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八年级英语作文改错

自行车在北京仍然受欢迎,骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……,又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢?为什么?

Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.

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