2017高考英语作文写作基础—话题写作练习

高考英语写作……话题写作练习

一. 教学内容：

话题写作练习

A 人物介绍

参考篇目：Unit 1. Hawking. Einstein

注意：1. 表格变为段落

2．按时间顺序

3．根据逻辑关系加上连接词

常用短语和词汇：

be born when he/she was ……years old /at the age of later begin to graduate from

spend time doing discover

评价：be considered to be / be regarded as

be rewarded…… contribute

devoted oneself to sth.

根据以下素材写一篇介绍爱因斯坦的短文

Date of birth: March 14th, 1879 Place of birth: Germany Childhood: curious, slowing in learning

Education background:

1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion

1896 : graduated from high school

1900 : become a maths teacher

1905 : receive a doctor’s degree

Achievement: develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915

prove light is bent when passing the sun

won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922

Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century

Albert Einstein

Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany. When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning. In 1886, he began to study in Munich. He studied mathematics as well as religion. In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17.

Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher. In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree. By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world. He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun. Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922.

Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. Some people say that he was a genius. But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work .

B. 说明文

参考篇目：Unit2.News Media 不同观点对比。阐述自己观点。

常用短语和词汇：

对比：while, but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,

类比：as well, besides, also, too,

表达观点：I think, in my opinion, it seems to me……

1. 适当增加与要点有关的语句加以说明；

2. 主要陈述自己观点，对对方观点要提及并加以驳斥；

3. 在结尾处重申自己的观点

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你们班上在讨论城市里博物馆的作用。根据以下内容，写一篇120字左右的短文，陈述你自己的观点。开头已给出。

Side A

1. Museums can help understand what happened in the past

2. Museums can educate people

3. Museums are centers for research.

4. Museums can attract tourists to the city

Side B

1. Museums use up a great sum of money

2. Museums are usually in old buildings, so they need protection

Most cities have at least one museum, but how important are museums to people living in the 21st century?

Some people think that museums use up the money which could be spent on other things. Besides, museums are usually in old buildings, so they often need protection. In my opinion, museums can help people understand what happened in the past. If we have a better understanding of the past, we may improve our life in the future. Museums play an important role in educating people and they are centers for research. Also, museums are very important for tourism. They attract a lot of tourists to the city each year.

To sum up, it seems to me that museums are an important part of our life. They are worth visiting and protecting.

C. Safety Rules

参考篇目：Unit8 First Aid

Useful expressions:

You should always… Please don’t ….

You ought to …

You should not….

You must…. Never…..

Make sure that ….

You must never….

Always remember to ….

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Use the lists of dos and don’ts bel ow to write a passage about safety rules in the chemistry lab.

Dos

?wash your hands before & after the experiment

?keep the air fresh

?put on gloves when doing experiments

?be careful with fire and dangerous chemicals

Do n’ts

?taste chemicals

?eat anything

?touch anything without teacher’s permission

?run about in the lab

An emergency may happen every day. But if we are careful and follow some safety rules, some can be avoided. Let’s take chemistry lab as an example.

First of all, you should wash your hands before and after the experiment. And you should keep the air in the lab fresh. You’d better put on the gloves when doing the experiment. Be careful with fire and dangerous medicine.

Never taste chemicals or eat anything in the lab. Always remember not to touch anything without teacher’s permission. You shouldn’t run about in the lab.

Only in this way can you keep yourself safe in the lab.

D. 记叙文

参考篇目：Unit 7 Living with disease / Diagnosed with Cancer

时间、地点、人物、事件、因果关系交待清。

时态：过去时

表示时间的短语：one day, while, when, then, a moment later, as soon as…

因果关系：so, as, as a result……

图示提示要先审图，记要点，列出所需词汇和短语。

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根据以下图示（图略），以Naughty Tommy为题，写一篇短文，描述在公园里所发生的事。

Tommy was a naughty boy. One day he saw a girl playing happily under a tree. He decided to play a trick on her. So he picked up a stone and hid himself behind the tree. Then he threw the stone at the girl. Hit on the back, the girl began to cry. T ommy was very happy and went away with a smile.

A moment later, he saw a dog sleeping on a bench. He picked up a stone again and hit the dog. The dog woke up and jumped at him. T ommy was so frightened that

he ran away as fast as he could.

E. 过程描写

Useful expressions:

While…..

as soon as

be about to do….when….

just as….

suddenly / all of a suddenly

happen to do…/ It happened that…

Tips:

How to write a process paragraph?

1. 审题: 文字，图表

2.文体

3. 人称

4. 时态

5. 内容要点

a) 时间

b) 地点

c) 人物

d) 事件经过

6. 所需词汇及句型：

Practical writing:

NMET 2000

假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。

注意：1 目击者应该准确报告事实；

2 词数100左右；

3 结尾已为你写好。

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After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

Possible version:

It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. Suddenly

the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

学生习作

（A）

At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard. I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t. Instead, she just drove off, le aving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that I went over to check out the old man.

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It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000. I was walking along the southern side of Park Road. I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road. There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road. What happened next really surprised me. A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a

right turn and knocked the old man down. It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react. Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in time to see the plate number of the yellow car. It was AC864.

F. 地点描写

参考篇目：Unit 5 The British Isles

Useful expressions:

be located in / lie in / be situated in

in the west of, to the west of

off the east coast of

cover an area of …… square kilometers

be made up of / consist of

be separated from

be surrounded by

has a population of

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Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers

History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction

in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire,

took away treasures, ruins,

new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s,

Yuanmingyuan Park

Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing. It covers an area of 3.5 square kilometers. It was built during the Qing Dynasty. After 150 years of construction, it became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world. However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire. Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins.

It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected. Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s.

The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday.

文章的检查

时态，词形，人称，数，逻辑关系

It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000. 1._________

I was walking along Park Road towards to the east 2. ________

when a old man came out of the park on the other 3. ________

side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4. ________

Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. 5. ________

The next moment the car hit a man while he 6. ________

was acrossing the road. He fell with a cry. The 7. ________

car not stop but drove off at great speed heading 8. ________

west. I notice the driver was a young woman, 9. ________

the plate number was AC 864. About two minutes 10. _______

later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to

the nearest hospital.

1. in→on

2. to去掉

3. a 改为an

4. 正确

5. made改为make

6. a 改为an

7. acrossing应为crossing

8. not前加did

9. notice→noticed 10.the plate number前加and