基础写作(学生)
1. 广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？
①Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19thcentury.
② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the1904 and 1928
Games.③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown
steadily from just 3 shooti ng events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
2. 写作中复合句常见的错误
1. 只有从句，没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.
T The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
2. 以逗号代替句号，把两个简单句当成一个句子
①The hall is differe nt from all other buildi ngs, it is made of glass.
T The hall is differe nt from all other buildi ngs , which is made of glass.
②The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face.
T The old man thought of his son, tears coming dow n from his face.
3. 刻意使用从句，表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sun
day.
4. 过多地使用并列句组合信息
①It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
T it is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.
②We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the
bus was crowded.
T As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.
3. 请看范例
My En glish Lear ning
①It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I ' ndoing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms.
⑤ Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.
从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫规范的英语句子”。其实，规范的英语句子”
就是我们经常讲的三种句子：
A）Simple sentence:
Heari ng the n ews, he was happy.
=Whe n he heard the n ews, he was happy.
B）Compo und sentence A:
He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.
C）Compo und sentence B:
What he is doing has nothing to do with me.
4. Here are 3 ways to make senten ces:
I. 巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：
1）借助名词短语做同位语
女口：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。
Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guan gdo ng in 1986.
2）借助介词短语做定语
女口：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。
Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brow n hair and a white jacket.
3）借助介词短语做状语
女口：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。
With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.
4）借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语
女口：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
They are sta nding un der the big tree, wait ing for the preside nt.
II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：
女口：他给我钱，我不要。
He gave me a lot money but I refused.
女口：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。
I was just walk ing dow n the street corner whe n I saw you.
III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：
1）名词性从句
如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。
That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very an gry.
2）定语从句
如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。
China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.
3）状语从句
如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。
I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still liv ing in our hearts.
5?练习
1. 用一句话表达
①Kate is a new student.
②She comes from a northern provinee.
③She speaks a dialect.
④We find it hard to understand her dialect
2. 不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。第一步：拆分成几个简单句
①不是人人都能学好英语。
②小学生同时学汉语和英语。
③这会影响汉语学习。
第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句
①= _________________________________________________________________
②= _________________________________________________________________
③ ________________________________________________________ =
第三步：合并句子
方法1
方法2：
［情景说明］
通知: 新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。体检地点：第一人民医院
体检时间：9月9日，星期六
1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往；
2、体检前空腹；
3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。
Notice
①
②________________________________________________________________________________
③ _______________________________________________________________________
④ _______________________________________________________________________
.⑤_______________________________________________________________________________
你来试试现象丨学生作文中出现很多错别字
原因1?上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。
八 ________________
要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容
2.两句话要有连贯性
参考词汇：
错另U字：wrongly-written characters
网络语言：web Ian guage
第一句（两个信息点）：
1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字
2. （他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。
① _________________________________________________________________
② _ 合并句子：
第二句：
1.每天有很多作业做
2.没有记住生字。
① _________________________________________________________________
② _________________________________________________________________
合并句子：连接两句话：
实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表
达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。
1?一个乞丐在路边讨钱（ask for money）。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。
2?乞丐很生气，伸出（stick out）拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了（trip over）。
3?李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。
4?李先生拿出了一张百元钞票（a 100-yuan note）。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。
5?乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。