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最新 中考英语书面表达英语期末复习经典

最新中考英语书面表达英语期末复习经典

一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)

1.书面表达

我的英语学习

初中即将毕业,你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法,请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法,根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,

要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;

2.必须包含表格中所有内容,并作适当发挥

3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;

4.词数80-100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________

【答案】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.

In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,communicate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!,倒装句only when we

develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2.假定你是David,来自美国,你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。

注意:1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;

2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David 【答案】Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.

I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.

It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.

I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.

Best wishes

David

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文,给好友Li Ming回信,介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm glad……,we can……,It’s OK to……,If your parents don’t allow you to…….,you should……,I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴,接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题,最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3.书面表达

李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动,假定你是李华,请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节,内容包括:

1. 今年庆祝时间(6月18日)

2. 节日由来:纪念(be in memory of)屈原

3. 吃粽子,赛龙舟,挂菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)……

4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日

注意:1. 词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头已写好,不计入总词数。

Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.

_____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________.

【答案】Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文,向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:People celebrate……,People hold……,We can watch……,We welcome to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间,接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动,最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4.写作

假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。

2. 陈述自己的理由。

3. 提出至少2条建议。

【答案】Hi,TigerMom,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university

admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are

many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in

society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up

mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her

have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of o ne’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5.(题文)书面表达

在中学生机器人大赛上,出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人,它的主要功能有:

1. 定时做饭、洗衣服;

2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动;

3. 处理紧急情况(如:拨打120)

假如你是该机器人的发明者,请你介绍这个产品,并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求:1. 意思连贯,语句通顺;

2. 词数80词左右;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)

3. 参考词汇: at a fixed time 定时

emergency 紧急情况

ccompany sb. 陪伴某人

Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new i nvention to all of you.

I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some

washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s mor e, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.

I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.

【解析】

亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future 等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的

最大亮点。

点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6.书面表达

随着电子时代的到来,西方文化如潮水般涌来,中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件,给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文,词数80左右,谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to

set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题,接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因,最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of,in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7.亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的

Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.

All the best,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best.

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then 等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。

8.近来,美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明,请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :

1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;

2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;

3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;

4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :

1.词数80-100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,

I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________

In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.

Yours

Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,

I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.

In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.

Yours,

Daming 【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信,告诉他如何学好汉语,题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知,这是要求写一封建议信,内容应包括以下几个方面:首先应和Sam先做一个交流,然后引出写信的目的;接下来给出具体的建议,依据题目中给出的这四条,用正确的英语表达出来,还应注意补充一些内容,使文章更加充实;最后写一个适当的结尾,如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时,根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑,写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主,简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次,可以穿插

使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信,对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分:第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题,并介绍写信的目的;第二段中是提出的具体的建议,这是这篇文章的主体,所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等词,叙述条理、有层次;最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确,用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主,也使用了并列句和复合句,调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

9.2019年2月20日,中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你该怎么做,以及这样做的意义。

提示词语:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

提示问题:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评:例文采用的是一段式,人称用的是第一人称复数形式,时态主要用的是一般现

在时,描述具体怎么做时,描写细致,条理清晰。

高分亮点:

短语:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。

句型:By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

10.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇:网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

注意:1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面,可适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;

3.词数:100词左右,文章开头已给出,但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文,主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如convenient,disadvantage,in

good quality,figure out,have the chance to do,be attacked by,of course,take care of 等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

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