英语作文之段落写作
英语段落写作
§段落是文章的缩影。写好了段落，就能比较成功地写出较好的文章。经过中学英语基础阶段的学习之后，大学英语的写作重点就从选词造句转移到了联句成段和联段成篇上。进行段落层次上的写作训练，是写好英语文章的关键一环。下面介绍的是段落结构。
§段落（paragraph ）是由表达单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea ）的一组句子（包括主题句topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences及结论句concluding sentence）构成，是文章结构的基本独立单位。本讲我们将就主题句和中心思想这两个方面展开讨论。主题句与推展句
2．推展句2.1 主要推展句
§主要推展句(major supporting statement)的主要特点是：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。
例1：(主题句) There are several factors affecting climate. (推展句1)One factor is the mount of sunlight received. (推展句2)Altitude, or the height above sea level, also determines climate. (推展句3)The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. (推展句4)In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere.
主题句指出影响气候的几个因素。然后用四个扩展句说明四种因素。第一种是太阳光的接收量，第二种是海拔高度，第三句和第四句分别是海洋和大气环流因素。
2.2 次要推展句
§
§次要推展句(minor supporting statement)是指对主要推展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。
§例2：(主题句)I don‘t teach because teaching is easy for me. (主要推展句1)Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. (主要推展句2)For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profession. (次要推展句1)Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. (次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm, because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. (次要推展句3)Sinking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.
§从属于主要推展句2的三个次要推展句起着解释说明作用，分别解释red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach的含义，这就更加形象生动地证明了"teaching is not easy" 这个主题。
§2．3 主要推展句与次要推展句的关系
主要推展句与次要推展句的关系(relation)基本可以遵循下面的“三部分”(three-part)规
则。
1〕每个主要推展句都应该是对主题句中表示主要思想的关键词的直接、明确的说明。
2〕每个次要推展句都应该说明它的主要推展句。
3〕含有讨论说明或分析的问题通常既要有主要推展素材，又要有次要推展素材。
§2．4 写好推展句的方法
主题句及关键词确定后，开始选择和主题有关的信息和素材。实质上，针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问－解答(why-because)的方法。下面我们通过举例来看一看这种分类过程是如何完成的。
§假设(suppose) Topic sentence: English is an international language?
设问(why) Why can we say English is an international language?
解答(because)
Because: English is spoken by pilots and airport control operators on all the airways of the world.
Because: Over 70 percent of the world's mail is written in English.
Because: More than 60 percent of the world's radio programs are in English.
Because: Pakistan was once one of the British colonies.
Because: Many members of the International Language Society are selected from English-spoken countries.
§从上面可以看出，最初的三个推展句是和关键词an international language一致的。第四句和主题句不统一，尽管第四句会成为另一主题句(Many Pakistanis speak English)很好的推展句。第五句说服力不强。
当然，在写成段落时，没有必要在每个句子开头写上"because"，但是，在动笔展开句子时，头脑里要想着这个词，这种检验方法能帮助你把注意力集中在某个重心，围绕主题思想层层展开。
上面我们讨论了主要推展句的一种展开方法。而展开次要推展句的方法与主要推展句类似，这里我们就不再复述了
一．段落主题借助具体的细节和原因展开(A paragraph of a general statement supported by specific details)
§一般这类段落先明确地提出主题，紧接着就用一些具体的细节来论述或证明自己的观点。这些具体的细节或是原因，或是现象，总之可以充分证明自己观点的材料都可以拿来用的。下面这个段落，作者就采用了这种方法：
§A foreigner’s first impression of the U.S. is likely to be that ⑴everyone is in a rush---often under pressure. ⑵City people always appear to be hurrying to get where they are going, restlessly seeking attention in a store, or elbowing others as they try to complete their shopping. Racing through daytime meals is part of the pace of life in this country. ⑶Working time is
considered precious. Others in public eating-places are waiting for you to finish so they, too, can be served and get back to work within the time allowed. ⑷You also find drivers will be abrupt and people will push past you. You will miss smiles, brief conversations, and small exchanges with strangers. Don’t take it personally. ⑸This is because value time highly, and they resent someone els e “wasting ”it beyond a certain appropriate point.
§句子⑴是这个段落作者要说明的观点，是段落的中心，段落的主题：美国人给人的第一印象总是匆匆忙忙的。那么表现在什么方面呢？句子⑵⑶⑷分别是三个具体的细节，三种常见的现象。借助于这三个细节，读者可以得到一个很清晰的印象，美国人每天都忙忙碌碌的，原来是这个样子啊。依据句子⑸我们就明白了，因为美国人太珍惜时间了，所以平时才那么紧张。
§这种段落展开的方法,要求作者有比较详实的写作的素材。所以平时应注意观察周围的事物，养成论证自己观点的习惯，多读类似的文章，了解和体会西方人的思维模式。这样写出的文章才有英文的样子。
§为了使段落更富于逻辑性，你可以使用一些思维连接词（thought connectors）比如：firstly, secondly, thirdly, 等等。
§另外，这类段落比较适合写论说文和说明文。
二．段落主题借助于一系列的例子展开（a paragraph of a statement supported by examples）§
§有时候我们提出的一些观点和看法比较抽象或空洞，读者可能很难理解或不肯能完全理解，这样我们可以借助一些例子来对观点加以说明。下面是一段很典型的例子：
§⑴I now know he participate in some things through me, his only son. ⑵When I played ball(poorly), he “played ”too. ⑶When I joined the Navy , he “joined”too. ⑷And when I came home on leave, he saw to it that I visited his office. Introducing me, he was really saying, “this is my son, but it is also me, and I could have done this, too, if things had been different.” Those words were never said aloud.
§父亲通过儿子参加一些社会活动，这个观点（句子⑴）很笼统的，为了使自己的观点更可信，作者给出了几个很详实的例子（句子⑵⑶⑷）。这样就使得段落有血有肉了，可信度强了，可读性也强了。
§有时候，我们展开段落，完全可以用些具体的例子来从当细节的。从这个意义上讲，第一种方法应该包含第二中。由于习惯原因，我们也可以单独把它列为一种段落展开的有效方法。§这种方法的比较适合写简单的论说文和记叙文。
§三．段落主题借助于一系列的事情展开（a paragraph of a statement supported by a list of things）
§有时候我们的概念很抽象，那么就可以借助概念所包含的子相来加以说明。这个方法与第二种多少有些相似，但例子是一些翔实的行为过程，这里所说的子相大多是名词性短语。我们看看下面这个例子：
§Think about some of your ⑴unforgettable meetings: ⑵an introduction to your future spouse, ⑶a job interview, ⑷an encounter with a stranger.
§这段就是通过一系列的子相⑵⑶⑷来说明母相⑴的，因为子相都是一些具体的，我们亲身经历过的一些场面，所以很容易被读者的观点，这是对抽象或空洞概念的解释。所以要想让读者理解你，读懂你，你要把模糊空洞的概念解释清楚。
§当然对于一些艰涩的概念，我们也可以通过下定义的方法加以解释，以便与读者理解沟通。§Let’s assume they come from the “unconscious”. This is reasonable, for psychologists use this term to describe mental processes which are unknown to the individual.
§作者用了定义的方法来解释“潜意识”(unconscious)这个词。使那些即使没有心理学知识的读者也可以明白什么是潜意识了。
§我们写段落时，对于那些艰涩概念，可以尝试用这类方法加以解释和说明，已达到与读者最佳的沟通效果。
§四．段落主题借助于问题-解决模式展开（a paragraph of a general statement supported by a problem-solution pattern）
§写作政论性的文章，其实就是为解决一些社会问题。通常我们会对对解决的方法比较关心，更关心解决的结果如何，并对此做出评价。下面我们看这个例子：
§⑴Speak to your community in a way they can hear. ⑵Many communities have a low literacy rate, making impossible passing this passing out AIDS literature and expecting people to read it.
⑶To solve this problem, ask people in a community who can draw well to create low-literacy AIDS education publications.
§⑷These books use simple, hand-drawn pictures of sad faces and happy faces to illustrate ways people can prevent AIDS. ⑸They also show people who look like those we need to educate, since people can relate more when they see familiar faces and language they can understand. ⑹As a result, such books actually have more effect in the communities where they are used than government publications, which cost thousands of dollars more to produce.
§句子⑴是段落的主题，统领两个段落，介绍了一个向社区人们宣传艾滋病的方法。句子⑵告诉我们为什么用这种方法，也就是在宣传过程中遇到了哪些难题。句子⑶⑷⑸介绍了几种解决方法，句子⑹是对这些方法的评价。
§当我们读完这个段落时，或许也会承认这是一个很不错的办法。其实写文章就是说服人的过程，只要你资料翔实，话说得得体，会被读者认可的，即你的写作是成功的。
§五．段落展开借助于一系列的时间顺序的动作（a paragraph of a set of sequential actions）§我们叙述一件事情的经过时，一般需要按照动作发生的先后顺序来写，以便给读者一个§完整的印象。也可以说，一系列的动作描写同样可以表达一个主题。下面这个例子就能很客观地说明这一点。这种段落的展开技巧特别适合讲述故事。但是有一点大家要注意，这些动作不是无序的拼凑，是按照先后顺序发生的，与你要表达的主题的密切相关的。
§Like most city folks, I am cautious. I scan the street and pathways for anything-or anyone-unusual before pulling into the garage. That night was no exception. But, as I walked out of the garage, KFC chicken in hand, a portly, unshaven young man in a stocking cap and dark nylon jacket emerged from the shrub by the parking pad and put his pistol between my eyes.
§这个段落尽管没有主题句，但是我们看完后，我们就明白：尽管我很小心，但还是遭到抢劫了。作者使用了一系列的动作描写，而且是严格按时间顺序写的.
英语作文素材
英语作文素材 作文是英语学习中很重要的一环,今天为大家整理了一些作文素材,希望对大家有帮助. Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There're also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies. In my opinion, it's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way. Today , I'll talk about going online. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable. Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to use the computer and get more information from the Internet. We can
英语作文写作素材(写作高分秘诀)
英语作文写作素材(写作高分秘诀) 1.对灾区情况的简单介绍（包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等）； 2.捐款的意义（帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建）； 3.如何捐款（自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位，收齐后交到学校红十字会） 注意： 1.不要逐条翻译； 2.可适当增加细节；以使文章连贯； 3.词数至少100词。 参考范文： Dearteachersandstudents, Asweallknow,aterribleearthquakehappenedinLushan,SichuanProvince onApril20,inwhichmanybuildingsweredestroyedandmanypeoplewereinjur ed.Inordertohelptheearthquakevictimstogothroughthehardtimesandrebuild theirhometown,theschoolhascalledoneveryoneinourschool,includingbotht eachersandstudents,todonatemoneytotheearthquake- strickenarea.Thisdonationisvoluntary.Youcangiveawayhowevermuchyou wantto.ThemoneywillbecollectedbyeachclassbeforeitishandedtotheRedCr ossSocietyofourschool.Wehopethateveryonewillbekindenough todowhatyoucantohelpourfellowmenoutofthedifficulty. Thankyou. 2013年高考英语作文热门话题之二---“中国梦” 及自己的感受。内容要点如下： 1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；
英语作文之段落写作
英语段落写作 §段落是文章的缩影。写好了段落，就能比较成功地写出较好的文章。经过中学英语基础阶段的学习之后，大学英语的写作重点就从选词造句转移到了联句成段和联段成篇上。进行段落层次上的写作训练，是写好英语文章的关键一环。下面介绍的是段落结构。 §段落（paragraph ）是由表达单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea ）的一组句子（包括主题句topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences及结论句concluding sentence）构成，是文章结构的基本独立单位。本讲我们将就主题句和中心思想这两个方面展开讨论。主题句与推展句 2．推展句2.1 主要推展句 §主要推展句(major supporting statement)的主要特点是：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。 例1：(主题句) There are several factors affecting climate. (推展句1)One factor is the mount of sunlight received. (推展句2)Altitude, or the height above sea level, also determines climate. (推展句3)The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. (推展句4)In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere. 主题句指出影响气候的几个因素。然后用四个扩展句说明四种因素。第一种是太阳光的接收量，第二种是海拔高度，第三句和第四句分别是海洋和大气环流因素。 2.2 次要推展句 § §次要推展句(minor supporting statement)是指对主要推展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。 §例2：(主题句)I don‘t teach because teaching is easy for me. (主要推展句1)Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. (主要推展句2)For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach profession. (次要推展句1)Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. (次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm, because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. (次要推展句3)Sinking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual. §从属于主要推展句2的三个次要推展句起着解释说明作用，分别解释red-eye, sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach的含义，这就更加形象生动地证明了"teaching is not easy" 这个主题。 §2．3 主要推展句与次要推展句的关系 主要推展句与次要推展句的关系(relation)基本可以遵循下面的“三部分”(three-part)规
英语作文素材
英语万能作文(模板型） Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.... 随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。 As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes. 然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法) As society develops, people are attaching much importance to.... 随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............ People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting 求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。 As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it. 关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
专题02 观点与建议-2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦
2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦02 观点与建议 【真题再现1】 （2020年，天津卷，第二次高考）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括: (1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)； (2)对活动的感受； (3)对自己未来的展望。 注意: (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯； (3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇:成人礼the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎COVID-F9 Dear Chris, I’m so glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin [参考范文]
Dear Chris, I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic. Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work. Best wishes！ Yours, Li Jin [写作分析] 这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。 第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。 第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.； 第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the
英语写作段落举例
第一段： As described from the chart, we can see that dramatic changes/differences with regard to/on + n. have taken place in recent years. According to the figures above, +1个简单句( 关于最大或者最小值), while +1简单句（中间数值）. Most amazingly, +1个简单句。 第二段: What makes the fact that +重复上一句. As far as I am concerned/from my perspective, there are two important reasons leading to/making/causing/contributing to/resulting in it. First of all, the most important factor is + 1个名 第一个原因: 工作/经验 1.....experience, for/because of job 2. Accumulating work experience/accumulation of .... 3. Decisive role of accumulating work experience in job-hunting, job-market
方向+对象 方向:代表大道理(表示积极或者消极的三个句型,足矣.) 对象:大四 Experience plays a positive role in job-hunting. 对象：自由发挥 正。反。总结。各一句 Therefore/so/as a result, the seniors need working experience to find a good job. On the contrary/otherwise, they will lose job in the severe/competitive job market.That’s why ....... Therefore, the seniors need working experience to weapon themselves in the pursuit of a decent position. So that they can be outstanding enough to be the best candidate in the competitive job markets. 脱颖而出：outstanding, stand out, above average, superior, prominent, excel in, elite Secondly, one thing we shouldn’t deny is +1个名词
英语作文结构模板
结构模板1 (1)It is shown/depicted/described in the picture that 图表内容总括. (2)进一步阐述图表内容. (3)As is symbolically revealed in the pictures, 折射生活中的意义. (4)We can say that/We may draw/safely come to a conclusion that/We can see clearly that 对寓意进一步引申和归纳. (描述图表段) (5)There are many examples found to prove that 主题句. (6)Take …as a typical example./The first example is that 阐述例子一(可进一步阐述). (7)The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counterexample. /Opposite case in point is that /On the contrary 第二个例子(或举一反面例子). (8)Therefore, 段落总结句. (举例说明段) (9)In order to improve the situation/To sum up the above argument/Confronted with such an issue/a problem, we should find several solutions to it/need to take some positive measures. (10)On the one hand/For one thing 方法/建议一. (11)On the other hand/For another, 方法/建议二. (12)Therefore/Thus/Only in this way, can 总结句. (个人观点段) 9)In order to improve the situation/To sum up the above argument/Confronted with such an issue/a problem, we should find several solutions to it/need to take some positive measures. (10)On the one hand/For one thing 方法/建议一. (11)On the other hand/For another, 方法/建议二. (12)Therefore/Thus/Only in this way, can 总结句. (个人观点段) 模板示例 Write an essay of 150 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then
高考英语作文素材
高考英语作文素材 开头句型 1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言比如说：就我而言As far as I’m concerned 2 It can be said with certainty that... +从句可以肯定地说...... 3.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的，可以用来引用名言名句 4 .It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，... 5 .It's generally recognized that... 它普遍认为... 6 .It's likely that ... 这可能是因为... 7 .It's hardly that... 这是很难的...... 8 There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认 9 .Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是… 10 .what's far more important is that... 更重要的是… 引言句型 1. Some people think that ….To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 有些人认为…坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。 2. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为… 3. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意….这一观点的说法… 4. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展，越来越多… 5 It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为… 6. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我
高中英语作文 好句好段 素材
一学校生活 School life 好句 1、Insofar as students are concerned, study is not everything; but it is a major task and need to them. 2、Nothing is important than to receive education. 3、Work while you work and play while you play, this is the way to be happy and gay. 4、We wish to have more such wonderful time in our school. Our life should be filled with joy. 5、Not only I but also my classmates don’t like taking exams. 6、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. 7、 We are going to have an English-speaking contest for senior students so as to improve our oral English. 8、It has been decided that all the techers and students in our school will have a meeting on June 5th. 9、The whole school were busy preparing for the May Day celebrations. 10、Reading does good to our mind. 11、Autumn is a season of harvest. 好段
英语作文最佳框架结构
Low-carbon life is the lifestyle of the time to minimize energy consumption, thereby reducing carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for those of us ordinary people is an attitude to life. It gives us is a willing and we were creating a low carbon life issues.(低碳生活就是把生活作息时间所耗用的能量要尽量减少，从而减低二氧化碳的排放量。低碳生活，对于我们这些普通人来说是一种生活态度。它给我们提出的是一个愿不愿意和大家共创造低碳生活的问题。)Taomi Shui can be used to wash their hands every day, clean furniture, water the flowers and so on. Clean, natural moisture; 2. Scrap paper will pave the lowest in the closet can not only absorb moisture, can absorb the smell in the closet; 4. Drink tea residue, dry it, make a tea pillow comfortable, and help to improve sleep;(每天的淘米水可以用来洗手、擦家具、浇花等。干净卫生，自然滋润； 2.将废旧报纸铺垫在衣橱的最底层，不仅可以吸潮，还能吸收衣柜中的异味；4.喝过的茶叶渣，把它晒干，做一个茶叶枕头，既舒适，又能帮助改善睡眠；)Lifestyle to reduce energy consumption when, thereby reducing the carbon, especially carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for us ordinary people, an attitude, not ability, we should actively promote and to practice the "low carbon" life, pay attention to energy saving, fuel-efficient, water saving, solar terms, starting from scratch.(生活作息时所耗用能量要减少，从而减低碳，特别是二氧化碳的排放。低碳生活，对于我们普通人来说，是一种态度，而不是能力，我们应该积极提倡并去实践"低碳"生活，注意节电、节油、节水、节气，从点滴做起。) Topic sentence 1____has become a common part of people 's life. 空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象 2And______has always aroused the greatest concern. 空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象 3what impress es us most is ______ 现象的具体表现 4The reason _____are varied 过渡句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因作铺垫 5_______among_____-the ______various reasons,______plays an important role.原因之一 6That is to say,_____ 具体说明原因一 7What is more ,_______原因二 8For example,________ 举例说明原因二 9When talking about _______,_______ 空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。 10 On the one hand _______ 支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面 11 On the other hand_______理由问或第二个方面。 一、议论文 开头段： 1、When talked about--- ,the overwhelming majority of people are of the opinion that---- but others think a little bit differently that------- 2、There has been a heated discussion about-----Some people think that-------( 正观点)，
英语作文素材
英语作文素材 Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There're also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies. In my opinion, it's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way. Today , I'll talk about going online. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable. Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to use the computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English . We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us clever in playing computer games. I can send e-mails to our friends quickly. It can help us keep in touch with people from all over the world. But some students spend too much time in playing computer games and some stay in the net bars all day and all night. As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons and they don't study well any more. I think we mustn't go online when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winter holidays. All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. How to make friends It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you
英语段落的展开与技巧——段落的组成
英语段落的展开与技巧——段落的组成 段落的组成 根据题目的要求，短文写作主要包括三个段落。 第一段：通常要求考生阐述对于一个观点的理解，或者对一个观点进行反驳，或者对图画的主要信息进行描述。这个段落不必太长，三到四个句子就可以了。 第二段：通常要求考生对图画的意义进行解释，或者要求对一个现象进行原因解释，或者举例说明观点合理性。这个段落需要在内容上适当延伸，需要五到七个句子完成。 第三段：通常要求考生提出一些建议措施，或者对观点进行归纳，或者对现象进行前途预测。该段落大约需要四到五个句子完成。 好的段落必须是意思完整，语义连贯，完全体现文章主旨中心，同时又是层次分明，结构严谨，逻辑关系应用合理的。以下主要讨论各种段落的基本创作思路和变化。一个段落由三部分组成：主题句、扩展句和结尾句。主题句用来点出段落的主题(谈论什么);扩展句用来说明和支持主题;结尾句用来得出结论。 1.主题句 1)主题句的位置 主题句一般位于段首，也可置于段尾或段中，考生最好放在段首。 (1) 位于段首。在英文中，大部分段落的第一句便是主题句。开门见山地提出问题，后面的扩展句围绕主题句加以说明、支持、补充和解释。 例如： An important part of police strategy, rapid police response is seen by police officers and the public alike as offering tremendous more obvious ones are the abilities of police to apply first aid life saving techniques quickly, and the greater likelihood of arresting people who may have participated in a crime. It a ids in identifying those who witnessed an emergency or crime as well as in collecting evidence. The overall reputation of a police department too is enhanced if rapid response is consistent and this in itself promotes the prevention of crime. Needless to say rapid response offers the public some degree of satisfaction in its police force. (2) 位于段尾。主题句位于段尾便于总结全段的内容，给读者以深刻的印象，是写作中的一种演绎方法。 例如： At present rates of demand, the world has enough oil to last for more than 40 years, enough gas for more than 60 years and enough coal for more than 230 years. Naturally, demand will increase; but so will reserves as companies explore more widely and costs fall. Since 1970 viable reserves of oil have almost doubled while those of gas have leapt three-fold. One distant day a crunch will come, but as it approaches fossil-fuel prices will rise, making alternative forms of energy, perhaps including nuclear power, is no reason to spend on nuclear now. (3)位于段中。位于段中的主题句起承上启下的作用，这类主题句多起转折作用，一般由“but，however，yet，anyhow，nevertheless”等词连接，用于引起下文。 例如： What we teach ourselves sometimes，indeed，is more useful than what we learn from great men had little or no these great men probably studied harder by themselves than most boys do in greatest minds do not necessarily of those who have never been able to distinguish themselves at school，have been very successful in life has been said that Wellington and Napoleon were both dull boys at school，and so were Newt on and Albert Einstein. 2)写好主题句的方法 文章是否切题是路线性、方向性的问题。英语中的一致性(unity)原则要求每段只能有一个中心思想或主题，只能说明某一件事或某一个问题等，具体体现为要求段落“中心突出”。段落的中心思想或主题通常概括为一个主题句(topic sentence);其他各句称为支持句或从属句(supporting sentences)，将主题思想充分展开。概括地说，“中心突出”要求主题句与段落中其他各句统一，从意义上体现段落的完整性。 例如： Ever since this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. In fact, it has exerted great influence on our life and behavior. Electrical household appliances are making people more and more lazy. TV has been depriving children
英语作文素材
比如舅舅最长提到的考研阅读中的一个长难句：is difficult to the point of impossibility for the average reader under the age of forty to imagine a time when high-quality arts criticism could be found in most big-city newspapers.分析： It is difficult to A for B to imagine C. It is difficult to the point of impossibility = extremely difficult 极度的困难 用在作文中是不是瞬间显得高大上了。 2018.11.9 今天舅舅继续提供两句作文素材给大家，希望大家认真学习，背过，尝试用在自己作文里面哦 1.In those far-off days，it was taken for granted that the critics of major papers would write in detail and at length about the events they covered. 分析： In those far-off days 在那些远去的日子里 写作文的时候可以替换成in the past，来表示时间流逝的感觉。 2.Behind the scenes, they have been taking aim at someone else: the accounting standard-setters . 重点内容“behind the scenes”可以用在作文里面，表转折。例如用在图表作文中，开头先描述图表内容，而之后要描述所承载的道理和原因，那么就可以用此做连接。