如何写主题句
如何写主题句？
肯定句
Example：The need for wildlife protection is greater now than ever before．
主题句出现的位置：
段首
如何写好主题句
1）要写合乎语法的句子
Example 1：Two causes of the American Civil War．
这个句子是个不完整的句子，不合乎语法，因此不能用作主题句。
Example 2：There were two causes that led to the American Civil War．
重写后的句子合乎语法，是个较好的主题句。
2）要使用限写词限定主题
为了正确表达观点，好的主题句经常使用关键词或词组，即限制词（controllers）限制这一观点。
Example 3：Air travel is more convenient than train for at least three reasons．
从上例主题句我们得知作者将要写“air travel”（topic），他将要把“train”（aspect）和“ air travel”作比较，并且陈述“reasons”。由此可见，作者在“aspect”（方面）和“reason”（原因）两方面限制他的主题。
3）要注意主题的可写性
所定的主题不能太笼统，也不能太具体。
Example 4：In Hemingway's story “Soldier’s Home”，Krebs tells his mother that he wants no part of God's Kingdom．
这个句子太具体以至于无东西可写，无法展开段落。
Example 5：In Hemingway's st ory “Soldier’s Home”，Kreb is a lonely，cynical veteran．
这个句子可作为主题句，因为可以围绕“lonely，cynical”展开段落。
Example 6：Let me tell you something about overpopulation．
这个句子太笼统，作为一个段落的主题太大，难于驾驭。
如何写论据
论证方法：
同一段可以使用多个论证手段
但是：
不是说每一段都得使用到这几种，将论证方法分散到你的论据中。不要成了填空式作文。
1.扩展主题句
（基本句型）
1. 扩展主题句：
A: 同义替换
1. in other words换言之
2. that is to say也就是说
3. to be more precise说的具体一些
4. by … I mean 我的意思是
5. this means…这意味着
6. Namely
主题句中的名词讲清楚---抽象名词具体化
The cost of living has been steadily rising in the past decades.
Food prices, clothing costs, housing expenses, and tuition fees annually increased by 5.59% over the period of 1995 to 2008.
TS:
For one thing, offering academic knowledge can contribute to students’ achievement.
使用拓展主题句方法展开：
That is to say, in primary school, children should be instilled the ability of spell Chinese characters and basic mathematical knowledge which ensure them mastering the common sense in daily life and offering the first step of further education.
展开支持句的方法：
1.因果展开
An advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially.
展开句：they learn how to make friends with other children of a similar age. This is often not possible at home because their brothers or sisters are older or younger.
Car companies should help people better understand electric cars.
展开句：As fuel prices are very high, people will buy electric ares if they know that electric cars save them money in the long term.
The internet is the key to the knowledge and information available in the world today.
展开句：Therefore, it is important that children learn to use the equipment with confidence.
2.举例展开
We need to improve the public transport services available to travelers
展开句：For example,if better underground train systems were built and maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be reduced.
Children need to develop social skills.
展开句：A good way for them to do this is through activities such as team sports and playing with other children.
举例子常用短语
1. I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the fact that more and more young people are finding it easier to get jobs.
2. A good case in point is Wuhan, which has a pedestrian shopping street.
3. Take my father as an example.
4. to illustrate, as an illustration
3. 对比展开
People today are less active than they used to be.
展开句：Most adults relax by watching television or browsing the Internet, while children play video games instead of playing sports.
Young people who pass directly from school to university have limited experience of the world.
展开句：By contrast, those who have spent some time traveling to other places have a broader view of life.
对比论证Comparison and contrast
A：具体情况反对对比
B: 过去和现在的对比
Should young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible?
TS:
At the contemporary society, moral guidance should be offered by parents to ensure those young fellows to refrain from misleading by inappropriate materials.
第一句：如果年轻人没有适当的保护直接面对社会上所有的诱惑，他们就会
比和父母生活在一起的同龄人更有可能走上犯罪道路。
If young adults are exposed without proper protection from their parents to all the temptations and evils of society, they are more likely to fall into a life of crime than people of the same age who still live with their parents.
第二句：转折
相反，对于那些依然和父母生活的年轻人来说，他们会知道当他们有困难的时候该怎么做。
Conversely, for those who still stay with their families, they might be informed of correct ways when they are in trouble.
论据综合实例
Some people think that news media is negative for society, what is your opinion?
The news media is the only way for the public to be informed of a variety of useful knowledge in information society and there is no substitute at the moment.
In the past, and individual had to deal with very few things within one day and therefore it was possible for him to know what happened around him in person. But nowadays, with the trend of globalization, he could virtually do nothing without the news media. For example, the news stories about the education policies abroad and the overseas studying experience have addicted parents and their children to select the suitable universities before they have not got the opportunity to visit the country involved.
4.类比展开
It gives pupils more opportunity to choose subjects freely.
展开句：For example, a much higher proportion of girls study science when they attend girls’ schools than girls in mixed school do. Similarly, boys in sing-sex schools are more likely to study languages, which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.
Top sports professionals are paid huge salaries.
展开句：Like film stars, they live in large houses and drive expensive cars.
5.让步展开
Many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous actors or singers 展开句：People，especially young people, buy goods that their favorite actors or singers advertise, although they do not really need the products.
Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy.
展开句：Even if we buy fresh without packaging, we still produce rubbish from plastic
bags.
6.假设展开
Security cameras can deter criminals.
展开句：If they see a security camera, they may think twice about breaking into a building or stealing a car.
We need to improve the public transport services available to travelers.
展开句：For example, if better underground train systems were built and maintained in our majors cities, then traffic on the roads would be reduced.
Stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of our working or leisure time.
展开句：If there were easy-to-reach sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives.
Government funding for public art projects should be continued.
展开句：Without such funding, cities and towns would be much less interesting and attractive.
If ......then may be likely to without..., .....would......
7.下定义展开
They are allowed to have whatever they want.
展开句：This means that the children grow up without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.
Those who have spent some time earning a living have a broader view of life.
展开句：They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research.
8.限定范围（取或舍）展开
The birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children.
展开句：These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want.
Cars owners can also help to reduce pollution.
展开句：They can take public transport rather than driving whenever possible.
让步段的写法
必須指出
让步段是问题的次要方面
或者有解决方案
学生是否应该兼职？
Thesis：Students should take part-time jobs.
Point 1: Students can make some money.
Point 2: Students can get some working experience.
Concession:
Admittedly, taking a part-time job may have some disadvantages. For instance, if students spend excessive time on part-time jobs, their academic performance might drop. However, I still think the benefits of part-time jobs overweigh the negative effects.
如何写末段：
宗旨：重申总论点和最重要的分论点
结构：
首词（表示总结的关联词）+重申总论点+补充说明
议论类的关联词
In a nutshell/in sum/all in all/ in conclusion/
It is an inescapable conclusion that
When all the factors are examined, we may safely come to the conclusion that
From what has been discussed above, we can see that (it is obvious that，personally, I firmly hold that）….
二. 问题解决类文章的首词或首句（结尾段需要给出建议类型）Nevertheless, numerous solutions to this problem may be found.
From my point of view, what teenagers are in urgent need of is to …
To relieve it, I wish to suggest three appropriate measures.
三.两边倒
1). 总论点+两面性不影响特性
2). 总论点+结合两方面
1).总论点+两面性不影响特性
There are various kinds of media used for communicating information, such as the theatre, films, comics. TV, radio and books. Which do you think is the most effective? How do you think about it?.......
In a word, TV has both its strengths and its weakness. Yet this two-sidedness does not prevent TV being the most effective of all the media in society today.
2). 总论点+结合两方面
Surveillance cameras------
All in all, the best solution is for both sides to respect each other’s needs. The shopkeeper should place surveillance cameras in such a way that the customer does not feel that he or she is being spied upon. At the same time, the customer should respect the shopkeeper’s concern about theft.
四.一边倒
1）总论点+最重要的分论点
2）总论点+否则
总论点+最重要的分论点
Death penalty-----
Personally, I am an opponent of the death penalty. Mistakes could be made which it is not possible to rectify. In addition, there is no evidence that the death penalty has the effect of reducing crime, which is surely the aim of punishment.
总论点+否则
Some people think that, as scientists contribute more to the development of our society than other people, science students get more financial support from the government than other students get. Do you agree or disagree? -------
In sum, the needs of science and arts students for higher education should be duly and equally addressed by the government. Otherwise not only would the world become much drier and duller, but society as a whole would develop in an unbalanced and distorted manner.
修改:
分论点是否跑题
段落间的连接，每句话间的连接
1）时间顺序：before/ prior to / after/ afterwards/ as soon as/ while
2）转折对比：though/ despite (the fact that)/ whereas/ compared with
3）因果关系
4）条件关系：
if / provided that / so long as/ unless
5) 递进关系：
in addition/ besides/ furthermore/ moreover
动词时态
名词主谓
冠词（可数名词作第三人称单数）
拼写
大小写
标点：
不建议使用的标点：! … “” ---
谨慎使用的？（）；
提倡使用的, .
阐述主题型例文
阐述主题型 阐述主题型常用句型 一、引出格言、谚语的常用句型 1.Here is an old saying…..It’s the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today. 2.One of our ancient philosopher said, …. Chinese people have always been holding their idea to be one of their stands of morality. 3.One of the great early writers said that…. 二、举例说明的常用句型 1.….., say/for example/ for instance/ for one, …. 2.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of …. 3.History/This nation/ Our society is filled with examples of …. 三、事实证明的常用句型 1.No one can deny/doubt/ignore/overlook the fact that…. 2.There’s considerable evidence that…../in favor of…. 3.The latest surveys/studies/polls conducted by…indicate/reveal/show/prove that… 4.Nothing could be more obvious than the evidence that…. 四、结论性结尾的常用句型 1.From what have been discussed above, we may come to/ reach/ draw the conclusion that…. 2.Taking into account all the factors, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that…. 3.In summary/ In conclusion /In a word/ In brief/ In short/ To sum up/ On the whole, it is important that….. 4.Personally/ As far as I am concerned/For my part/As for me, I am in favor of the former/ the latter. 阐述主题型例文 一、My View on Discount. 1.打折是商家吸引顾客的一种手段 2.近年来人们对商家打折的兴趣日趋减少 3.打折不是市场的万能药 模板： 第一段： Discount is_________________________________________(为什么要打折) But now___________________________________________(打折面临的困境) 第二段： There have been several reasons for this. For one thing, _____________________(原因一) For another,________________________________________________________(原因二) 第三段： In my view, discount is not a cure-all for sellers. ___________________________(我的态度) 例文： My View on Discount Discount is a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desire of purchasing. But now discount is losing its appeal after years’ craze about it. There have been several reasons for this. For one thing, customers are more mature and
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写作主题句
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主题句
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主题句注意事项
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2011年高考英语写作指导-主题句训练 要想概括段落的中心思想，反映作者的写作意图，我们必须借助一个概括性的句子，即主题句，它是段落的核心所在。所以，写好一个段落的前提便是写好主题句。 【活动教室】 Passage 1. 请根据段落其它信息推断总结出适当的主题句。 Clothes do not make the man. 人不在衣装。 1). From the chief executive to the office cleaner, everyone must accept this as the first priority over everything else in the company. In other words, everyone in the company must be sales oriented. The telephone operator the accounts clerk the storekeeper and everyone else must know how to handle enquires and customers politely, correctly. If the appropriate person is not around, the other staff should take orders if necessary, and even encourage order. The deliveryman must be willing to serve and please customers, and when called upon, he must be able to push and to show new products, accessories, etc. to get more sales for his company. Whether you are seeing hoses, hotel rooms, building contracts or exhibition services, you must ensure that you and your organization get enough sales, customers, clients, contracts or business to ensure a good regular inflow of income for your company. Everybody in the organization must understand that sales are the oxygen in the air that the organizational body breathes. Without sales the body dies quickly; with insufficient sales it dies slowly. 2). In other words, get the customer to reserve, to place orders in advance, and to sign a contract, to pay a deposit, or better still, to pay you in full before you acquire and deliver the product. Many hotels accept reservations for their rooms even before cons truction of the hotels is completed. Remember, you don’t have to buy before you sell. The biggest deals are made “no order”. Sold before you have them. 3)when you are really in an out of stock position, your sales people have to learn
如何写好主题句
如何写好主题句 2007年高考以来读写任务的“写作内容”都是三个要点, 三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点，不会离题，又显得层次清楚，能让阅卷老师一目了然。 段落的主题句其实就是一句过渡的话, 用来表达观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的经历，使上下文衔接得更加紧密。 ◆主题句的定义：段落主题句就是全段的核心，统帅全段，并决定全段的发展方向。全段其他句子都是围绕主题句，对其进行说明、支持或扩展的，这些句子称作“扩展句(supporting sentence)”。 ◆主题句的模式： 1.说出感受 （1）你读信后的感受（2012广州一模） I appreciate what you say and sorry to have caused you so much worry.I’m also touched that ..... (2) 你读完这个故事后的感受 After reading the passage,I was deep in thought ..... (3)你读完这篇演讲稿后的感受（2011广州一模） After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student who ....... 可以套用的模版： 1.After reading the passage,I was shocked and at the same time I felt sorry for ...... 2. After reading the passage，I'm really moved and learn a lot from ..... 3.From the story, we learn that ....... 4.I was deeply moved by........ It made me realize ......... 实战演练： （1）Tom来信说他现在学习压力大，请谈谈你读信后的感受。 （2）吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被评为“最美妈妈”，请谈谈你对此的感受。. 2.引出经历 （1）讲述一次想家的经历（11广东） Like Sam, each of us may have the experience of missing our family, me included. （2）. 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。 This reminds me of an unforgettable experience of my part-time job. I once had an experience of doing a part-time job in a summer vocation . (3)上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师（2012年广东高考） After reading this story，it suddenly reminds me of my respectable teacher Miss Wang，an English teacher who always carries a big smile on her face. 可以套用的模版： 1.The story reminds me of ...... 2.The story reminds me of my personal experience. 3.Taking_the_example_of_me,_I think it's not bad for Chinese parents to learn to be a little “westernized”！ 以我为例，我认为中国父母适当西化也是不错的事情。 4.There_are_some_examples_in our daily life, among_which_is the wasting of water.