________________________________________ (11) 你认为应该如何应付考试紧张？

_______________________________________________________________________________ (12) 我们为什么要遵守规章制度？

_______________________________________________________________________________ _ (13) 你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法？(2012广州二模)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (14) 你对考试作弊的看法。(2011揭阳二模)

_______________________________________________________________________________ (15) 你对高中生带手机到学校有什么看法？

_______________________________________________________________________________ (16) 你对失败的看法或态度。(2009汕头一模)

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1.以约120个词就“家庭氛围（family atmosphere)”的主题发表看法，内容包括：

(1) 你是否赞同作者的观点；

(2) 你理想的家庭生活氛围；

(3) 给父母提出建议。

2..以约120个词就“学生安全问题”的主题发表看法，内容包括

(1) 请谈谈你读完这则新闻后的感受；

（2）请讲述你自己或身边朋友的有关经历；

（3）应采取何种措施保护自己的安全。

找出下列段落的主题句。

(一)

Last Monday，our class held a monitor election.This was our first election，so everyone was excited.Two of my classmates，Liu Dong and Wang Hong, took part in the race.They each gave a

speech telling us what they would do when they were elected.Then we voted for the monitor.The result was 28 to 15 in Wang Hong's favor.Wang Hong become our new monitor.The whole class cheered for her，and she promised to do the best she could for us all.

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(二)

In the first century B．C.the Chinese were already using sails to make their boats go.Sails did not come to Europe until nineteen centuries later.The kite and a machine to separate wheat into parts arrived in Europe fourteen centuries after their invention and use in China.Likewise，the introduction to Europe of different kinds of silk-working machinery shows a time lag of three to thirteen centuries.As you can see，the Chinese invented machines and tools and thought of ways to do things that were not used in the rest of the world for many centuries.

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(三)

The 15th National Book Fair was declared open in Tianjin on May 18,2005.On that day，more than 60,000 people，such as teachers，students and workers，came to the fair from all over the country.Various activities were organized，including the opening ceremony，lectures on popular science，and meetings at which writers and readers communicated face to face.People went around to look for their favourite books.Among the most popular were books about social sciences，children's books and books about foreign language learning.

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【读写任务之学会写段落主题句答案】

【Practice 1】(1) I felt terribly sorry for you when I read your letter, in which you expressed the pressure from your study. (2)This reminds me of my friend Li Hua?s experience in primary school. (3)As for me, I can take charge of my own lucky money. (4) I couldn?t agree more with the author. (赞成) Though expensive, I still think study tours are worthwhile.(反对) (5) From this story, I learned that we should (not)…(6) From my point of view, college life will be different from the life in high school. (7) It is of great importance to build a green campus. (8) My parents used to encourage me like this. (9) In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken. (10) Nowadays, more and more people ride bicycles. The main reason is

that …(11) Several effective methods can be used to solve the problem of feeling nervous in exams. (12) As members of the society, we must follow all kinds of rules made by government or schools. The reason for this can be listed as follows. (13) I couldn?t agree more with the author. (赞成) Though expensive, I still think study tours are worthwhile.（反对）(14) In my opinion, cheating in exams will have a very bad effect on middle school students?study habit. (15) I don?t think it reasonable for senior high school students to bring mobile phones to school. The reasons why I think so are as follows. (16) In my opinion, we should take an active attitude towards failure.

Keys:

I felt terribly sorry for you when I read your letter,in which you expressed the pressure from your study.

After reading the story,I was absolutely touched by Wu Juping who saved the two-year-old baby.

This reminds me of my friend Li Hua’s experience in primary school.

If I were at the scene, I would offer to help him and send him to the nearest hospital or dial 120 for help.

I’m afraid I can’t agree with the author because.....

From the story,I learn that we should........

With its widespread, the Internet brings teenagers harm as well as benefits.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s of great significance for us to know some knowledge about first aid.

Several effective methods can be used to solve the problem of feeling nervous in exams.

As members of the society, we must follow all kinds of rules made by government or schools. The reason for this can be listed as follows.

In my opinion, cheating in exams will have a very bad effect on middle school students’study habit.

I don?t think it reasonable for senior high school students to bring mobile phones to school. The reasons why I think so are as follows.

In my opinion, we should take an active attitude towards failure.

1. (1)I strongly argue against the writer?s idea because …（回答要点）

(2)In fact, my ideal family atmosphere should be completely comfortable…（重述要点）

(3) So I have some suggestions for all the parents. …（引出建议）

2.(1)After reading the sad news, I was totally shocked and wanted to express my profound grief over the victims.（说出感受）

(2) This reminds me of the story of my friend, Lily.（引出经历）

(3) To rid ourselves of the terrible accidents, we should take some measures to change this situation.（复述内容，引出措施）

答案：Last Monday，our class held a monitor election.

答案：As you can see，the Chinese invented machines and tools and thought of ways to do things that were not used in the rest of the world for many centuries.

答案：The 15th National Book Fair was declared open in Tianjin on May 18,2005.