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November 27, 2011

Assignment: Error-correction

The errors in the following sentences or phrases are quite common

in English writing. Wish you will improve them, and finish the assignment within 2 weeks. You can either work by yourself, in pairs or in groups. If you have partners, please list their names in your work when submitting. And I’d appreciate it if you could highlight the incorrect part in yellow, red or blue to attract the attention.

Thanks.

LZX

作业完成者: 崔** 陈**

Collocation

1.It is worth to travelling. worth travelling.

2 China is a beautiful place which worth to travel. which is worth to travel.

3.You’d better to take bus instead of take taxi. You’d better take a bus instead of taking a taxi.

Mood

1.You must buy some souvenirs for your families, I believe they can share your happy experience. Should; will

2.You should travel in China personally. You will be impressed deeply in China. must

3.In Beijing, you mustn’t miss to see the Great Wall. cannot

4.The Great Wall is a great project that I have ever seen. I consider you must be conquered by it.

5.You can’t worry about the place you live and food you eat, you can live in my home and I can lead you to some good places.

There be

1. There is an increasing number of people want to travel in China these years. wanting

2. There are many visitors come here every year. There people very healthy and they can dancing and singing. Coming; people are very healthy ;dance and sing

3. There are millions of tourists come here because of two reasons. One is that China has a lot of natural or man-made places of interest and also ancient people live in China having created precious culture is the other reason. coming; living in china

4.There are many people live beside Yang Cheng Lake.living

5.There are many towns have a long history, such as Zhou Zhuang and Lu Zhi. having

6.China is a very very big country, for example, when somewhere is hot, there are somewhere’s people must put on so much clothes.

Active voice/passive voice

1.You may be lost your way once you are here, so it’ll be convenient for you to buy a map. lose

2.People in Dafeng is kind, they must be very welcome to your visiting. welcome

3.Recent decades have been seen the fact that traveling in China has been a trendency all over the world. seen

4.In the night, the beautiful scenery is desired us to enjoy. desires

5.I was heard that you were going to travel my hometown now. heard

6.On the recent couple of months, I have been travelled several old towns. travelling

Choice of proper words

1.If you want to print to the history, you can visit some ancient cities like ….

2.From west to east, north to south, you can find the amazing sight whatever you want, and everywhere has it’s special. speciality

3.In Beijing,you can see the place empires lived in the places museum. living

4. You can eat traditional Chinese food and buy some special things which full of Chinese traditional culture. is full of

5.With excited and happy, my father and I traveled to…. Excitement and happiness

6.Beijing is the center of cultural. culture

7.Shanghai is the center of economic. economy

8. Nowadays, travelling in China has become a increase trend. an increasing

9.You can breath fresh air. breathe

10.The food is differ from what you eat before. different

11. You may tease delicious food, such as Beijing Dark and noodle. taste

Some advises,

as is know to all, known

as we all known, know

our country’s beautify, beauty

a good idea to chose China, choose

good chooses choices

v-ing

1.Travelling in China need a long time because…. needs

2.Go shopping in Shanghai is a lot of fun. Going

3.Stand on the Great Wall, I had a kind of special feel from my heart, proud, excited. Standing

4.Travelling around the world become more and more popular. becomes

5.Most people travel for broaden horizons and enjoy different

smells of custom. Broadening; enjoying

6.People live in Lijiang are simple. living

7.First, bring a raincoat is wise for you. bringing

8.When I see these things, I smiling. smile

9.Most people take the opinion that travel around is the best way

to spend time. travelling Chinglish or other grammatical mistakes

1.Xin Jiang is a wild place, you travel may very long, between day and night have different

temperature changed.

Xin jiang is a wide place whose temperature will change

dramatically between day and night,which takes you a long time to travel.

2.In Shanghai, multinational corporations and global marketing are too much.

There are so many multinational corporations and global marketings in shanghai.

3.If I’m a tourist, I will go to the Summer Palace, I want to know what’s like it is now after more than one hundred years.

不会

4. If you travelling in my hometown, I suggest you first place go to Zhou Enlai’s memory lab.

If you travel in my hometown,the first place I suggest is to go

to ·····

5. If you want to have different feeling, no matter the sight of view nor taking risks, you can find it in China. feelings neither

6. Shanghai is a developed city. It also worthy to be visited it is also worthy to be visited.

7. It can be compared with another wonder lies in Egypt. Lying

8. You must to taste them during your trip. 去掉

9.You are better to find a local people as your travel agent. Had person

10.You should take a mobile phone if you meet hard things want to ask me. That you want to ask me

11.It’s old and stubborn made me think the people who built the Great Wall is so respected.

It is so ancient and solid that makes me think that people who

built the great wall are so respected.

12.In the afternoon, we took a boat and play on the West Lake. The sky is so beautiful, the wind is so cold, we couldn’t help to singing. Played;soft;去掉

13.In one word, China must be a valuable place you should to visit. 去掉

14.Many place are the home of some great people before they are alive. Places;homes

15.When it came to the summer, the north of China is a good place for visitors. Comes;

16.My hometown Suqian has a great person—Xiang Yu, which is a great people. He is so strong that he can lift anything easily at that time. person;was

17.Travelling in Suzhou, many things you must to take attention. Must be paid attention

18.Since 1997, Hong Kong follow our china can become better and better.

Hong kong has become better and better after returning to china

19.Suzhou—a soft city, skills, tasty foods and any other things only Suzhou has.

Suzhou is a soft city which has silk ,tasty food and any other things.

20.First, my hometown is famous as food. Some food as biscuit are very delicious. For

21.I want to climb Yellow Mountain when I was young. wanted

22.It can showing the history of China. show

https://www.wendangku.net/doc/d48409876.html,st but not least, I think that you must to go to the 523 cultural park. 去掉

24.If you ask one if he or she want to travel in China, he or she might has no hesitation to saying “yes”! wants;have

25.You can shopping in the street. go shopping

26.If you want to have a shop in Suzhou, I prefer you to go to Guanqian Street. go Shopping

27.If you are not come to China, you will lose lots of wonderful views and interesting experiences. do not

28.Yanchen Park is built two thousand years ago, and it is around by three rivers. Was

老师有的不会做,就没做,还请老师别见谅。谢谢!

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学生自己： 1. 我的爱好：七上U4 Hobbies ①Norman Parkinson was a famous English photographer. He liked travelling to interesting places and taking photographs. It was his hobby as well as his job. Taking photographs is a favorite hobby of many people all over the world. It can help us remember things. We all love to take photographs of each other, especially when we travel to new places. We also like to have a photograph of everybody in the group together. When we want to be in the picture, we need to ask someone to take the photograph for us. Having photographs is important because people and places always change. It is very sad, for example, if children cannot look at photographs of their parents or grandparents. What did Grandfather look like? Where did he use to live? If we do not have photographs, children may not know the answers to these questions. Photographs help us know and understand our history. ②Fishing is fun, too. Fishing takes you to beautiful places. You can catch fish in small rivers, big lakes or the sea. You can go with friends or, if you like, you can go alone. You can make a lot of new friends when you go fishing. You can catch fish with just a net, or with a long piece of string, a hook and some bread. Everybody gets excited when someone catches a big fish. Catching fish is great fun, but eating them is even better! ③ Making models is my favorite hobby. I have made a few model planes. At the weekend, I fly my planes at a park near my home. If they crash, I have to mend them. I like mending things. It teaches me a lot about real planes. I hope I can work with real planes when I grow up. It is very interesting to make things. 2. 我的基本情况：七上U1 Making Friends ① My name is Simon. My Chinese name is Li Peichun. I am twelve years old. I am 163 cm. I have short black hair and brown eyes. My hobby is playing chess. I live with my parents in the UK. They are from Beijing. My parents own a Chinese restaurant in Newcastle. We live in a house near our restaurant. I can speak Chinese, but I cannot write it very well. I have a brother. His name is Edwin. He is 23. He works as an accountant in London. I am in Year 7 at Walker School. It is near my house, and I can walk to school. I like my school.. The teachers are very friendly. I am keen on sports. I enjoy playing rugby and badminton in winter, and tennis in summer. My best subject at school is maths. I want to be an engineer. 3. 我喜欢的科目：七上U2 Our Daily Life ① I usually get A grades in all my subjects. ② Zhen Hui loves English very much, and always gets an A. She usually gets a B in her other subjects.

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学生们提高写作水平。 1.抓好英语写作的基础性训练。 英语写作的基础性训练是训练基本句型。因此，在写作教学中，应把这五个基本句型作为写作训练的出发点。课堂练习以及作业布置上，多在造句上下工夫，打好写作的第一步。 2.多条途径培养学生的英语写作思维能力。 一是扩大阅读量。要让学生言之有物，就必须重视扩大其阅读量。大量阅读对学生熟悉词汇和句子结构有积极的作用。通过一段时间的语言输入，丰富了学生的语言材料，对写作能起到极好地促进作用。 二是背诵范文。在英语写作教学过程中，教师要选择适当的阅读材料作范文，这将对启发学生的思维起到立竿见影的作用。课文是提供给学生的最好范文，背诵课文是一个积累语篇的过程，也是思维发展的过程，它有记忆、理解、感悟、鉴赏四个阶段。背诵课文有助于学生对词汇的记忆，诵读过程中学生感悟内容，内化语言，提高能力。 三是仿写作文。首先，由浅入深、由易到难、循序渐进、一环紧扣一环地进行训练。然后，通过对知识点的复习加深学生对句型的印象。最后，让学生仿写成文。 3.优化作文的批改，增强纠错的时效性。对于学生的写作错误采用符号的方式加以提醒，再由学生根据提示改正。每次改完作文后，总结学生的一般性错误，并再课堂上指出并强调。有时还可以选几篇比较有针对性的作文，让全班同学一起批改，加深印象。

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最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。 注意： 1.词数80左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas. One possible version： Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students‘ ideal jobs. Here’ s a report about my group members’ ideas. Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He‘d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He‘d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe. Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

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