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【2020届湖北省武汉市华中师范大学第一附属中学高考押题】假设你是李华，你校即将举办一场孔子思想讲座，主题是“见贤思齐焉，见不贤而内自省也”。请写邮件邀请对中国传统文化感兴趣的交换生Jim听讲座，内容包括:

1.时间、地点；

2.讲座主题；

3.可能的收获。

注意:

1.词数100左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:《论语》The Analects of Confucius儒家思想 Confucianism

【答案】Dear Jim,

Good news for you! There will be a lecture about Confucious next week in our school. Since you are very interested in Chinese culture, this is a good chance for you to get a glimpse of its origin- Confucianism.

The lecture is scheduled to be held at 6 pm next Friday, in Lecture Hall I. You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life. The invited professor will focus on one of Confucious’ sayings - When we see men of worth, we should think of equaling them; when we see men of a contrary character, we should turn inwards and examine ourselves.

After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality. We are a people who are good at reflecting on our thoughts and behaviours.

If you are interested in the lecture, remember to be in Lecture Hall I at 6 pm next Friday.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Jim写信，邀请他参加学校即将举办的一场关于孔子思想的讲座。体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1.时间、地点

2.讲座主题

3.可能的收获

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be interested in/ be scheduled/keep a record/ focus on/ shape/ reflect/ remember to do sth./ worth 第三步：连词成句

1. Good news for you!

2. There will be a lecture about Confucious next week in our school.

3. Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese culture, I think it is a good chance for you to get a glimpse of its origin- Confucianism.

4. The lecture is scheduled to be held at 6 pm next Friday, in Lecture Hall I.

5.You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life.

6. The invited professor will focus on one of Confucious’ sayings - When we see men of worth, we should think of equaling them; when we see men of a contrary character, we should turn inwards and examine ourselves.

7. After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality.

8. We are a people who are good at reflecting on our thoughts and behaviours.

9. If interested in the lecture, remember to be in Lecture Hall I at 6 pm next Friday.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life.中which引导非限制性定语从句；After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality.中what引导宾语从句。

【2020届河南省新乡市高三第三次模拟】假定你是你班英语科代表李华，得知许多同学长时间在网上学习英语。就此请你用英语给你班同学发一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 陈述长时间在网上学习造成的影响；

2. 你的建议（控制时间，多种形式相结合等）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear classmates,

I’m sorry to learn that many of us have spent too much time learning English on the Internet, which can obviously do harm to our bodies, especially eyesight. Thus, as the representative of English class, I want to offer the following suggestions to you.

First of all, we can limit online study time to thirty minutes a time. Secondly, we should comb ine various forms of English learning. That’s to say, online English learning should be

reasonably combined with offline English learning. In fact, we have a lot of things to do besides staying on the Internet, such as doing some written assignments and relaxing ourselves once in a while.

In short, let’s study together healthily and effectively.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求写一封电子邮件给同学们，说明长时间网上学习的影响并提出相关意见。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 写出背景信息，自己的得知同学们长时间网上学习，表达自己的意图。

2. 长时间网上学习的影响（do harm to our bodies）

3. 提出建议

1）限制上网时间（limit online study time）

2）结合多种途径学习英语（combine various forms of English learning）

3）做一些其他的事情（do some written assignments and practice spoken English）

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

do harm to; combined with; In fact; spoken English; once in a while

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m sorry to learn that many of us have spent too much time learning English on the Internet, which can obviously do harm to our bodies, especially eyesight.

2. As the representative of English class, I want to offer some suggestions.

3. We can limit online study time.

4. We should combine various forms of English learning

5. Online English learning should be combined with offline English learning.

6. We have a lot of things to do, such as doing some written assignments and practicing spoken English once in a while.

7. Let’s study together healthily and effectively.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… A nd then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：I’m sorry to learn that many of us have spent too much time learning English on the Internet, which can obviously do harm to our bodies, especially eyesight.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，除此之外还有一些固定搭配如do harm to; combined with; In fact; spoken English; once in a while等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【2020届四川省成都市高三毕业班第三次诊断】假定你是李华。你之前在网上为你校交换生Jack预定了下周六晚上7：30的川剧演出，现该演出被宣布取消，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：

1. 告知演出取消；

2. 后续事项处理；

3. 其它活动建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】One Possible Version:

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. ne xt Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a piece of pitiful news. But the thing is such. Later the opera will give the money back and then I will return it to you. Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. For example, I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

Wish you an enjoyable experience in China.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达告知朋友预定的川剧演出被取消，并告知后续处理和活动建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.告知川剧演出被取消

2.告知后续处理

3.提出活动建议

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

be sorry to tell; look forward to; a pitiful news; give the money back; some other interesting and meaningful activities; the traditional Sichuan hotpot; watch pandas

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Perfor mance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.

2. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a pitiful news.

3. Later the opera will give the money back.

4. You still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in.

5. I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods.

6. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Sec ondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the on e hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: although引导的让步状语从句Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. that引导的宾语从句和省略that或者which的定语从句I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m.

next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

【2020届辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校高中部高三第八次模拟】假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:

1.表示歉意；

2. 解释原因；

3.补救措施。

注意:1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr Smith，

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr Smith,

I' m sorry to tell you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday. Something unexpected happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother.

But don' t worry about the trip. I have explained my situation to my best friend John, who is one year older than me and can speak fluent English. He is available that day and is willing to go with you. Will it be OK with you?

I' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincercly,

Li Hua 【解析】

这篇书面表达是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的

国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件。

假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括: 1.表示歉意； 2. 解释原因；3.补救措施。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【点睛】

这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I' m sorry to tell you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday.宾语从句的运用。I have explained my situation to my best friend John, who is one year older than me and can speak fluent English.定语从句的运用。

【2020届湖南省永州市六县高三6月（第二次)联考】假定你是李华，最近在某英文论坛上看到一名叫Jonah 的澳大利亚高中生发的帖子，他提到自己想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧（Sichuan Opera)。请根据所给提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表达意愿；

2.帮助方式；

3.期待回复。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear Jonah，

How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going.

I'm sure he can be helpful. As for me, I'm a senior high school student as you are. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回一封邮件给想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧的澳大利亚高中生Jonah，告知他你愿意帮助他学习川剧。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表达意愿；

2. 帮助方式；

3. 期待回复。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

show love for；help sb. do sth.；work as；as well as；get along well with

第三步：连词成句

1. It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

2. I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu.

3. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going.

4. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!这句话中用了that引导的主语从句（it作形式主语）；使用了非常好的短语，如show love for，work as，get along well with等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【2020届广西桂林、崇左、防城港市高三6月联合模拟】假定你是李华。你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。内容包括：

1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；

2．适当运动，注意饮食；

3．避免与感冒患者接触。

注意：1．总词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear Susan,

I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather. Lots of people are in hospital because of it. Here are some tips I want to offer you.

First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather. Secondly, exercise is a good way to keep you far away from cold. Moreover, eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition. Last but not least, you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold.

I hope my suggestion will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

根据提示信息，文章要求假定你是李华,你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。写作时：1.首先注意时态一般现在时，其次人称使用第二人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段提醒他关注天气变化，及时加衣物；第二段告诉他适当运动，注意饮食；第三段提醒他避免与感冒患者接触。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。

【点睛】

本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用可几个高分句型。1. I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather 此句使用了书信表达写信目的的经典句式：I’m writing to….。 2. First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather 此句是and连接的两个并列句。 3. you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold 此句是个定语从句，先行词为patients，关系词是who。

【2020届重庆市高三6月调研考试（三诊)】假定你是李华，你校将举办太极拳（Tai Chi）比赛。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友James参加，内容包括：

1. 比赛时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 表达期待。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear James,

How is everything going? Learning that you are interested in Chinese Kongfu, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.

The competition, scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday, is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu. As planned, there will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and development of Tai Chi will be introduced. Later on, the exciting competition will be conducted, when we can watch the Tai Chi players fighting with each other. As far as I know, the members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the competition.

I cannot wait to enjoy it.

Should you be available, I strongly suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【解析】

本文书面表达为应用文，要求李华写邮件邀请James参加太极比赛。

第一步：审题

1.体裁：邀请涵

2.人称：第一人称

3.时态：一般将来时，一般现在时

4.要点：

①写作背景和写作目的

②比赛时间，活动安排

③表示期待

第二步：列要点写提纲

Para. 1 be interested in...; invite sb to do sth;

Para. 2 be scheduled to be held …; a must; will be introduced; conduct a competition; watch sb doing sth; can’t wait to do sth

Para. 3 be available; learn more about sth

第三步：连词成句

1. You are interested in Chinese Kongfu.

2. I am writing to invite you to enjoy a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.

3. The competition is scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday and it is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu.

4. There will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and development of Tai Chi will be introduced.

5. The exciting competition will be conducted, and we can watch the Tai Chi players fighting with each other.

6. The members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the competition.

7. I suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition.

第四步：润色提高

1.添加交际表达

开头添加寒暄用语：How is everything going?

结尾添加期待回复：Looking forward to your reply.

2.增加句子之间的连贯性

● As planned, there will be an opening ceremony when a short video about the history and

development of Tai Chi will be introduced.

● Later on, the exciting competition will be conducted, when we can watch the Tai Chi

players fighting with each other.

● As far as I know, the members of the Tai Chi club in our school will be part of the

competition. I cannot wait to enjoy it.

3. 使用高级表达

● Learning that you are interested in Chinese Kongfu, I am writing to invite you to enjoy

a Tai Chi competition organized by our school.

● The competition, scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday, is a must-see

for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu.

● Should you be available, I strongly suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and

enjoy the competition.

第五步：漂亮书写

【点睛】

范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 be scheduled to do sth, a must, can’t wait to do sth 等。复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如例如使用非谓语做插入语：The competition, scheduled to be held at the stadium at 9:00 next Saturday, is a must-see for any enthusiast of Chinese Kongfu. 使得句子变得更简洁也更高级。使用虚拟语气Should you be available, I strongly suggest you come to learn more about Tai Chi and enjoy the competition.让句式更为

委婉和多变。

【2020届四川省乐山市高中高三第三次调查】假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：

1. 演讲的主题；

2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；

3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Hello, everyone!

I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.

So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.

Wish you all the best. Thank you!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 演讲的主题；

2. 健康生活习惯的重要性；

3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

share with; healthy living habits; keep sb fit; prot ect…from; energy; fresh fruits; avoid doing; take exercise; regularly; wash the hands; sneeze; cough; good manner; handkerchief; cover.

第三步：连词成句

I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits.

In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.

We may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snack foods. Taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.

When you arrive home from public place, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth.

When you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.

Wish you all the best. Thank you!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.这句话运用了it作形式主语， that引导真正的主语从句。此外Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.使用了动名词做主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词和词组，如keep sb fit, regularly; protect…from等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【2020届山西省运城市高中联合体高三第三次模拟】假定你是李华, 你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括：

1. 展出的目的；

2. 举办时间；

3. 活动内容。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：文物cultural relics

Dear Robert,

______________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Robert,

Our city museum has scheduled a show of Chinese cultural relics. Being fully aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to pay a visit to the show with me.

The show, meant to promote our awareness of our history and arouse our pride in our deep-rooted culture, will take place three days away, on July 5th, lasting a whole week. Exhibited at the show will be a collection of cultural and historic relics, which reflect people's life and social development at the time.

I'll feel privileged to be your guide during the visit. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华, 你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的

外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括：1. 展出的目的；2. 举办时间；3. 活动内容。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：cultural relics(文物)；be aware of(意识到)；keen interest (强烈的兴趣)；pay a visit (参观)；take place (举行)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美

观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Being fully aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to pay a visit to the show with me.非谓语动词的运用；Exhibited at the show will be a collection of cultural and historic relics, which reflect people's life and social development at the time.运用了非限制性定语从句。

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【2020届河北省衡水中学高三第六次调考】假设你是李华，下周将是你校的英语阅读周，请写信邀请你班外教Dr． Phillips，内容包括：

1．阅读周的时间、地点；

2．阅读周设立的目的和活动安排．

3．邀请他参加．

注意：1．词数100左右．

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．

3．开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数．

【答案】Dear Dr． Phillips，

Good news! We will celebrate and enjoy our English Reading Week in the school library next week，starting from Monday． And I am writing to invite you as our honorable guest．Established by the student union to encourage life-long reading， the campaign consists of two parts，namely， "Share with Me" on the first three days and "Challenge Me" on the remaining days． In the former session， participants are supposed to introduce the book they've read and share their reviews and opinions with the audience； in the latter， students taking part in the contest are supposed to guess the title of a novel based on fractional information given such as character names and themes．

As is known to us all， you are a learned scholar． That's why I consider you the best choice to share inspiring books with us． Looking forward to your reply．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，按照要求写一封邀请信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。假设你是李华，下周将是你校的英语阅读周，请写信邀请你班外教Dr． Phillips，内容包括：1．阅读周的时间、地点；2．阅读周设立的目的和活动安排．3．邀请他参加．要点包括：。人称为第三人称。时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，目的。第二段，1．阅读周的时间、地点；2．阅读周设立的目的和活动安排．3．邀请他参加。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: celebrate；honorable；consists of ；are supposed to；as is known to us all；looking forward to等。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了一些较为高级的句式: 1．Established by the student union to encourage life-long reading， the campaign consists of two parts，namely，"Share with Me" on the first three days and "Challenge Me" on the remaining days．Established by the student union为过去分词短语作状语；to encourage life-long reading为动词不定式做目的状语。2．That's why I consider you the best choice to share inspiring books with us．本句中why 引导一个表语从句。高级句式的使用彰显了作者对英语的良好驾驭能力。