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2020中考英语作文冲刺高分写作指导

2020中考英语作文冲刺高分写作指导
2020中考英语作文冲刺高分写作指导

2020中考英语作文冲刺高分写作指导

写作是语言的输出,重在考查学生综合运用语言的能力。该板块在考前是可以重点突破的。写作多以给材料的形式为主,用中文给出提示要点,内容多围绕学生的校园及学习生活展开,话题如下:

学校生活: 侧重学习生活、师生关系、同学关系,友谊等话题;

家庭生活: 侧重父母与子女关系、与子女的交往、家庭教育、家庭文化、代沟等话题;

社会生活: 侧重人与环境,中学生融入社会等话题。

一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素,就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样,如果砖瓦质量不好,那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的,如果基本的词句掌握不好,那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手,甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。因此,从现在开始,我们应该重视字词句的提炼,把我们学过的,见到过的甚至在新闻、广播、杂志、电影里见到的优美的、地道的词句提炼出来为我所用。一般来说,我们掌握了初中教材要求的大部分词汇以及考纲中全部词汇和词组,写出一篇合格的作文并不是难事,然而,面对如此激烈的竞争,仅仅是一篇合格的文章就够了吗?恐怕不是的。

因此,掌握更多的优秀词句能让我们在写作中出彩。我们可以从作文素材中进行词句的提炼:

第一个资源,也是我们最容易忽视的资源,就是我们手中的教材。教材文章难度适中,词汇丰富,是非常好的词库。也许有的同学不以为然,那么我们看这个句子:A比B要美得多。如果让你用英语写出这个句子,你能想到的句型有几个?在你想到的句型中,是不是转来转去就那么几句:A is more beautiful than B,或者A is more beautiful when pared with B ,或者B is not as beautiful as A……这样的句型你会写,还有数万个和你一样的中学生也会写,但是如果你写出:Although A is beautiful,itpales when it is in parison with B. (虽然A很美,但是与B 相比便黯然失色了。)这样的句子,效果会大不相同。

第二个资源,基于教材,我们可以向外发散,任何你读过的报英文刊杂志。比如《21st Century》《ChinaDaily》等等,都是很好的资源,还有很多经典的英文电影,英文歌曲也都是丰富的词库,从中可以提炼出非常多的优美的词汇和句子,改造一下,就可以放到我们的文章中,为我们的作文增色不少。

所谓过渡词,就是表示先后顺序的first, second,…at

last,表示因果关系的as a result, dueto, because of…,表

示分述关系的what’s more, furthermore, besides,inaddition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇?原因有二:其一,我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律,但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系,快速而精准的判断你的文章呢?过渡词就是一个很好的“向导”,它能够引导阅卷人的思路,让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价;其二,我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候,总有一个先后顺序,总有一个逻辑结构,如何使自己的文章结构清晰,要点明确,中心突出,答案还是过渡词,使用了过渡词,可以规范自己的逻辑思路,让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱,有条不紊,层次清晰,逻辑通畅。

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“I think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,20xx年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hoursto safety.”这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving

two of his classmates, Lin Hao walked for seven hours to safety.

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:Being saved from the earthquake, two of Lin Hao's classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao.这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

在中考作文中,很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的,富有哲理和智慧的句子,经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天,足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言,那将会是怎样一番景象,其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了“Just as the saying goes, 'every coin has two

sides.' ”,那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水平考试作文里写出了“中国人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚,祸兮福之所伏’”一样的震撼!因此,学会使用名人名言,将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了,使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托,这一是因为自己平时积累不够,写不出合适的名人名言,第二是对名人名言没有

形成条件反射,联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下,看看效果如何。

(1) 确定体裁。即明确是写记叙文、说明文还是应用文;若是应用文还要弄清这种应用文又该用什么格式,是否有其固定的套语等。

(2) 确定时态。即根据所给材料信息确定文章的基本时态。一般来说,一篇特定的短文,他通常有自己特定的基本时态。如:通知常用将来时,已经发生的故事用过去时,通常用过去时态等等。

(3) 确定人称。即根据所给材料内容确定写作所用人称。

【例如】好好学习,天天向上

Good good study, day day up. (x)

Study hard and make progress every day.(√)

4. 合理安排,润色加工。很明显,如果把表示内容要点的单句简单的罗列起来组成一篇文章的话,这篇文章肯定很难得到高分。因此,还要进行合理的安排,润色加工。

(1)分段,根据文章内容划分几个段落。

(2)适当调整句型,或改换表达方式使句子多样话,结构复杂化。

(3)在不影响词数的情况下,使用连接词或过渡词使句与句之间衔接紧密过渡自然。

还应注意的是,在英语写作中尽量避免短语的重复使用,这样会使文章变得枯燥乏味,比如说在考试中多次使用“过的有趣,玩的高兴”这一短语,为了避免重复,可以分别用“have fun”“have a good /nice/wonderful/great time”、“enjoy oneself”等交替使用,显示考生丰富的词汇储备。

最后,也是最关键的一点。作文写完之后还要通读检查,看看有没有语法错误、惯用法错误、大小写错误等。若有,则立即改正,若没有则可誊抄正稿。作文题阅卷的实际经验告诉我们,考生书写的好坏与此题得分的高低有很大的关系。这就是我们平常说的“第一印象”问题,所以考生在誊写时一定要认真仔细,书写规范,使阅卷老师赏心悦目,增加文章的可观性。

近来,城市中频繁出现的雾霾天气严重影响到了老百姓的生活和健康!

假设你是李华,David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾

霆天气很关注,来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。

主要内容如下:

(1)感谢他的关注。

(2)简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

(3)谈谈你的感想。

注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯流畅; 开头与结尾已写好,不计人总词数;

Dear David,

I'm glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I'm also very worried about such terrible weather, because it has influenced many people's life and

health,such as traffic jam, road aidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment es from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness, can we have cleaner air.

Hope to hear from you soon and share your good ideas. 模板,内容仅供参考

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