2016英语作文模板(雅思写作教程)

英语作文模板(雅思写作教程)

一边倒结构（辩论型题目）

1.总体结构

一边倒写法的结构共分为四段或五段：

如果只写两个理由段，就是四段；如果写三个理由段，就是五段。

2.开头段

开头段一般写2~5句，它有以下三种写法：

开头段是使用模板式句型比较多的段落。其中：介绍双方观点、介绍对方观点及其一到两个理由、说出自己的观点和引起下文，都可以使用模板式句型。

注意：其中介绍背景部分，不要使用模板式句型。

3.理由段

每个理由段的写法：

1句主题句+3句左右的支持句

其中每个理由段主题句前面的关联词，可以使用模板式句型。

第三个理由，有两种写法：

第一种写法：和前两个理由一样，直接说出理由。

第二种写法：反驳对方对自己的攻击。先用一句话，说对方对自己的攻击，然后用三句左右反驳。

4.结尾段

结尾段可以写1~5句，结尾段的通常写法：

重申观点+（重申理由）+（提出建议和希望等）

其中重申观点，可以使用模板式句型。

Sample 1

1句话背景.Some people suggest that对方观点.They hold the opinion that对方观点的1~2个理由.However in my opinion,自己的观点.The reasons are presented below.

The first reason that can be seen by every person is that第一个理由段主题句.支持句1.支持句2.支持句3.

Another factor that we must consider is that第二个理由段主题句.支持句1.支持句2.支持句3.

We must admit that对方对自己的攻击.However,反驳.反驳.反驳.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that重申自己的观点.重申理由1.重申理由2.Moreover,重申理由3.

(7分作文整个模板60个词)

Sample 2

1句话背景.Some people suggest that 对方观点.对方观点的1~2个理由.However in my opinion,自己的观点for the following reasons.

First of all,第一个理由段主题句.支持句1.支持句2.支持句3.

第二个理由段主题句.支持句1.支持句2.支持句3.

We must admit that对方对自己的攻击.However,反驳.反驳.反驳.

To sum up,重申自己的观点.重申理由1.重申理由2.Moreover,重申理由3.

（8分作文整个模板24个词）

1.开头段

⑴开头段介绍双方观点：

①Most people hold the opinion/take the view that______. Some others are of the opinion/believe that_____.有些人认为______，另外一些人认为________.

② Many/Some people assert/have the idea/point out that________. On the other hand, towards the same issue, others/some other people stand on a very different ground. They insist that_______. Which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. 一些人认为_____。然而，对同样问题，另外一些人持不同的观点。他们认为_____。你倾向于哪一方取决于你的经验、生活方式和情感关注。

③Most people hold the opinion/take the view that______. But/Nevertheless, some others/others who are strongly apposed to their opinion/strongly despise the above attitude/take a negative attitude.

⑵开头段介绍对方观点及其一到两个理由：

①Some/Many/Most people hold the opinion/take the view that______. They are confident/assert that_____. There is no denying that there is some truth in the above point of view. 有些人提出_____。他们认为________。不可否认，上述的观点有一些道理。

②It is commonly believed/widely held/generally accepted/increasingly acknowledged that_______. Such people assert/contend/insist that_______.大多数人相信/~/被广泛接受的观点/逐渐被广泛接受的观点是______，这些人认为_____。

⑶开头段说出自己的观点：

Ⅰ直接说出自己的观点：

①As far as I am concerned, I agree that______.就我来说，我同意____。

②Yet I am one of many people who feel that____.我是持这个观点总多人中的一个

_____。

③I do strongly support the idea that_____. 我强烈支持这个观点______。

Ⅱ说出自己同意前面/后面一个观点：

①For my part, I stand on the former/latter opinion that____.站在我的立场，我支持

后一种意见___。

②Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the former/latter

view.考虑到双方的观点，我倾向于后者。

③My opinion is the same as the former/latter one in the following reasons.我同意后

面的观点，原因如下。

Ⅲ说自己不同意前面所说的观点：

①But if I am concerned, I can only disagree with the statement and the reasons are

given below.但是，我不同意上述观点，原因如下。

②Superficially, all the above sounds reasonable and constructive. However, I

strongly disagree with it.表面上看，以上观点很合理，很有建设性。但是，我反对它。

③On the surface of it, this may seem to be a sound good solution, but if thinking

again, we would point out some drawbacks.表面上看，这是一个好的解决方案，但再想想，我们能指出一些缺点。

④Some people argue as if it is a general truth that______. But to be frank, I cannot

agree with them for the following reasons.一些人议论____，好像它是一个普遍的事实。但坦率说，以下原因使我不能同意他们的观点。

⑷开头段引起下文：

①There are no less than two reasons as rendered below.有不少于两个原因，如下所述。

②There are three advantages as following reasons.有三个好处，如下。

③There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of

the most important ones here.我持这个观点有很多原因，我将给出几个最重要的。

④This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.不同的看法

基于以下几点原因。

⒉理由段

第一二三个理由关联词：

⑴①The reasons are quite clear. Above all, ____. →②Another reason why I agree with

the above statement is that I believe_____. →③Finally, the incomparable advantage of this view is that____.原因非常清楚。首先____。

⑵①The main reason why I hold this opinion is that____. →②There is a further more

subtle point we must consider._____. →③The 我持这个观点的主要原因是____。

⑶①First, we can observe easily that____. 首先，我们容易看到______。

⑷①First →②Second →③Third

⑸①Firstly →②Secondly →③Thirdly

⑹①First of all →②Next →③Finally

⑺①To begin with →②Besides →③Furthermore

⑻①First and foremost →②Furthermore →③Last but not least

⑼①For one thing②For another③In addition

⑽①In the first place②In the second place③Furthermore

There is every sign to show that the enemy will retreat.

种种迹象表明敌人要退却。

3.结尾段的第一句：（横线部分重申自己的观点）

①From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that___.

②Now, after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that___.

③So, based on the above discussion, I agree with the opinion that____.

④From what has been discussed above, I think it is no doubt that____.

⑤Taking into all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that___.

⑥For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that___.

对称式结构（辩论型题目）

1.总体结构

分为四段

2.第一段

一边倒结构的本质区别之一。

3.第二段、第三段

双方观点各占一段。分别论述。这两段的写法是一样的。先写1~2句概述，然后展开论述。如果能想出3个理由，每个理由写2句话左右。如果只能想出2个理由，每个理由写3句话左右。

其中每段的概述以及各理由之间的关联词，可以使用模板式句型。

4.第四段

一般写3~5句。先旗帜鲜明地说出自己的观点，应该和第几段中的观点一致，然后必须各用一句话改写那一段中的每个理由。

其中说出自己的观点，可以使用模板式句型。

Sample 1

一句话背景.Some people suggest that A方观点.But on the other hand, there are also many people who strongly advocate that B观点.It is quite understandable that people from different interpretations on the same issue.

Those who favor that A方观点give their reasons as follows. In the first place,理由句1.支持句1.In the second place,理由句2.支持句2.Furthermore,理由3.支持句3. However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that B方观

点.For one thing, 理由句1.支持句1.For another,理由句2.支持句2.In addition,理由句3.支持句3.

There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments. For my part, I completely agree with the latter/forme r view that 重申自己的观点.理由句1.理由句2.理由句3.What is more,理由句4.

Sample 2

2~3句话介绍背景.

Those who favor that A方观点give their reasons as follows. In the first place,理由句1.支持句1.In the second place,理由句2.支持句2.Furthermore,理由3.支持句3. While people speak highly of A方观点,B方观点should not be neglected. For one thing,理由句1.支持句1.For another,理由句2.支持句2.In addition,理由句3.支持句3.

As for me, 重申自己的观点.理由句1.理由句2.理由句3.What is more,理由句4.

1.开头段

开头段引起下文：

①It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different

interpretations on the same issue.来自不同背景的人对同样的问题有不同的看法是可以理解的。

②Admittedly, there are merits to both sides of the argument.必须承认，这个问题的两

方面都有优点。

③As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitude.然而，

关于它是一件好事还是一件坏事，人们有不同的态度。

④Both sides have their merits.双方都有其道理。

⑤Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments

on both sides. 在说出我的观点之前，我认为看一看问题的两面是很重要的。

⑥This is a very controversial issue and people hold quite different opinion of it.这是一

个非常有争议的问题，人们都持有不同的观点。

2.第二段

⑴第二段开头：

①Those who favor that_______ give their reasons as follows. 赞成_____的人给出了

如下的原因。

②People, who advocate that______, have their sound reasons. 赞成___的人有他们的

道理。

③People who support that____ give some of the following reasons.支持____的人给出

以下原因。

⑵.第一二三个理由关联词：

（同上）

3.第三段

⑴第三段开头句：（横线上写另一方观点）

①To this issue, some other people hold a different attitude, arguing that___. 对于这个

问题，另外一些人持有不同的看法，他们认为_____。

②However, there are also some others who contend that_____. 然而，也有一些人主张

____。

③However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning

this case. They believe that____.然而，关于这件事，有很多人持有不同的观点。

他们认为____。

④There is no denying that there is some truth in the above point of view. However, to

some people’s mind, ______. 毫无疑问，上述观点有些道理。但一些人认为______。

⑵第三段的第一二三个理由的关联词：

（同上）

4.最后一段

（横线上写上自己的观点）

①Admittedly, there are merits to both arguments. As far as I am concerned, I firmly

commit to the notion that_____. 无可否认，两种论点都有自己的优势，就我来说，我坚定地认为________。

②Both sides above make sense. Therefore it is really hard for me to draw a definite

conclusion. To my mind, ______. 双方都有道理。因此我很难得出一个明确的结论。我的意见是，_______。

③Both sides above make sense, and consequently it is hard to decide which one is more

reasonable. From my own perspective, _____. 双方都有道理，因此很难决定哪个观点更有道理。我的意见是_______。

解释型题目模板

写法一同一边倒，写法二同对称式。

1.开头段引起下文：

① What factors lead to this phenomenon and what we can do to solve the problem have become a concern to many people. In my opinion, the following reasons should be taken into consideration. 什么因素导致了这个现象以及我们怎么做来解决这个问题已经成为很多人的关注。在我看来，应该考虑一下因素。

② It is not easy to render the reasons for this complicated phenomenon which involves several factors. For my part, there are several causes for this problem. 给这个牵涉到几个因素的复杂的现象做出解释不是一件容易的事情。在我看来，这个问题有几个方面的原因。

④It is crucial that we analyse the cause of this disturbing issue and explore the effective

solutions. From my own perspective, the cause are multiple.分析这个问题的原因并且找到有效的解决办法，是重要的。在我看来，原因是多方面的。

2. 结尾段的第一二句概述：

① This issue should be well taken into consideration. As to how to address the problem, people put forward various suggestions.这个问题应该被很好的考虑。关于怎样解决这个问题，人们给出不同的建议。

② Regarding these reasons, I think there are some ways to deal with the problem.考虑到这些原因，我认为有许多方式去解决这个问题。

③ In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse.考虑到问题的重要性，在形势变得更为恶劣以前，我们必须采取有效的措施。

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