高考短文改错真题

第三部分写作（共两节满分50分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改

1 陕西2006

Dear Anish,

Here are the information about Manchester University. 76.

It is about 200 miles far away from London,and it 77.

has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 78.

or near the school.They have all sorts of course. 79.

I’m sure you will find one you like it. I know you 80.

are particuiar interestes in Human Rights. So I will 81.

see that there is anything on their website(网址)。82.

I’ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 83.______

When you arrived.You mat him a few years ago,but he 84.______

Has changed a lot since them,Both your aunt or l ollk 85.______

Forward to seeing you again.

See you soon.

Pat

2 陕西2007

Are the years you spent at school best years of you life? 76．____

Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 77．____

sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 78．____

were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask 79．____

us difficult questions. We also had to do plenty of homework, and 80．____

hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of 81．____

rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 82．____

at the publie library, and late I decided to attend college. Now 83．____

I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I84．____

Want it. When I was at school. I was just the wrong age! 85．____

3 陕西2008

John Brown is a London taxi driver who love going to the 76. loves

theatre .Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play. 77. √

The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some 78. for

reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He 79. terrible wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it, So two hours 80. 去掉it before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of 81. tickets

his taxi, Perhaps someone who wanted ∧see the play would take them. 82. to . However, while John went back home, the tickets were 83. when

still there. In the fact ,there were four tickets on the seat. 84. 去掉the Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them! 85. had

4 陕西2009

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. 1. _______

She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked ^ up to 2. ________

look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on 3. ________ his T-shirt! 4. ________

I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister 5.________

wanted ^ get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop 6._______ assistant came over to us. It w\asturned out to be her own cup, 7._______ that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly 8.______ as embarrassing as my sister, which 9. _______ for I just thought it was funny! 10______

5 陕西2010

Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park

near my home，I came across a crew make a new film 1______

with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera 2______

with me at that time，but I rushed back home to 3_______

get∧．Unfortunately，by the time I got back，4_______

they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t 5_______

be seen everywhere．I was really 6________ disappointing and about to leave when he walked 7________

out∧a building．He was right there in 8________

the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only 9________

did I had my photo taken with him，10________

but he signed his name on my shirt!

6 陕西2011

Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .

This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for su ch a 76.

long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve 77.

soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78.

many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79.

friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80.

is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.

usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.

that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83.

we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There ,Katia 84.

will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been 85.

to China several times. I just can’t wait.

四川2008

As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are 56. _____

trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But 57._____

I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from 58._____

home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed 59._____

to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When 60.____

they came here, I will show them around my university 61. _____

and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them 62. ____

some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My 63._____

parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time 64._____

that I did anything special to express my thanks. 65._____

四川2009

Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat 66.

with them. The first man got over his shock and politely said to 67.

The angel, “I’ve suffered by back pain for years. Can you help68.

me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered. 69.

The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel 70.

could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes, 71.

but he could see everything clearly. 72.

The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands 73.

in fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries. “I’m on disability pay!74.

I don’t want to be a normally person!”75.

四川2010

An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66.__________ learn to drive. And after many attempts, she past her 67.__________ driving test and told her husband that, to celebrate, he 68. __________ was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But 69. __________ then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70. __________ they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71. __________ mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well, it’s all because72. __________ of the business of driving on right.” she said, “I have 73. __________ been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t 74. __________ get used to it—in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples.”75. __________

四川2011

Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66.

Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67.

fire him if he didn’t start coming on time, but he went to 68.

the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69. medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70.

The man did is told and slept really well, wake up before 71.

the alarm had even gone off. He had time for a properly 72. breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.” Boss,” he 73.

said ,”that medicine really works!” I’m pleasing to hear 74.

it ,”said his boss,” but where were you yesterday?” 75.

全国2007

Dear Grandpa,

Thank you for your letter.

My school is organizing a basketball team and

there' s just a chance which I can join it. I'm little of 76. ______

course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others 77. _______

are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs 78. _______

and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing but 79. _______

in the playground in the afternoon with the tree 80. _______

around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing 81. _______

and shouting. These are the happier girls I' ve ever 82. _______

seen and I' m the happiest in all! 83. _______

I meant to write long letter and tell you all the 84. _______

things I' m doing at school, but the bell was ringing, 85. _______

so I just have to stop here.

Love,

Judy

全国2008

If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 76. ___________

29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my 77.___________ English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitor. 78. ___________ Second, I will learn more about history of the 79. __________ Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, 80. __________ since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find 81. __________ their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell 82. __________ visitors about our history and culture and show 83. _________ them their great achievements. In short, I will do 84._________ my best to help making the Games a success. 85. _________

全国 2009

Hi Susan,

I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your 76______

bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it 77______

back to you before four in the afternoon, and I 78______

was hold up on my way back. Just before I 79______

turned corner of Park Street, I happened to 80______

see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her 81______

mother needed help. So I helped them going to 82______

the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and 83_______

a half hour and made sure that the girl was all 84______

right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I 85_______

hope you understand.

Thank you!

Li Ling

全国2010

Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about

Her except for that she was strang . she didn’t talk many .her hair was black

much

and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the

wore even

summer .she was ,infact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what

attractively to

the rest if us thought about her .like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really

classmates

want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry projiect

close our together that I begin to uanderstand why christine dressed the way she did .

begin

全国2011

It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______ back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______

your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______

we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______

where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______

of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________

another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________

work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________

was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______ our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______

Yours,

Mike