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雅思小作文流程图句型分析

雅思小作文流程图句型分析
雅思小作文流程图句型分析

雅思小作文流程图句型分析

朗阁海外考试研究中心

从近两年的雅思写作考试趋势来看,不少烤鸭们已经注意到流程图和地图题考试比例的增加。事实上,随着近年来雅思考试难度的逐年提升,流程和地图题的比例势必要比之前更多一些。并且雅思考试在写作部分将更严格地从避免考生模板化出发,进行客观评分。流程图(Flow Chart)的考试目的为:让考生对某种事物的变化过程或者物品的制造过程进行地道的英语语言描述。考生之所以觉得流程图不好得分,一是由于图中会出现一些专业词汇,无法很好地理解图中画的内容。也就是说,当需要具体表达步骤的时候,许多动词不知道如何表达(比如剑六中的蚕产卵吐丝的题目就有相当多的专有名词)。另外就是考生在主体段的写作中句型单一,影响了作文分数。这就导致了一部分考生在考试时一遇到流程图,就大呼自己人品差。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们认为,流程图词汇目前现有的补充资料已经相对齐全,因此如何很好地丰富(variety)句型绝对是考生们值得研究和能够帮助加分的部分。接下来,朗阁专家将就流程图的句型变化问题做深入的探讨和分析。

句型一:被动句

被动句应该是流程图写作的灵魂句式,因为被动句在英文表述中有较强的信息功能。在常规的句子描述中,主位一般是描述句子的出发点,也是描述事件的基础,作者根据主位来组织成分。而句子中的述位则是对句子的描写说明。被动句的做法通常是把述位提升到主位的位置,进而对述位进行突出和强调。这样不仅可以维持信息的科学性和简洁性,而且能够确认信息的精准度。雅思考试的流程图里,描写的正是具有科学性质和客观性的内容。因此,使用被动句再为合适不过。其中,剑桥真题中关于巧克力制作的一道流程图中,第四步到第八步的流程描写如下:

Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

在上文的描述中,每个句子都用到了被动语态,其表述上,突出了被描述主体the brown beans这个原材料。如果上文的文章替换了原来的主述位,把原本的主语突出出来,那就会变成:

Next, the sun dries the bean. We put them in large sacks and transport them to another place by train or lorry. After this, the workers send them to a chocolate factory and there an oven roasts the beans at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

这样比对之后,考生们就会发现,主述体们非常的别扭。表意上变成“太阳主动晒咖啡豆”,“我们把咖啡豆放在一个大袋子里”等。这些“we”和“the workers”等主语是为了维持主动状况,不得已提出的,并且也是图中并未出现的主语内容。此类信息的出现,不仅冗余,而且和动作表述不符,更没有突出流程的图形里咖啡豆才是主体这个事实。在分析完必须使用被动语态的情况外,笔者还要提醒考生们,被动语态的使用看似简单,但是依旧有使用方法的部分需要注意:

1. 时态:主要为一般现在时及现在完成时的被动语态,即:am/is/are+过去分词;have/has +been+过去分词。

2. 单复数:一般视题目而定考虑主语情况单复与否,全文应及时变动单复情况。

3. 过去式和过去分词的差别,如:break-broke-broken, dispread-dispread-dispread, leap-leapt-leaped, light-lit-lighted等。

句型二:祈使句

英语学习的启蒙即为祈使句。尽管祈使句在作用上体现为要求、请求或命令、劝告、叮嘱、建议别人做或不做一件事。但当具体用到雅思考试的流程图里的时候,更多是表达流程形式的客观性和确定性。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家认为,祈使句的写法能够给读者带来犹如看产品说明书的感觉,因为祈使句的对象为第二人称,这就和流程图的写作目的趋向一致了。下面是范文中出现的祈使句的情况:

1. Next, heat the waste and let the bacteria reproduce fast, with which the

organic waste can be decomposed and became garden fertiliser after 6 months.

2. Next, remove the green plants in the middle and put a container there. Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place two stones on both ends of it to secure its position.

3. First of all, prepare a plastic container which has four holes for ventilating the air.

祈使句句子难度不高,但要求考生掌握一些有关流程动作的动词,如:ignite、press、spin、draw等。

句型三:不定式&动名词结构

流程图写作时,因主语相对单一,基本以流程原材料或者工具和用具等为主,使用不定式或者动名词做主语和宾语表语,还能丰富主语,避免中式写法。但是,考生在用不定式和动名词句子的时候,切记要分清楚两者的使用情况,即:动名词更突出状态、已发生、抽象的流程步骤,而不定式则更突出目的、结果、具体即将发生的事件,不要出现误用的情况。如果考生觉得此点有困难,可以参照一些语法书的范本进行练习(推荐剑桥语法书《grammar in use》)。下面是一些范文中使用不定式和动名词格式的例子:

1. According to the figure, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on its bottom.

Be to结构表示目的。

2. Using this way to turn the organic waste into garden fertiliser is environmentally friendly.

动名词做主语使用using避免两个动词的问题出现。

3. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas, has to be dug up by a digger.

此处用不定式表示将要被挖。

句型四:定语从句

大部分考生对于定语从句并不陌生,而定语从句在流程图中既可以使用限制性的定语从句进行修饰,也可以使用非限制性的定语从句进行补充说明。而限制性定语从句的情况通常出现在对于描述主体在流程进行过程中发生变化的情况,为了说明原材料发生变化而进行的特定修饰。另外,非限制性定语从句主要是在流程顺序进行的过程中作为连接手段来使用。常用的连接词有:where、which、in which、before which、after which。下面给出一些例子来讲解不同的使用情况:

1.Chocolate is sent to oven, where it is heated and turned into liquid.

这里使用where和in which或者after which都可以表示在oven这个步骤之后,巧克力被加热成液体的情况,很好地替代了after that+下一个步骤的单一表达。

2. First, the life of the silkworm starts from eggs propagated by the moth, and it takes 10 days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves.

本句使用的则是限制性定语从句,that后面的从句对前文的silkworm larva进行修饰,说明吃桑叶的蚕。本句中使用的定语从句既能说明图中描述的步骤也能对蚕的情况进行细化。

3. Place N is located in the urban area of the G town, which may have more population and business.

本句同样是对前文进行的补充说明,但是这个which后面引导的情况可能是图中没有出现的,而是作者根据客观情况进行的相应总结。

4. Next, heat the waste and let the bacteria reproduce fast, with which the organic waste can be decomposed and became garden fertilizer after 6 months. 本句是介词+关系词的典型定语从句,表示的是图表中示意的伴随情况。本句表达的伴随后因内容比较复杂所以加上从句进行详细解说,否则单纯的with做伴随容易丢掉有机废料被组合变成化肥的被动状态。

句型五:状语从句

许多考生熟练使用状语从句却不知道状语的用途。状语是修饰动词、形容词、副词用的;那么有主谓结构的句子担任的状语就称之为状语从句了。状语从句的位置相对灵活:既可置于句首,也可置于句末。状语关系大约有9种:时间、地点、原因、目的、结果、伴随、方式、让步和条件。由从属连词所引导,那么状语从句出现在流程图中的情况大约也有9种情况。但是因为状语从句的难度不高,所以目前考生在考试中使用的概率比较高,也相对较少出错。下面是状语从句的一些例子:

1. When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants.

本句引导时间状语从句。常见的流程图时间状语模式句子有许多,诸如:add…into…when…is… / the…is purified from…after the procedure of… / when…is ready, place it for…to… / when the production is finished, the prepared A are finally bind up with…。除了when之外,其他一些关联词也在流程图中引导同样的时间状语,并不一定以从句的形式出现,其中包括了:as, while, as soon as, hardly...when, no sooner...than, whenever, before, after, till, until, the moment, by the time, every time, once等。

2. A third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part.

本句是so that引导的结果状语从句,这类句子在流程图中写到的机会稍低。

3. There is a rule when putting waste into the container, food at the bottom within 15 centimeters high, grass at the middle and newspaper at the top within 15 centimeters high altogether, in order to make an optimum environment for different bacteria reproducing.

本句相对比较复杂,引导目的状语从句。首先,there be句型中引入when引导的时间状语,时间状语里带着4个方位描述,waste into the container / food at the bottom

within 15 centimeters high / grass at the middle / newspaper at the top within 15 centimeters high。其中两项内容分别用within伴随了高度信息,后半句才表达了目的是为细菌的再生长培养环境。

句型六:分词结构

分词结构对大部分考生来说是个难点,因为考生经常疑惑什么情况下可以使用分词结构,以及使用分词结构的时候到底应该选择-ing形式还是-ed形式。这里我们所提到的流程图分词结构,通常是现在分词或者过去分词做状语的情况。当然,并不是所有的句子都可以使用现在分词做状语。一般情况下来看,我们认为,当一个主语带有两个以上的谓语时,如果其中一个是主动词,其他的两个或者两个以上动作具备状语关系,如果状语动作是主语做出来的,就用现在分词;如果主语是该动词的动作对象,那么该动词就用过去分词。当然,状语关系中考生必须明确哪个是主体,哪个是状语内容,这样才不会本末倒置,突出非重点语素。这类的分词结构可以替换传统的状语从句,成为变化语用的新典型。从而在评分标准中的GRA(grammatical range &accuracy)项目上争取高分。下面,我们来分析几个例子:

1. Place M is near the A and B Town with total population of 23 million, far outnumbering the overall population of D and E town, with 12 million.

本句中far outnumbering其实做的是前半句的结果状语,原句的情况应该是:Place M is near the A and B Town with total population of 23 million, which far outnumbered the overall population of D and E town, with 12 million. 但因为该句中非限制性定语从句其实意义上体现前半句人口说完后的补充结果,所以认为是结果状语从句的变形。

2. Mixed with new liquid glass, the compound is finally moulded into solid glass, which, afterwards, will be sent to various customer supermarkets for selling. 本句的“mixed with new liquid glass”部分,因为mix和mould有先后时间关系,因此认为这两个动作是时间状语体现。又因为mix和主语compound的关系是被动的,因此分词结构写的是mixed而不是mixing。

3. After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. 本句应当是大部分考生们觉得困难的地方。许多考生一直不明白having和being这类的词在非进行时的情况下怎么使用。事实上,如果还原成原句,相信考生们非常熟悉:After the beans are roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. 这样的写法是一般写法,但是我们发现,这个写法上,the beans在短时间内出现了2次,非常重复。于是,我们只保留一个主语,前面把动词are改成了现在分词结构,即例句中出现的being。这样解释,考生们就会清晰很多了。

通过以上六大主要句型的解析和举例,考生们只要按照句型分别练习,下一次碰到流程图势必成竹在胸。只要把每种句型扎实练好,句型得分一定有所保证。试想小作文以150个字每个句子15个左右的单词计算,实际小作文的句子数量也就是在10-12个左右,那么主体段的句子数量也就8句话上下。六类句型如能交替使用,基本不会出现大量句子重复的情况。总而言之,语言考试不是一朝一夕的任务,需要烤鸭们花时间慢慢逐个堡垒攻破。流程图对于考生们而言或许曾经是难点,希望在本系列文章之后,能见到考生们再创高分奇迹!

2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文:废纸回收

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雅思写作流程图

流程图1.首段常用句子 The following diagram shows the structure of……The picture illustrates…… The whole procedure can be divided into…stages. It mainly consists of…… It works as follows. It always involves following steps. 2.描述流程/过程的常用过渡性词语 最后再总结一下流程图的特点: 特点一:现在时 特点二:定语从句 特点三:被动语态 特点四:顺序词 特点五:适当添加 特点六:无总结

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范文1: This diagram illustrates the recycling process of glass bottles. The whole process is a cycle which can be divided into three main stages. In the first stage, used bottles are collected at a recycling point ready to be transported by a truck. The second stage starts in a cleaning plant, where these recycled bottles are sorted by color into green, brown and clear ones and washed by high-pressurized water. When the cleaning is done, the bottles are conveyed to a glass factory where they are cut into glass pieces which are then poured into a furnace. After being heated in the furnace, the broken glasses are melted into liquid, which flows into a glass mold. Here glass liquid from other sources is added and the molding process takes place. In the final stage, new, empty bottles are filled with liquid, then packed and dispatched to the supermarket ready to be picked by consumers. At this point, a cycle has been completed and a new cycle will begin.

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